Prefx
Lord of the City-Within
- Joined
- Aug 24, 2005
- Messages
- 285
I plan to become more active in this area again once I come back from Disney World (at the end of this month). It will be my first trip there in ever, and the third time I've gone to Florida. I'm excited, of course. It's a little late for me, physically, I guess, but in my mind I'm still a kid.
Anyway, here's a medium-large excerpt (though I hope not overly large).
Manson
The church watching over him was the last house of God in the world.
All other Protestant residences had been destroyed by the riots of '52. Even after so many years between those events and now, Manson could still remember the cloud of smoke digging through the city streets and turning the sky a shade of drab gray. He recalled there being none such smell in the world, the smell of a dying faith. When the dust had finally cleared, twenty-seven great buildings were set aflame by angry mobs looking to blame someone for the Technocracy's absence in the spreading hunger. As befitted all places that sat north of the Poseidon River, St. John's House of Christ remained unburnt. The Technocracy had fallen before the entire city broke out in war, sparing the older districts from being torched by the angry Gaeans.
Thirty-one years later, and the building Manson grew up to admire now swallowed its share of old age and concrete-thick mud. The grander that was once there had disappeared almost entirely. Manson prayed before the standing cross with all his heart devoted to the lost religion of his forefathers. With a son to claim as his own, Manson asked the Lord Christ to grant him the same trip to paradise his parents underwent twelve years ago. He was sixty-three and had been spared by none of the symptoms associated with old age. More than anything else in the world, he feared death—he feared being wrong.
Only three believers still came to Sunday sermons these days: him, an elderly lady named Linda, and Father José, the peaceful and nimble priest who had been Manson's closest friend since childhood. They met each other while attending the Protestant Schoolhouse for Young Men. Back then hundreds of Christians still littered the streets, and bibles, scarce that they were, could still be carried in public without the owner having to fear for his life.
Today Father José draped himself in the same black robe and cape commonly associated with being a son of the Christian God. He stood aside the ivory cross with his head bowed. No one ever spoke during that first half-hour they were there. The only sound came from a row of lit candles place atop a Steinway grand piano. Their flames would slowly wither away as the wind swept between the cracks found in all four walls of the church house.
When at last Father José finished his prayers, the priest gave Manson a quick smile and took a seat at his left. The chair squeaked from the company of his weight.
"How's life been for you, old man?"
Manson squeezed the bridge of his nose. It was a nervous habit that had plagued him for many years. "Regular," he said. "And you?"
That seemed to displease his friend. "I'm fine." Father José's next words came after a long pause. "So . . . how's your son?"
"Oscar's fine." It was a lie. He turned his attention back to the cross and said a silent prayer.
Father José scratched the scars on his right cheek. "Something wrong, Manson? You look more troubled than usual."
Only if you knew.
"If there's something wrong, you can tell me," he went on to say.
Manson turned to the priest and searched his face for signs that this man was still his friend since long ago, that he was indeed the José Vargas who helped him through school and tragedy—and then would go on to say they were both one in the same. Of course it was silly to think of him as being someone else, but when his son left home three months ago out of spite, Manson felt like he was a different person altogether. While losing sight of himself, he thought he had also lost his friend.
However, the comforting smile Father José offered concluded this man was his friend.
Anyway, here's a medium-large excerpt (though I hope not overly large).
Manson
The church watching over him was the last house of God in the world.
All other Protestant residences had been destroyed by the riots of '52. Even after so many years between those events and now, Manson could still remember the cloud of smoke digging through the city streets and turning the sky a shade of drab gray. He recalled there being none such smell in the world, the smell of a dying faith. When the dust had finally cleared, twenty-seven great buildings were set aflame by angry mobs looking to blame someone for the Technocracy's absence in the spreading hunger. As befitted all places that sat north of the Poseidon River, St. John's House of Christ remained unburnt. The Technocracy had fallen before the entire city broke out in war, sparing the older districts from being torched by the angry Gaeans.
Thirty-one years later, and the building Manson grew up to admire now swallowed its share of old age and concrete-thick mud. The grander that was once there had disappeared almost entirely. Manson prayed before the standing cross with all his heart devoted to the lost religion of his forefathers. With a son to claim as his own, Manson asked the Lord Christ to grant him the same trip to paradise his parents underwent twelve years ago. He was sixty-three and had been spared by none of the symptoms associated with old age. More than anything else in the world, he feared death—he feared being wrong.
Only three believers still came to Sunday sermons these days: him, an elderly lady named Linda, and Father José, the peaceful and nimble priest who had been Manson's closest friend since childhood. They met each other while attending the Protestant Schoolhouse for Young Men. Back then hundreds of Christians still littered the streets, and bibles, scarce that they were, could still be carried in public without the owner having to fear for his life.
Today Father José draped himself in the same black robe and cape commonly associated with being a son of the Christian God. He stood aside the ivory cross with his head bowed. No one ever spoke during that first half-hour they were there. The only sound came from a row of lit candles place atop a Steinway grand piano. Their flames would slowly wither away as the wind swept between the cracks found in all four walls of the church house.
When at last Father José finished his prayers, the priest gave Manson a quick smile and took a seat at his left. The chair squeaked from the company of his weight.
"How's life been for you, old man?"
Manson squeezed the bridge of his nose. It was a nervous habit that had plagued him for many years. "Regular," he said. "And you?"
That seemed to displease his friend. "I'm fine." Father José's next words came after a long pause. "So . . . how's your son?"
"Oscar's fine." It was a lie. He turned his attention back to the cross and said a silent prayer.
Father José scratched the scars on his right cheek. "Something wrong, Manson? You look more troubled than usual."
Only if you knew.
"If there's something wrong, you can tell me," he went on to say.
Manson turned to the priest and searched his face for signs that this man was still his friend since long ago, that he was indeed the José Vargas who helped him through school and tragedy—and then would go on to say they were both one in the same. Of course it was silly to think of him as being someone else, but when his son left home three months ago out of spite, Manson felt like he was a different person altogether. While losing sight of himself, he thought he had also lost his friend.
However, the comforting smile Father José offered concluded this man was his friend.
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