EVE by Aurelio O'Brien - Review

Aurelio O'Brien

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Website update -- new Flash animation -- come see!

I created this website to introduce people to the world in which my novel, EVE, takes place:

www.evethenovel.com

I hope you enjoy it! Please let me know!

Cheers,

Aurelio
 
post-apocalyptic bio-engineered future

Hi Aurelio, just got my copy of Eve yesterday and started reading it this morning, so far so good!

I really really enjoyed the animated versions of your creatures on the promo site for the book, I wish there were dozens more to look at!

Another good book in a similar vein is "Oryx & Crake" by Margaret Atwood. It's about a future in which, like Eve, bio-engineering has been perfected and deployed for the comfort of the masses. However, unlike Eve, some kind of disease has wiped out all but the last human, leaving the world as an inheritance to the new breeds to flourish in. Very enjoyable and thought-provoking.

yours,
David Mitchell
 
Thanks for giving the book a look! I've been a bit disheartened because although the site is VERY popular it doesn't seem people are as willing to give the book a look. I suppose that is to be expected, but I know if people like the site, they'll love the book. I had a great time writing it!

I'll look for Oryx & Crake and give it a read. Part of my motivation in writing EVE was the desire to push future thought in a new direction. I like tech stuff, but it's been done to death! I also like that kind of positive "gee whiz" view of the future that was around in the 50s and 60s, so I wanted to try for a little of that and not go so dark with it.

Please let me know what you think when you finish! Writing is a very solitary process so after three years I'm anxious for reactions.

Cheers,

Aurelio
 
Finally got to looking the site over Aureilio, it is remarkably neat, somebody had fun preparing it.

The review makes it look good so I have ordered it for bath time amusement.
 
Wow, thanks for ordering it Ray! I really appreciate it, and would love to hear you comments when you're through.

Cheers,

Aurelio

P.S. I animated all that stuff myself. Had to learn Flash to do it. It was a LOT of work, but I'm happy with the results!
 
Ok, I've read it and at first I didn't think I was going to like it or even finish reading it, but I read on and found it quite surprising and not bad at all.

After getting through all the tech discriptsions and the funny little tradmarks symbols (they seem to intimidate me), I found it very interesting and quite enjoyable. :) Also found it very revealing of how human kind can be very narrow minded.

Thank you, Aurelio, for a very interesting read. :D
 
How kind you are, Status! I appreciate your taking the time to read EVE and I'm glad it was ultimately enjoyable!

I struggled with the the description of the world at the front of the book, but the world of EVE is so different I had to explain it somehow. I think someday when I'm a better/more experienced writer I'll re-read it and slap myself in the head and say, "Doh!" because I'll see a better way to have handled it. But for now, I did my best.

Anyway, it was a hoot to write. Thanks again for the read! :D

Aurelio
www.evethenovel.com
 
While not as elaborate as say a Tom Sharpe novel (No bad thing), this has all the plot requirements of a classic British comic farce.

An ambitious schemer making long and elaborative plans for the naive players. Who follow follow the rules implicitly but always fail to achieve what is required, either by their own whim or circumstances. Then everything coming to a head.
The plotter gets rather less than he bargained for, but thinks he won. While somebody decides everything that was wrong is now right and they all exit stage left, singing merrily.
Season with some blatent sexual inuendo and a hint of slapstick, then control the amusement (Note- Not laughter) until the last scene, when everybody realises just how ridiculous the whole set up has been (Which is, in common widom, a peculiarly British trait).

Given the (AFAIK) unique but simple plot, the line between crass stupidity and deadly dull is narrow, but the book follows it quite well.

Only downer I would level is that some of the names of things were annoying and/or could do with better descriptions?

Turn it into a play and it is- Hello West End I want to book a theatre for 50 years.
 
Thanks Ray!

A 50 year run (or the literary equivalent) sounds nice to me! Actually I'd be pleased just to sell another 50 copies!

I appreciate the feedback and that you gave EVE a look. That you felt it comic in a British way is a high compliment, and you are too kind.

I got another nice review recently from Michael A. Arnzen in The Goreletter:

http://blogs.setonhill.edu/Arnzenews/cat_not_dead_yet_print_reviews.html

He's a prof, and quite an accomplished writer himself!
 
Very good, Aurelio! :D

First time an official reviewer ever agreed with me. :eek:
 
Thanks, Status. I was really pleased with this one because she really understood what I was going for, and also because it made her laugh. That's very rewarding. :)
 
Congratulations Aurelio! :)

Just one question. Where is the next book?


Forgive me, but I'll merge this thread with the one about the book
 
I'm a workin' on it!!!

I was also asked to particiate in an anthology, mostly due to this review. One of the other writers involved is Gary Wolf, who wrote, Who Censored Roger Rabbit? which the movie Who Framed Roger Rabbit? was based on, so I'm pretty jazzed about that! I'm not sure when they hope to release it, but you can be sure I'll keep you posted.

I'm also slugging away on my next novel, but that may take a year or two... :wink2:


Aurelio
www.evethenovel.com
 
Okay, forgive my endless self-promotional banter here, but I updated my website and added a new Flash scene (click on the robot at the bottom of the site page). This animation was a ton of work so as you can imagine I'd like people to see it! LOL!

I also got an AMAZINGLY GREAT endorsement blurb for my novel from Gary K. Wolf and posted that on the site too.

Enjoy! End of commercial message.

:D
 

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