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Let's see if I can get this broken up into parts so that it will post alright.
This was a response to a challenge which was:
The character of your choice prevents someone from committing suicide and then has to deal with the consequences.
Brielle
by Alliana and MythingLink
"Ya see, Herc, if you make the rope into a loop, twirl it around, and throw it, you can catch something!" Iolaus began twirling with his brand-new rope.
A scream reverberated throughout the canyon.
The two men walking side by side looked at each other and then ran to the edge of the ravine.
Looking down, they saw a young girl perched on a ledge of rock jutting out from the main wall, about 100 feet from where they were.
"Hold on! We'll help you up!" the demi-god shouted down.
"No!" the girl screamed. "Stay away!"
"We'll be careful," the hunter yelled.
"Don't come any closer!" The girl started moving towards the edge of the rock. "I'll jump!"
"Hercules," the shorter man said in surprise, "you don't think she's--" He gulped.
"Iolaus, the rope! Tie it around your waist!" Iolaus quickly caught on and did as Hercules asked. As soon as the last knot was tied, Hercules began to lower Iolaus down to the girl.
The girl looked up just then. "Don't come any closer! I'll jump!"
Iolaus saw the desperation and pleading in her eyes, and his heart melted. She was so young and beautiful-why in Tartarus would she want to kill herself?
"Don't move," he spoke in soothing tones. "I'm coming down to get you."
The girl began to cry--not for the first time that day, it seemed. "No," she sobbed. "I'm going to jump."
Iolaus drew in a quick breath as he saw how far down it was to the bottom of the ravine, even from where he was-it was about seven hundred feet. He was wondering how she had gotten down there in the first place, then decided it didn't matter. What mattered was getting the girl safe, even if she wanted to kill herself.
"Why do you want to jump?" he asked gently. Iolaus knew you should never tell them *not* to kill themselves, as it would only increase their determination. He was only about a third of the way down and he motioned to Hercules to go faster.
"Because life isn't worth living," the girl cried.
"What's your name?" he gently asked.
The girl sniffed, her nose running. "Brielle," she answered softly.
"Well, I'm Iolaus, Brielle. I'm sure you have family that loves you and would want to see you again."
"I have no one," she said bitterly.
"Do you--have any friends? Hey, I'm sure there's a lucky guy in your village, just waiting for you to return."
The girl began to cry harder and moved closer to the edge of the rock. "No! Wait!" Iolaus was about halfway down now and reached out a hand as if he could stop her. "Uh, are you sure you don't want to talk about it? Maybe there's something I can to do help you."
"Come on, Iolaus, you can do it," Hercules breathed. Hercules didn't dare let Iolaus down any faster. The rope that held him was beginning to fray as it rubbed on the sharp cliff edge.
"No one can help me. I have no one."
"Are you *sure* you don't want to talk about it?"
"Why should I?" she asked sourly. "So you can laugh at me? Just like everyone else!" She moved closer to the edge and Iolaus could see that the ledge she was standing on wasn't going to hold her very much longer.
"I'm *not* going to laugh at you." Iolaus was impatient. He was almost
there... "Brielle, *nothing* is worth killing yourself over. Okay, I'm gonna come down there and talk to you, okay? I'm just going to talk. I don't want you to jump."
Brielle closed her eyes and opened them again. She stepped closer to the edge.
"Brielle, wait!"
There was a breaking sound and Iolaus watched in horror as a crack appeared in the ledge. The section of the ledge Brielle was already standing on began to break away and fall into the abyss below. Iolaus felt himself being dropped suddenly. Before he knew what he was doing, he had grabbed Brielle's wrist.
The rock ledge crumbled away beneath her and tumbled down the side of the ravine.
"Don't let me go!" Brielle cried. "I don't want to die!"
Memories flashed through Iolaus' mind. The woman on the bridge. With her husband. How he hadn't been able to hold on and the woman had fallen to death in the river...
Iolaus gripped her wrist tighter. "Can you grab onto my legs?"
"I--I think so," she stammered.
"Try," urged Iolaus. "Bring your left arm up-that's good. Good. Now grab my leg. That's good."
"Iolaus!" It came from above. "Hurry! The rope's breaking!"
"I'm trying!" he yelled back. "Come on, Brielle, that's right. Grab onto my legs. Good. Now grab onto my arm." Iolaus used all of his strength to pull the girl up. She soon had her arms wrapped around his waist and Iolaus had his left arm around her, his right arm already on the rope. He yelled at Hercules to start pulling the rope up.
Brielle was sobbing quietly, holding on for dear life. Up this close, Iolaus could see just how blonde her hair was, and just how startling blue her eyes were. She was so young. Why?
Underneath his hand, Iolaus could feel the rope straining and breaking. "Uh, Herc? You might want to hurry up!"
"I know, Iolaus! I'm trying!"
"We're going to die," Brielle sobbed. "I'm going to die."
"No," Iolaus said sensitively. "You're not going to die. I promise. You know my friend up there? That's Hercules. You've heard stories about Hercules, right?"
She barely nodded. "Well, Hercules is a hero," Iolaus continued. "The strongest guy I've ever known. And he's going to pull us up. He won't let us fall." Part of the rope snapped. Brielle cried out again.
"Hey, hey, shhhh." Iolaus wished there was something else he could do to comfort her. Thankfully, they were going up much faster than he had gone down. "Hercules is my best friend. He won't let us die. I promise you."
Brielle looked up and finally met his eyes. What Iolaus saw caused him to take in a deep breath. There was no light, no hope in her eyes.
In a moment, Iolaus and Brielle were being hoisted onto solid ground by Hercules. Hercules and Iolaus looked at each other, but nothing was said vocally.
"Come on," Hercules said, putting his hand lightly on the girl's arm. "Do you live this way?" He pointed. Brielle nodded, keeping her head down. Hercules took his hand away and looked to Iolaus as if there might be some explanation for it all, but Iolaus just shrugged.
*****
End of Part 1
This was a response to a challenge which was:
The character of your choice prevents someone from committing suicide and then has to deal with the consequences.
Brielle
by Alliana and MythingLink
"Ya see, Herc, if you make the rope into a loop, twirl it around, and throw it, you can catch something!" Iolaus began twirling with his brand-new rope.
A scream reverberated throughout the canyon.
The two men walking side by side looked at each other and then ran to the edge of the ravine.
Looking down, they saw a young girl perched on a ledge of rock jutting out from the main wall, about 100 feet from where they were.
"Hold on! We'll help you up!" the demi-god shouted down.
"No!" the girl screamed. "Stay away!"
"We'll be careful," the hunter yelled.
"Don't come any closer!" The girl started moving towards the edge of the rock. "I'll jump!"
"Hercules," the shorter man said in surprise, "you don't think she's--" He gulped.
"Iolaus, the rope! Tie it around your waist!" Iolaus quickly caught on and did as Hercules asked. As soon as the last knot was tied, Hercules began to lower Iolaus down to the girl.
The girl looked up just then. "Don't come any closer! I'll jump!"
Iolaus saw the desperation and pleading in her eyes, and his heart melted. She was so young and beautiful-why in Tartarus would she want to kill herself?
"Don't move," he spoke in soothing tones. "I'm coming down to get you."
The girl began to cry--not for the first time that day, it seemed. "No," she sobbed. "I'm going to jump."
Iolaus drew in a quick breath as he saw how far down it was to the bottom of the ravine, even from where he was-it was about seven hundred feet. He was wondering how she had gotten down there in the first place, then decided it didn't matter. What mattered was getting the girl safe, even if she wanted to kill herself.
"Why do you want to jump?" he asked gently. Iolaus knew you should never tell them *not* to kill themselves, as it would only increase their determination. He was only about a third of the way down and he motioned to Hercules to go faster.
"Because life isn't worth living," the girl cried.
"What's your name?" he gently asked.
The girl sniffed, her nose running. "Brielle," she answered softly.
"Well, I'm Iolaus, Brielle. I'm sure you have family that loves you and would want to see you again."
"I have no one," she said bitterly.
"Do you--have any friends? Hey, I'm sure there's a lucky guy in your village, just waiting for you to return."
The girl began to cry harder and moved closer to the edge of the rock. "No! Wait!" Iolaus was about halfway down now and reached out a hand as if he could stop her. "Uh, are you sure you don't want to talk about it? Maybe there's something I can to do help you."
"Come on, Iolaus, you can do it," Hercules breathed. Hercules didn't dare let Iolaus down any faster. The rope that held him was beginning to fray as it rubbed on the sharp cliff edge.
"No one can help me. I have no one."
"Are you *sure* you don't want to talk about it?"
"Why should I?" she asked sourly. "So you can laugh at me? Just like everyone else!" She moved closer to the edge and Iolaus could see that the ledge she was standing on wasn't going to hold her very much longer.
"I'm *not* going to laugh at you." Iolaus was impatient. He was almost
there... "Brielle, *nothing* is worth killing yourself over. Okay, I'm gonna come down there and talk to you, okay? I'm just going to talk. I don't want you to jump."
Brielle closed her eyes and opened them again. She stepped closer to the edge.
"Brielle, wait!"
There was a breaking sound and Iolaus watched in horror as a crack appeared in the ledge. The section of the ledge Brielle was already standing on began to break away and fall into the abyss below. Iolaus felt himself being dropped suddenly. Before he knew what he was doing, he had grabbed Brielle's wrist.
The rock ledge crumbled away beneath her and tumbled down the side of the ravine.
"Don't let me go!" Brielle cried. "I don't want to die!"
Memories flashed through Iolaus' mind. The woman on the bridge. With her husband. How he hadn't been able to hold on and the woman had fallen to death in the river...
Iolaus gripped her wrist tighter. "Can you grab onto my legs?"
"I--I think so," she stammered.
"Try," urged Iolaus. "Bring your left arm up-that's good. Good. Now grab my leg. That's good."
"Iolaus!" It came from above. "Hurry! The rope's breaking!"
"I'm trying!" he yelled back. "Come on, Brielle, that's right. Grab onto my legs. Good. Now grab onto my arm." Iolaus used all of his strength to pull the girl up. She soon had her arms wrapped around his waist and Iolaus had his left arm around her, his right arm already on the rope. He yelled at Hercules to start pulling the rope up.
Brielle was sobbing quietly, holding on for dear life. Up this close, Iolaus could see just how blonde her hair was, and just how startling blue her eyes were. She was so young. Why?
Underneath his hand, Iolaus could feel the rope straining and breaking. "Uh, Herc? You might want to hurry up!"
"I know, Iolaus! I'm trying!"
"We're going to die," Brielle sobbed. "I'm going to die."
"No," Iolaus said sensitively. "You're not going to die. I promise. You know my friend up there? That's Hercules. You've heard stories about Hercules, right?"
She barely nodded. "Well, Hercules is a hero," Iolaus continued. "The strongest guy I've ever known. And he's going to pull us up. He won't let us fall." Part of the rope snapped. Brielle cried out again.
"Hey, hey, shhhh." Iolaus wished there was something else he could do to comfort her. Thankfully, they were going up much faster than he had gone down. "Hercules is my best friend. He won't let us die. I promise you."
Brielle looked up and finally met his eyes. What Iolaus saw caused him to take in a deep breath. There was no light, no hope in her eyes.
In a moment, Iolaus and Brielle were being hoisted onto solid ground by Hercules. Hercules and Iolaus looked at each other, but nothing was said vocally.
"Come on," Hercules said, putting his hand lightly on the girl's arm. "Do you live this way?" He pointed. Brielle nodded, keeping her head down. Hercules took his hand away and looked to Iolaus as if there might be some explanation for it all, but Iolaus just shrugged.
*****
End of Part 1