After starting a thread about "detail", I just started to re-read my prologue.
And, oh dear, within a couple of paragraphs I describe a knight "mounting a horse".
This is a high-born POV - they will know different types of horse available. Colour might give an idea of breeding, status, or personality traits.
What a lost opportunity for a little detail!
So a quick search online for different types of horses recognised in the Mediaeval period:
Medieval Horse Breeds
Horses in the Middle Ages - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
My knight is now written as "mounting a chestnut courser".
Not a huge change, not overly detailed, but better than a plain, generic "horse" from a character POV who should know better.
And, oh dear, within a couple of paragraphs I describe a knight "mounting a horse".
This is a high-born POV - they will know different types of horse available. Colour might give an idea of breeding, status, or personality traits.
What a lost opportunity for a little detail!
So a quick search online for different types of horses recognised in the Mediaeval period:
Medieval Horse Breeds
Horses in the Middle Ages - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
My knight is now written as "mounting a chestnut courser".
Not a huge change, not overly detailed, but better than a plain, generic "horse" from a character POV who should know better.