Blade Runner Fan-fiction

Frank Black

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Hello all. Don't know how many of y'all like the film Blade Runner,that modern , adult(meaning intelligent) scifi-masterpiece, and if you do, then perhaps you may enjoy some Blade Runner Fan-fiction. I wrote a short story, that was "published" on two Blade Runner devoted websites. I got some very positive remarks and thought maybe folks who visit this board may want to check it out. Please do, I'm a bit of an amatuer writer and any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated...perhaps giving me the impetus to start on my novel! Here is the link below:

It is 35 pages, so it may seem long, but it goes by pretty quickly..the begining is a tad long, but i needed to give the reader some background info..Thanks for your time!



http://www.brmovie.com/Fiction/SoG-00.htm
 
I'm gonna try something here, I copied the first chapter of my story, see if that sparks any interest..!




NOVEMBER, 2024

The rain fell hard. It descended from the slate gray sky with an almost divine purpose. Its inexorable intent was not only to cleanse the filth and disease of the physical manifestations that were its inevitable targets below the angry heavens, but also to cleanse the souls of those creatures who were caught in its righteous flood. For Sgt. Eddie Gray of the NYPD's fugitive/warrant squad, the rain had more of a darker purpose.

It sounded like nails being hammered on the lid of a metal coffin.

The metal coffin was a NYC Dept. of Structures and Retrofitting maintenance ground van that was parked in front of an ancient warehouse that had been taken over by squatters and assorted denizens of the city's underclass. Sgt. Gray and three other members of his team sat hunched together in the small confines of the van making the final preparations for the assault on the occupants of the third floor of the defunct warehouse. Here it would be determined the fate of not only his career, but those of the men he had assembled for this operation. He stroked his thick black mustache, lost in thought, oblivious, for the moment, of the incessant pounding of the rain on the van roof.

In the warehouse before them was a cell of the U.R.F.F., The United Replicant Freedom Front. The URFF was a loosely organized group of cells that were independently commanded and operated by those who believed that Replicants had the same inalienable rights as their human creators. Most of the cells advocated their beliefs by staging relatively non-violent protests and spreading their manifesto by NetLinks and by other forms of electronic and print resources. However, a significant percentage of these cells were becoming increasingly violent and armed not only with rocks and bottles, but with more lethal weaponry.

This cell now holed up in the antiquated building had been involved in a protest at an ancillary Replicant facility that produced internal components that were to be shipped off-world. It started out as a small, but vocal gathering that grew as the ranks swelled with protesters and the mob mentality swelled as well, resulting in violent clashes with URFF members and the facilities security staff, leaving scores injured, including two security personnel, who remain hospitalized and in grave condition a week after the riot. Dozens were arrested and the local cells split up and went underground.

One member of this particular cell was the daughter of a high-ranking U.N. diplomat and was actively recruited from her college campus. Her father claimed she was forcibly coerced into this radical organization, but others claim she voluntarily joined and frequently espoused the URFF's dogma on the college campus she attended. Sgt. Gray saw the Net pictures of her in revolutionary pose, fist in air, holding a low-tech shotgun at her side. He knew that she was fully immersed in the political culture of the URFF. She was present at the protest and was photographed hurling a Molotov cocktail type incendiary device at the security guards.

A warrant was issued for her arrest and she was to be apprehended just like any other criminal. However she was no ordinary criminal. Her father had serious juice and made it perfectly clear to the NYPD brass that his daughter was being brainwashed and therefore, not to be held accountable for her actions. Sgt. Gray figured that if she was apprehended and delivered to daddy in one piece, his career would take off in new directions and that of his team members as well. The other side of the equation was also obvious to Sgt. Gray and his fellow cops, if things went south and daddy's little girl was taken out in a hail of police gunfire or otherwise NOT delivered to daddy in one lovely piece, then the bowels of hell would open up and swallow them whole.

A brilliant flash of lighting startled Sgt. Gray back into reality. The flash briefly illuminated the faces of his team members. To Sgt. Eddie Gray, their faces, for an instant, looked chillingly like that of the living dead. He shuddered visibly and began to adjust his body armor. Det. Victor Ryez broke the long silence by yawning extravagantly and stretching his short arms. "Hey, Boss, why the hell would these jack heads decide to protest at a glorified spare parts store?" "Why not jump up and down in front of one of the big corporations that crank out the full-blown skin jobs?" Sgt. Gray studied the small, compact detective and replied "Vic, your guess is as good as mine. More than likely, the security staff at those major corps have a sophisticated security system and staff who aren't afraid to bang heads. And then some." Det. Ryez nodded in agreement and began to shift uncomfortably in the passenger seat of the van.

Det. Bill Scott drummed his fingers on the steering wheel, whistling tunelessly, scanning the street for any unusual activity, hoping their little surveillance gig would not be compromised. He hated waiting and wanted to start this machine rolling. His right-hand trailed down to the butt of his holstered weapon, his fingers gently caressing the pistol's magazine well. He saw himself as a man of action and secretly despised all of this sitting and waiting and planning ****. These URFF jack heads were here, Sgt. Gray's C.I. confirmed it and that was good enough for him. Det. Scott was on the job long enough to cultivate his own cadre of confidential informants and weed out the good from the bad. He trusted Eddie Gray's experience and that little snitch of his had a proven track record. The little ******* wasn't a registered C.I., but sometimes you had to circumvent the parameters of procedure to get to where you want to go.

Det. Graham Marks, his long frame painfully bent over a small laptop comnet, worked the comnet's keypad with grim determination. He wanted to make sure all of the information he had gathered on the URFF and its many scattered cells was accurate and that this particular cell's net info was properly distributed in hard data form. He had printed out the last page of data and began to work on setting up links to the various units of the NYPD that they might have to contact if things here went bad. He was a methodical man and left very little to chance. He felt he out of place among these grizzled street cops. He was a tech guy and cared little for the bravado and posturing that sometimes went along with the job of specialized units like this. When push came to shove, Det. Marks would do what he had to do and that was it. He knew the team members gave only a cursory glance at his information that he labored so intently to provide to them, but they were not complete cowboys, and he felt they did appreciate most of his efforts.

Sgt. Gray finished adjusting his body armor and shot a glance at Det. Marks. He knew Marks was worried. His long fingers drummed on the laptop in a somber, ominous beat. "Speak." That was all Eddie Gray had to say to the lanky Detective, who responded to the Sgt. with a litany of complaints.

"Well Boss, if this operation gets hot and heavy, we are by ourselves for a while. Emergency service units are all on assignments. EMS is in backlog with calls for service, and just about every sector in the surrounding area is out on some kind of job. Most likely due to this horrendous rain." Det. Marks fell silent, looking down at his laptop screen, trying to find some solace in the data that dotted the screen. Sgt. Gray sighed and began to scratch his head. He knew that this was a bad sign, that he should call off this gig and reschedule another time. Problem was, he didn't want to. They were all ready to go; even the reluctant Det. Marks could feel the charged energy in the air. It was now or never. There was an uncomfortable silence in the ground van. It was a heavy silence, like an invisible wet blanket that had descended from the ceiling and enveloped everyone in the van.

It was hard to breathe.

Sgt. Gray broke the oppressive quiet and announced in a hoarse, but commanding voice, "Okay people, lets do it." There was a sudden burst of activity inside the van, as if Eddie Gray's spoken words were a direct order from the mouth of God. The noise of men preparing for what could be described as war, was almost deafening inside the confines of the ground van.

Det. Ryez was barely audible over the din of automatic weapons being charged and rounds being forced fed into hungry magazines. "Hey, fellas, I think we have some unexpected company." He peered through his microbinocs and grimaced. "I think we have some party crashers. Looks like a spinner is attempting to land on the damn roof in this mess. I can't be sure, but I bet it's some BR's cutting in on our action."

Everyone in the van froze for a second, digesting the kernel of information Ryez provided them. Sgt. Gray cursed under his breath and barked at Det. Marks," What the hell is going on? I thought there were no friggin' Blade Runner ops going on?" "Nothing popped up on your little toy?"

Det. Marks shot back, equally annoyed," Negative, Boss, I pulled up all the data that was available to me, only a supervisor can get access to certain restricted information."

Eddie gray cursed again. And again. He made only a half-hearted attempt to contact the Blade Runner unit to see if there was some kind of investigation or operation going down in this forsaken part of the city. He assumed that they would be the only game in town. Sgt. Gray gritted his teeth and could not shake the sense of dread that was slowly creeping up on him. He pulled his service pistol from its holster, clicking off the safety. He studied the faces of his cops and simply said, "Let's go."

From the front of the van, Det. Bill Scott was grinning like a Cheshire cat.
 
Ok, here is chapter 2: I'll see how this goes, maybe someone may like it!






The rain slammed into the cops like bullets as they quickly exited the ground van. They ran toward the building entrance, scanning the area left and right as they charged ahead. The intensity of the rain forced the detectives to squint, almost blinding them, reducing the view of the warehouse to a hulking, grayish blur. They were almost to the entrance, when a shabbily clothed male emerged from the doorway, clutching his pathetic possessions in a black plastic bag. Det. Bill Scott was the point-man and promptly shoved the startled street-dweller aside, causing him to lose his balance and fall to the ground in a wet, crumpled heap. The man only managed an indignant grunt as he attempted to gather his pitiful belongings. Sgt Gray felt a brief wave of pity wash over him as his team members scrambled into the entranceway, almost trampling the poor son-of-a-bitch in the process.

Det. Ryez kicked the rest of the derelict's "property" out of the way, sending it into the flooded street gutter. A metallic scraping sound caught the attention of Det. Ryez as he was about to enter the doorway. He jerked his head around trying to locate the source of the metallic noise with such force that he briefly thought he may have snapped his neck in the process. He saw the street bum writhing on the ground, furiously trying to reach for something in the gutter. Det. Ryez brought up the muzzle of his service weapon and bolted toward the street, his worst nightmare beginning to materialize right in front of him as the ******* was bringing the business end of a compact, low-tech submachine to bear on the doorway. Det. Ryez had barely enough time to scream "GUN" as the derelict sprayed the warehouse entranceway with a deadly burst of automatic gunfire. Det. Ryez convulsed like a marionette whose strings were suddenly operated by a crazed, hyper-kinetic puppeteer, and began to sputter and gurgle as he slowly fell face first onto the cold, wet, garbage-strewn sidewalk. The bright crimson fluid that leaked profusely out of his body became a diluted brown as it mixed with the rainwater that continued to assault his lifeless body.

Eddie Gray heard Ryez's scream and the sickening, violent reaction to his shriek of "gun." He barked into his police Netcom for assistance and raced for the door. Det. Marks was mumbling "I knew it." over and over as Det. Bill Scott screamed a warning that the warehouse elevator was rapidly making its way down. There was no cover between the entrance way and the elevator at the end of the dilapidated hallway. Detectives Marks and Scott were now faced with the worst case scenario; retreat to the street and face a fate like that of Ryez's or face what was coming down in that freight elevator with nothing in between them whatsoever.

The antediluvian gears and mechanisms of the elevator groaned loudly as its carriage made its descent to the ground floor. Det Scott flung himself on the floor and then pointed the barrel of his assault shotgun at the metal doors that were slowly creaking open. Det Marks began a half run / half stumble toward the front entrance, occasionally turning around, pointing his weapon in the direction of the elevator. The elevator doors slowly opened, like the jaws of a steel beast from the depths of some metallic Inferno, revealing its contents to the two Detectives. As Bill Scott shouted, "POLICE! DON'T MOVE!" Graham Marks pulled the trigger of his weapon as fast as he could.


Sgt. Eddie Gray was now a man possessed by only one emotion: Rage. He cautiously approached the entranceway, his body in combat shooting stance, his automatic clenched tightly in both hands. He could see Victor Ryez's bullet-riddled body lying face down on the sidewalk. Eddie Gray's eyes narrowed to slits and he began to breathe heavily, his heart pounding in his chest with the ferocity of a blacksmith's hammer smashing onto an iron anvil. He inched his way forward and now he could see the front of the ground van and saw the shabbily dressed male beside it, furiously working the magazine out of the low-tech sub-machine gun. The shooter was oblivious to Eddie Gray's presence by the entranceway, completely focused on trying to extract the clip from the weapon. The shooter cursed repeatedly, apparently unable to reload his machine pistol fast enough.

Eddie Gray stepped out the darkness of the warehouse doorway and calmly walked out into the street. His breathing became shallow and controlled, his heart easing back into its normal rhythm. He could see the world around him slowly shrink, getting dark around the edges of his peripheral vision. The rest of the world was slipping away to Eddie Gray. He barely heard the roar of gunfire inside the warehouse. Nothing mattered now. The only thing that mattered was emptying his entire magazine of hollow-point rounds into the unkempt, murderous S.O.B. before him. He stopped by his fallen comrade's body, softly muttered a plea for forgiveness, and pulled the trigger of his service weapon until the slide of his pistol locked back with a sharp click. He mechanically disposed of the spent clip and inserted a full one into the pistol, charging a round into the chamber, as the shooter slumped against the ground van, staring lifelessly at Eddie Gray. The shooter's body then slid to the right, leaving a bloody streak across the passenger side wheel well of the ground van as it fell to the rain soaked pavement.

Eddie Gray made his way over to the corpse of the shooter, studying the dead man intently. His heart leapt into his throat, his eyes were fixed not upon a dead man, but a dead WOMAN. Her dress was consistent with that of a street person or narcotic abuser, except for her shiny black boots. They were of a military design, like that he himself used to wear when he was in the U.N.'s military service. Eddie Gray realized that this shooter was a foot soldier in the URFF's cadre of "conditioned" youth. He further inspected the female corpse and instantly recognized the face of the dead shooter. He had seen her picture a thousand times before this fateful day and knew she was the daughter of the U.N. diplomat that he had so desperately wanted to take into custody unharmed.

His entire body went numb and he stood there, unable to move. They were far deadlier than he had initially thought, and poor Victor Ryez was the end result of that nearsightedness. He also now knew that this cell was tipped off and that this "soldier" was sent out to ambush them. Eddie Gray's mind raced with the possibilities on how they were set-up and one thought nagged him the most; it had to have been his informant. He had placed too much credibility in the *******'s mercenary "integrity". Eddie Gray made a silent vow that he would hunt down the rat ******* and send him to his eternal reward…….Hell.

The roar of gunfire had suddenly stopped. Or had it? He gradually became aware of his surroundings, his murderous rage dissipating like the vapors of his breath in the cold November air. The police Netcom crackled with excited chatter that help was on the way. Eddie Gray did not respond and quickly ran to the rear of the ground van and extracted a short, compact tactical assault rifle. He charged the weapon and was heading back to the warehouse entrance with grim determination etched on his face when a deafening whoomp emanated from inside the warehouse.

He raced toward the entrance, calling out his detectives names, hoping they were still alive. He made it to the doorway and was greeted by a series of short, intense explosions. Shattered Plexiglas and bits of building rained down upon the street. He shoved his head into the doorway and screamed for his detectives once more. He could barely make out the dark silhouettes that approached him. Smoke began to billow out from the hallway and he could barely see Det. Marks long frame dragging what appeared to be a body toward him. Eddie Gray ran in and grabbed Det. Marks and pulled him outside, painfully aware that the body was that of Det. Bill Scott.

When they were out of the smoky darkness of the hallway, Eddie Gray gasped when his gaze fell on the two detectives. Bill Scott was a charred, steaming mess, his facial features almost entirely unrecognizable. Graham Marks was severely burned, his clothes seared into his flesh. He was a grotesque mockery of what was once a human being. He collapsed onto the street, muttering "They sent down some poor ******* with a damn bomb strapped to his body. OH GOD. It hurts like hell..OH GOD..OH GOD." His voice trailed off and he became motionless, his eyes fixed squarely on Sgt. Eddie Gray, but they did not see the Sergeant's tortured expression that was his face.

There were shouts of anguish coming from the warehouse, voices crying out for help. There were people fleeing from the entranceway, scattering in all directions, ignoring Sgt. Gray and his fallen detectives. More and more bits of debris fell from the sky as the warehouse was now being racked by more explosions. Eddie Gray could see more occupants of the warehouse fleeing from the building. Some were armed and he pointed the T.A.R. in the general direction of the doorway and opened fire. He emptied the magazine and stared blindly at the figures writhing and moaning on the ground. He heard the spinner take off from the roof and circle above, the whine of the purge generators momentarily drowning out the cries of the wounded. An ear piercing blast shattered the air and sent charred pieces of building in all directions. The concussion of the blast knocked him off his feet and sent him crashing into the ground van. The explosion shattered the safety glass of the ground van, and tinkling bits of glass cascaded down upon Eddie Gray, like the Devil's twisted version of a snowfall.

He tried to shield his eyes from the blinding myriad of colored strobe lights that cut through the smoke and dust. He was fading in and out of consciousness, trying to make out the black clad figure in front of him. He could see the yellow turret lights dimly revolving on the spinner directly behind the person in front of him. The figure crouched down and stared intently at his ashen, battered face. She had the most brilliant blue eyes he had ever seen in his life. An Angel? He thought for a moment. He quickly deduced that the female before him was no Angel from heavens, but an Angel of Death, because she clutched a big, black ominous handgun used almost exclusively by Blade Runners. He grimaced and a short, bizarre cackle burst from his mouth. He just now thought of his wife and newly adopted daughter, Claire. His mind played their images over and over until they became blurred and distorted. One last thought popped into his delirious mind as his world faded to black: Hell, at least the rain is letting up.
 

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