A story I've been thinking of, and been starting to put on paper for the past 2-3 years. Good and bad comments on this are welcomed...
ALIENS VS PREDATOR
HUNTERS WARFARE
The clan Chieftain sat in his throne room looking down onto his subjects as they prepared for a Royal Hunt, located on the oomans home planet. Even though it wasn't the high temperature they liked for a hunt, it was new territory, so it came as a test to the Chieftain to prove he was skilled enough to hunt under any condition. He looked down upon his fellow Yautja, preparing for the hunt. A conveyor belt carried hundreds of hard meat eggs from the cargo hold of the ship to the docking area. This batch of eggs would be the second wave of eggs to be laid on the hunting grounds. The Chieftain’s royal hunters unpacked their weapons and strapped themselves with conventional armor. A loud roar could be heard outside of the ship as ozone scratched at the hull. They were entering the planets atmosphere. There was a loud cheer from the group as they strapped on their burners, and loaded their spear guns ready to begin their hunt. This would be the hunt of their lives
Duane was at his house in a no name town in Pa. He was packing a fairly large pistol and cases of ammunition into the back of his Jeep. He ducked his head under the roof of the car. His back ached as he stood up. Fifty-some years of work and hunting had worn on him. Even at that age he was still hunting during almost any season. He and his sons Ian and Devin were preparing for their annual hunting to the Rocky Mountains for the abundant deer, ram, and, if they were lucky, bear. They had given an invitation to several of their hunting friends. Among them were Chris Gantz and their neighbor Marcus.
Devin and Ian came into their father’s house and saw him packing lots of ammunition for the trip, far more than they would possibly need.
"Dad, you know we never end up using even close to a quarter of the ammo you pack. There's absolutely no reason for it dad." complained his youngest son Devin.
"Well Dev, ya never have enough ammo when you need it." said Duane with a grin on his face. Both of his sons shook their heads and laughed at their father.
"Come on dad, it's just a waste of space taking all of that ammo. No reason in taking that much" complained his oldest son Ian.
"Well, I'm always prepared, always," Duane replied. He walked back into the house to grab the rest of the firearms. This would be the hunt of their lives.
Reuben sat in the driver’s seat of his old beat up SUV following closely behind his friends Ian and Chris in the car ahead of him. Reuben looked in his rear view mirror to check and make sure that Wayne, Nick, and Shawn were all still following him as well. Reuben made the last wide turn as he saw it, the Rocky Mountains. About two hundred yards ahead he could see Duane’s cabin, it was fairly large, big enough to house around 9 people. Reuben watched as Duane pulled up to the cabin and then turned his car around so the back was facing the front door. Reuben had no need in emptying a lot from his car so he parked front end first as did the other three behind him.
"Well boys this is it," said Duane as he shut the door to his jeep.
"Yea, this year I'm not gonna miss that deer,” said Chris as he pulled out his 375 hunting case from the back of Duane’s jeep.
"Yea sure you won't" said Shawn with a chuckle as he got his rifle out from the car and walked over to the cabin door and opened it. Inside the cabin was hot and dusty. Shawn threw his rifle case against the wall near the door and jumped onto the sofa with a sigh of relief. He stretched out the cramps in his legs from the long car ride.
"Hey Shawn, come help me with this stuff" said Nick as he carried a rifle case, and a bag of ammo. He handed the bag to Shawn. The two took all of Nick's equipment, gear and other supplies over towards his room and laid it all neatly on his bed.
Shawn went back into the living room to see Wayne come through the door. "Ok Shawn this is the last of it," Wayne said, handing Shawn a case of their ammo. "Just go and throw it in my room and I'll deal with it later." Shawn carried in their supply of ammunition to the rooms and stored it in the closet.
"Dad, you just gonna leave that truck load of ammo in the car?” asked Devin as he leaned back in an old wooden chair.
"Yea, we'll leave that in there incase we need it later” said Duane with a grin on his face. Reuben walked into the cabin, his arms loaded with his gear. He shuffled to his room in the back of the cabin and placed it beside his bed. Reuben then sighed and dropped himself onto his bed.
The large female black bear walked slowly into her den for the night. She slowly walked to the spot she slept in when she noticed an odd scent in the cave. Following her nose, she was led to the back corner of the cave. Attached to the floor was a slimy grey oval. The bear cautiously approached the object and sniffed it. Her wet nose lay on top of the object and suddenly it opened like a flower. The petals spread apart and revealed a mass of goo inside. Then, over the edge of the opening, fingerlike needles arose. Out of the oval climbed a large spider-like creature unlike any the bear had seen before. She bent over, peering at the spider when in leapt from the opening and latched to her face. Stunned, the bear pawed viciously at the organism attached to her face. A tail hanging from the creature wrapped around her neck and squeezed tightly. The bear struggled for a few moments with the parasite before she passed out.
The group of nine walked out into the early morning sun covering their eyes as they got used to the sun light. They had a good mile to walk until they were on hunting grounds, but they needed the exercise. About half a mile from the hunting grounds they heard something like a stampede. They stopped and looked out into a large field. There they saw something none of them had ever seen. Hundreds of deer running the direction they just came from. Dust flew in the air as literally thousands of hooves shook the ground. With tails raised and grunts going, the deer were rapidly leaving the vicinity.
"Dad have you ever seen anything like this?" Ian uttered in amazement.
"No, not that I can remember. Most of the time I see at the most a dozen running, but this, this is something unbelieveable" Duane said, astonished. While looking at the stampede, over the thunder of hooves they could hear a pickup truck pull up right by them. A park ranger jumped out from his jeep, binoculars in hand. He looked out as the continuous line of deer ran past.
"Do you know what's causing this?" asked Wayne
"Nah, it's just been happening for the past few days. Up there at our ranger's station,” he pointed about half a mile up the road at a large cabin. "We've seen this going on from up there, they run like heck and we haven't seen anything besides them running, let alone anything chasing them." The ranger closed his binoculars and put them in his pocket. "Well I'll leave you all alone, happy hunting!" said the ranger as he jumped into his pickup truck and started for the station.
The hunting party left the road and took a trail leading into the woods and eventually the mountains. The trail took them to the base of a chain of mountains. Along the chain were the separate hunting spots. While walking towards the spots, something caught Duane's eye. A den in the side of the mountain about three hundred yards away. "Hey fellas, look over there!" he said pointing towards the den.
"Wow a cave!” said Nick
"Not just a cave, it's a bear's den,” said Duane
"How can you tell?” asked Reuben
"Well , look at the ground around the entrance. It's matted down and well torn up." Duane replied as he pointed towards the ground a few feet in front of the cave entrance. "And those bushes beside the entrance are berries, an easy food source."
As he peered at the entrance, Chris thought he saw something move slightly. A deep black rock beside the entrance wobbled slightly. It wasn't a rock, but definitely something alive.
"Hey what's that?” asked Chris pointing towards the "rock".
"Good question...maybe it's some sort of fungus or something," said Shawn, puzzled.
"No fungus doesn't move like that," whispered Ian. Then the black figure started to unravel itself. It's sleek shiny cone-like skull reflected the sunlight. It stood up on its two legs, each covered in random spikes and a shiny black coat like the rest of the figure. An obvious ribcage could be see. Human-like arms hung from the side of the monster, ending in thin, long fingers. Its cone head turned to face them. Lips in the front of the face retracted to reveal a set of metallic teeth.
Just then there was loud shrieking sound and the spiny coated monster started running at lightening speed towards them. In less than seven seconds the monster covered nearly the entire three hundred yards. It was twenty-five yards away when it stopped dead in its tracks, slowly turned around and looked at a nearby tree. Then in a blink of an eye a flash of blue and white ball of energy slammed into the monsters body. The monster flew back and slammed against the ground, split in two by the blast.
Cautiously, the group stepped back in terror, not knowing what happened. Wayne looked into the tree and saw nothing. He strained his eyes at the spot in the tree where the blast came from. Still nothing. Wait...something was there. Something was there, yet it wasn't. A shimmer lofted in the tree. Almost like heat waves...
"What was that?" whispered Shawn, "I can't see anything"
"Wait, I need a closer look at that tree," replied Wayne. Wayne then slowly walked up to the tree, Weatherbe hunting rifle trembling in his hand . Silently, a trio of red dots slowly ran along the ground, up Wayne's leg, and to the middle of his chest. He followed the direction the lights came from. They led to the same spot up in the tree. He watched as a glowing red dot appeared in the tree, sending another blue-white blast to the location of the dots. Sights. Wayne realized the dots were simple targeting sights as the blast hit him in the chest, sending him backwards and to the ground.
Feeling pain in the middle of his chest, Wayne lifted his head and looked at his chest. In horror, his last vision was of the blood-painted ground he was laying on, which he could see THROUGH his chest.
Horrified, the group turned and ran as fast as they could towards the ranger’s station. Marcus turned around as they ran and looked behind himself. The air seemed to move behind them, like it was alive. The sky and ground were distorted as if light was being bent. Whatever it was that was back there, it was now following them.
ALIENS VS PREDATOR
HUNTERS WARFARE
The clan Chieftain sat in his throne room looking down onto his subjects as they prepared for a Royal Hunt, located on the oomans home planet. Even though it wasn't the high temperature they liked for a hunt, it was new territory, so it came as a test to the Chieftain to prove he was skilled enough to hunt under any condition. He looked down upon his fellow Yautja, preparing for the hunt. A conveyor belt carried hundreds of hard meat eggs from the cargo hold of the ship to the docking area. This batch of eggs would be the second wave of eggs to be laid on the hunting grounds. The Chieftain’s royal hunters unpacked their weapons and strapped themselves with conventional armor. A loud roar could be heard outside of the ship as ozone scratched at the hull. They were entering the planets atmosphere. There was a loud cheer from the group as they strapped on their burners, and loaded their spear guns ready to begin their hunt. This would be the hunt of their lives
Duane was at his house in a no name town in Pa. He was packing a fairly large pistol and cases of ammunition into the back of his Jeep. He ducked his head under the roof of the car. His back ached as he stood up. Fifty-some years of work and hunting had worn on him. Even at that age he was still hunting during almost any season. He and his sons Ian and Devin were preparing for their annual hunting to the Rocky Mountains for the abundant deer, ram, and, if they were lucky, bear. They had given an invitation to several of their hunting friends. Among them were Chris Gantz and their neighbor Marcus.
Devin and Ian came into their father’s house and saw him packing lots of ammunition for the trip, far more than they would possibly need.
"Dad, you know we never end up using even close to a quarter of the ammo you pack. There's absolutely no reason for it dad." complained his youngest son Devin.
"Well Dev, ya never have enough ammo when you need it." said Duane with a grin on his face. Both of his sons shook their heads and laughed at their father.
"Come on dad, it's just a waste of space taking all of that ammo. No reason in taking that much" complained his oldest son Ian.
"Well, I'm always prepared, always," Duane replied. He walked back into the house to grab the rest of the firearms. This would be the hunt of their lives.
Reuben sat in the driver’s seat of his old beat up SUV following closely behind his friends Ian and Chris in the car ahead of him. Reuben looked in his rear view mirror to check and make sure that Wayne, Nick, and Shawn were all still following him as well. Reuben made the last wide turn as he saw it, the Rocky Mountains. About two hundred yards ahead he could see Duane’s cabin, it was fairly large, big enough to house around 9 people. Reuben watched as Duane pulled up to the cabin and then turned his car around so the back was facing the front door. Reuben had no need in emptying a lot from his car so he parked front end first as did the other three behind him.
"Well boys this is it," said Duane as he shut the door to his jeep.
"Yea, this year I'm not gonna miss that deer,” said Chris as he pulled out his 375 hunting case from the back of Duane’s jeep.
"Yea sure you won't" said Shawn with a chuckle as he got his rifle out from the car and walked over to the cabin door and opened it. Inside the cabin was hot and dusty. Shawn threw his rifle case against the wall near the door and jumped onto the sofa with a sigh of relief. He stretched out the cramps in his legs from the long car ride.
"Hey Shawn, come help me with this stuff" said Nick as he carried a rifle case, and a bag of ammo. He handed the bag to Shawn. The two took all of Nick's equipment, gear and other supplies over towards his room and laid it all neatly on his bed.
Shawn went back into the living room to see Wayne come through the door. "Ok Shawn this is the last of it," Wayne said, handing Shawn a case of their ammo. "Just go and throw it in my room and I'll deal with it later." Shawn carried in their supply of ammunition to the rooms and stored it in the closet.
"Dad, you just gonna leave that truck load of ammo in the car?” asked Devin as he leaned back in an old wooden chair.
"Yea, we'll leave that in there incase we need it later” said Duane with a grin on his face. Reuben walked into the cabin, his arms loaded with his gear. He shuffled to his room in the back of the cabin and placed it beside his bed. Reuben then sighed and dropped himself onto his bed.
The large female black bear walked slowly into her den for the night. She slowly walked to the spot she slept in when she noticed an odd scent in the cave. Following her nose, she was led to the back corner of the cave. Attached to the floor was a slimy grey oval. The bear cautiously approached the object and sniffed it. Her wet nose lay on top of the object and suddenly it opened like a flower. The petals spread apart and revealed a mass of goo inside. Then, over the edge of the opening, fingerlike needles arose. Out of the oval climbed a large spider-like creature unlike any the bear had seen before. She bent over, peering at the spider when in leapt from the opening and latched to her face. Stunned, the bear pawed viciously at the organism attached to her face. A tail hanging from the creature wrapped around her neck and squeezed tightly. The bear struggled for a few moments with the parasite before she passed out.
The group of nine walked out into the early morning sun covering their eyes as they got used to the sun light. They had a good mile to walk until they were on hunting grounds, but they needed the exercise. About half a mile from the hunting grounds they heard something like a stampede. They stopped and looked out into a large field. There they saw something none of them had ever seen. Hundreds of deer running the direction they just came from. Dust flew in the air as literally thousands of hooves shook the ground. With tails raised and grunts going, the deer were rapidly leaving the vicinity.
"Dad have you ever seen anything like this?" Ian uttered in amazement.
"No, not that I can remember. Most of the time I see at the most a dozen running, but this, this is something unbelieveable" Duane said, astonished. While looking at the stampede, over the thunder of hooves they could hear a pickup truck pull up right by them. A park ranger jumped out from his jeep, binoculars in hand. He looked out as the continuous line of deer ran past.
"Do you know what's causing this?" asked Wayne
"Nah, it's just been happening for the past few days. Up there at our ranger's station,” he pointed about half a mile up the road at a large cabin. "We've seen this going on from up there, they run like heck and we haven't seen anything besides them running, let alone anything chasing them." The ranger closed his binoculars and put them in his pocket. "Well I'll leave you all alone, happy hunting!" said the ranger as he jumped into his pickup truck and started for the station.
The hunting party left the road and took a trail leading into the woods and eventually the mountains. The trail took them to the base of a chain of mountains. Along the chain were the separate hunting spots. While walking towards the spots, something caught Duane's eye. A den in the side of the mountain about three hundred yards away. "Hey fellas, look over there!" he said pointing towards the den.
"Wow a cave!” said Nick
"Not just a cave, it's a bear's den,” said Duane
"How can you tell?” asked Reuben
"Well , look at the ground around the entrance. It's matted down and well torn up." Duane replied as he pointed towards the ground a few feet in front of the cave entrance. "And those bushes beside the entrance are berries, an easy food source."
As he peered at the entrance, Chris thought he saw something move slightly. A deep black rock beside the entrance wobbled slightly. It wasn't a rock, but definitely something alive.
"Hey what's that?” asked Chris pointing towards the "rock".
"Good question...maybe it's some sort of fungus or something," said Shawn, puzzled.
"No fungus doesn't move like that," whispered Ian. Then the black figure started to unravel itself. It's sleek shiny cone-like skull reflected the sunlight. It stood up on its two legs, each covered in random spikes and a shiny black coat like the rest of the figure. An obvious ribcage could be see. Human-like arms hung from the side of the monster, ending in thin, long fingers. Its cone head turned to face them. Lips in the front of the face retracted to reveal a set of metallic teeth.
Just then there was loud shrieking sound and the spiny coated monster started running at lightening speed towards them. In less than seven seconds the monster covered nearly the entire three hundred yards. It was twenty-five yards away when it stopped dead in its tracks, slowly turned around and looked at a nearby tree. Then in a blink of an eye a flash of blue and white ball of energy slammed into the monsters body. The monster flew back and slammed against the ground, split in two by the blast.
Cautiously, the group stepped back in terror, not knowing what happened. Wayne looked into the tree and saw nothing. He strained his eyes at the spot in the tree where the blast came from. Still nothing. Wait...something was there. Something was there, yet it wasn't. A shimmer lofted in the tree. Almost like heat waves...
"What was that?" whispered Shawn, "I can't see anything"
"Wait, I need a closer look at that tree," replied Wayne. Wayne then slowly walked up to the tree, Weatherbe hunting rifle trembling in his hand . Silently, a trio of red dots slowly ran along the ground, up Wayne's leg, and to the middle of his chest. He followed the direction the lights came from. They led to the same spot up in the tree. He watched as a glowing red dot appeared in the tree, sending another blue-white blast to the location of the dots. Sights. Wayne realized the dots were simple targeting sights as the blast hit him in the chest, sending him backwards and to the ground.
Feeling pain in the middle of his chest, Wayne lifted his head and looked at his chest. In horror, his last vision was of the blood-painted ground he was laying on, which he could see THROUGH his chest.
Horrified, the group turned and ran as fast as they could towards the ranger’s station. Marcus turned around as they ran and looked behind himself. The air seemed to move behind them, like it was alive. The sky and ground were distorted as if light was being bent. Whatever it was that was back there, it was now following them.