Like I sed this is my first Charmed fanfic that i have shown oto anyone so pls be nice. Unless you reallly hated it then b honest.
It has Prue in it.
Piper and Prue were inthe house. Prue was reading whilst Piper was cooking, there was a knock on the door.
"Piper can you get that?"Prue called,
"Uh, not really could you?"Piper replied. Prue sighed and got up. She walked to the door, she opened it. As she did so a well built man plunged a knife into her stomach. She was about to call out. He put his hand over her mouth, he took the knife out of her and plunged it in again. She fell to the ground. He dragged her into the living room.He vanished."Who is it?"Piper walked in,"Oh my God Prue!"she shrieked. She beant down next to her sister. Suddenly she screamed as a knife was plunged into her back. She fell next to her sister.//
Phoebe walked up to the house. She opened the door,
"Hey guys I'm home"she said, "I have had the best day you wouldn't-"she stopped as she saw her two sisters lying on the ground."Oh no"she cried. She bent next to Prue and felt for a pulce."Oh Prue, no" She began to sob. She felt for Piper's pulce and sobbed even more"Piper".She started to cling to her sisters."Leo!"she screamed,"Leo!" as she cried Leo appeared,
"Oh no"he fell to his knees, he started trying to heal them.
"They're dead"Phoebe choked.
"No"Leo held Piper in his arms. Phoebe held Prue. They both sat there.
Phoebe sobbed as Piper and Prue's bodies were taken away.Darryl walked up to her, he hugged her.
"I am so sorry"she collapsed in sobs. Darryl held her up.They both sat down. She couldn't even speak."Was it a...a demon?"she shook her head. She was now finding it hard to breath. Her dad ran in,
"Phoebe"he cried. He embraced her,
"I'm sorry daddy"she sobbed,
"It wasn't you're fault"he told her sadly,"It wasn't you're fault."
What's gonna happen? You'll find out soon, even sooner if you review it!
It has Prue in it.
Piper and Prue were inthe house. Prue was reading whilst Piper was cooking, there was a knock on the door.
"Piper can you get that?"Prue called,
"Uh, not really could you?"Piper replied. Prue sighed and got up. She walked to the door, she opened it. As she did so a well built man plunged a knife into her stomach. She was about to call out. He put his hand over her mouth, he took the knife out of her and plunged it in again. She fell to the ground. He dragged her into the living room.He vanished."Who is it?"Piper walked in,"Oh my God Prue!"she shrieked. She beant down next to her sister. Suddenly she screamed as a knife was plunged into her back. She fell next to her sister.//
Phoebe walked up to the house. She opened the door,
"Hey guys I'm home"she said, "I have had the best day you wouldn't-"she stopped as she saw her two sisters lying on the ground."Oh no"she cried. She bent next to Prue and felt for a pulce."Oh Prue, no" She began to sob. She felt for Piper's pulce and sobbed even more"Piper".She started to cling to her sisters."Leo!"she screamed,"Leo!" as she cried Leo appeared,
"Oh no"he fell to his knees, he started trying to heal them.
"They're dead"Phoebe choked.
"No"Leo held Piper in his arms. Phoebe held Prue. They both sat there.
Phoebe sobbed as Piper and Prue's bodies were taken away.Darryl walked up to her, he hugged her.
"I am so sorry"she collapsed in sobs. Darryl held her up.They both sat down. She couldn't even speak."Was it a...a demon?"she shook her head. She was now finding it hard to breath. Her dad ran in,
"Phoebe"he cried. He embraced her,
"I'm sorry daddy"she sobbed,
"It wasn't you're fault"he told her sadly,"It wasn't you're fault."
What's gonna happen? You'll find out soon, even sooner if you review it!
