The Ninja Squad

demolition18

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Matt Jefferson, Christopher James, Lindsay Romer, Jack Hardy and Michael Paul fight crime as Ninjas in New York City. The Ninjas use throwing stars and nun chucks to fight crime. The Ninjas battle a terrorist organization. The big boss of the terrorist network is Salvator Harris. They don't kill. They shoot stars into hands with guns. The Ninjas swing from building to building. They even battle some local muggers. In the end will Sal Harris terrorist leader go to prison?

Beginning

Scene 1

It is day time at the Tombs. There is Sal Harris. Sal Harris is a terrorist leader. There are a few men and women accompanying Sal Harris. Sal Harris meets with all those prisoners he had freed. Sal: "You guys can work for me and we are going to New York City." They meet outside. Sal takes his freed prisoners to New York City.

Scene 2

Later on in Brooklyn at a building there’s a building owned by a local mob family. Mob kingpin Tony Milenio owns this building. Tony’s men are grouped up with bosses and under bosses. Sal Harris confronts Tony Milenio. Milenio: "This is our turf." Sal: "Not anymore after I kill you and your men." Milenio: "Go kill them all." They all draw guns. There’s a turf war. The terrorists go into mob headquarters and start shooting. A thug of Sal’s shoots some bodyguards on site. Sal shoots an under boss in the gun fight. Some men in Sal’s group are being killed. Many mob guys are being whacked out by Sal and his goons. A woman terrorist shoots a boss. Sal and Tony get into a knife fight. All of Tony’s gang are killed. Milenio: "You killed all of my men. There’s only me left." In this vicious knife fight Sal kills Tony. Sal: "This is my place now. You are going to join all of your men." Sal and his gang gather up together.

Scene 3

Later on at a martial arts academy. There’s Matt Jefferson instruction a bunch of girls and boys in between 7 and 12 in lessons. Matt: "Martial arts isn't about violence. It’s about self defense. Martial arts isn't about hitting people because you don't like them. That’s all for now. Class dismissed." The class ends. Lindsay Romer who is the girl friend of Matt Jefferson (white girl 23 with long blonde hair) shows up. Lindsay: "Matt lets’ go to Madison Square Garden with Chris, Jack and Michael."

Scene 4

Later on at Madison Square Garden there’s Lindsay Romer with her 4 boyfriends Matt Jefferson and others who are boyfriends named Christopher James, Jack Hardy and Michael Paul. They are watching practice of the New York Rangers. Jack Hardy, Christopher James and Michael Paul look at a few women. Jack: "These women are hot." Michael: "Let’s go over to them and meet them." Christopher: "What’s your names?" Jenna: "I'm Jenna." Kate: "I'm Kate." Lisa: "I'm Lisa." Christopher: "My name is Christopher." Michael: "My name is Michael." Jack: "My name is Jack. My real name is Jason." They meet those women named Kate, Jenna and Lisa. Lindsay: "My boyfriend Matt and I are martial artists. Would you be interested in training by him?" All 3 girls: "Yes." These girls are interested in being trained in martial arts by Matt.

Scene 5

At night time at Sal Harris’s headquarters. Sal has a bunch of people being trained for his terrorist net work. They are black, white and yellow. Even Hispanics in Sal’s crime syndicate. Sal: "I have won over the mob guys for our turf. There are cops connected to the mob. Let’s kill them. You guys have bazookas. Blow them up. I want to take over the world and bring the world to it’s knees in terror. I want Captain Jefferson dead."

Scene 6

Some where there is a man named Paul Harmon. Paul Harmon is a middle age man. He is a master in the Ninja arts.

Later on at Jefferson martial arts studio there is training of Christopher, Michael and Jack with their new girlfriends. They are being trained by Matt. Matt: "You are all new members of my martial arts class. Martial arts is about self defense. Not doing violence to others."

Scene 7

At the police station at night time there is Captain Harold Jefferson. Captain jefferson is the father of Mathew jefferson. jefferson suspects corruption by the mob in his department. jefferson with his officers corrupted by the mob leave the building to go home. Captain Jefferson: "Did you guys get to the mob killings yet?" Corrupt cop #1: "No. I suspect that there was An act of terrorism involved." Captain Jefferson: "Let’s go find out tomorrow. It must be Sal Harris American terrorist."

Outside the cops get into their cars. as they leave the while terrorists are on a rooftop somewhere cars including captain jefferson’s are blown up with bazookas by Harris's thugs on a roof top.

Scene 8

The next day at the home of Matt Jefferson and Lindsay Romer they are watching the news. News Reporter (OS): "In other news police captain Harold Jefferson and his officers that were suspected of accepting bribes were blown up. The police not yet have any suspects but American terrorist Sal Harris." Matt: "I will get who ever killed my father and his officers." Lindsay: "I will join you then to help you." Matt: "My father was soon planning on retiring. Who ever did will pay for it."

Later on in the day at an alley Matt and Lindsay get together with Chris, Michael and jack. They together meet up in a nearby alley with a man named Paul Harmon. Paul Harmon: "I am a former Ninja. I can train you 5 as Ninjas. Come with me." Paul Harmon gives out 5 Ninja outfits.

Scene 9

They are trained at Matt’s martial arts academy with throwing stars and nun chucks. they train with bags. Matt: "My father suspected corruption of his officers. He had no proof that they were taking bribes."

At night at the terrorist headquarters. the terrorists are shooting targets for practice in taking people out. They go to Sal’s office.

Sal: "I could make headlines."

Scene 10

Somewhere else on the streets. there are 3 hoodlums attacking 3 women are Jenna, Kate and Lisa. they like her because she is pretty. These 3 hoods grab those girls. Hoodlum #1: "You are so pretty!" Jenna: "Leave me alone." Hoodlum #2: "Let’s make out and get laid." Kate: "No!" Hoodlum #3: "Come on." Lisa: "If you take our clothes off you will be charged with rape." Hoodlum #2: "It looks like we have a few wusses." the Ninjas go to stop them. Michael, jack and Christopher fight the hoodlums. there is some martial arts fighting by the Ninjas. Lindsay and Matt get in on the fight. they Ninjas beat the 3 hoodlums. Matt: "You 3 should stay here un till the police come and arrest you for attempted rape." Matt Jefferson leads the Ninja squad. Matt: "We are the Ninja squad." Those hoodlums are left for the police. the Ninja squad with grappling devices swings.

Scene 11

The next day there is Matt with Lindsay taking the subway traveling to times square with Chris, Michael and jack. on the train appears 4 men with knives who appear to be muggers. the come up and threaten people with their weapons. Mugger #1: "Everyone don't move or we will slit your throats." Lindsay gets up and those thugs come up to her. Lindsay: "There will be no trouble." They like her because they think that she is so attractive. Mugger #2: "You are so pretty." This thug grabs her as she slaps one of them in the face. Another punches her. she throws a good kick on the first thug. Matt then joins in and double kicks 2 other thugs Jean-Claude van Damme style. Michael comes in and fights the 4th thug. the Ninjas battle the 4 thugs and defeat them. they give up. Matt: "Get out of here and don't try to touch my girlfriend again." they run out of the cars.

Scene 12

Later on in the day Lindsay with the 4 men in her Ninja squad meet up with Jenna, Kate and Lisa. they witness a group of men (10) enter the banks with guns. Lindsay: "Get to safety and you 3 girls go call the police. Report a bank robbery to them." Lindsay with Matt, Michael, Jack and Chris suit up in Ninja clothes.

In the bank the robbers have their guns pointed at everyone. several men and women are forced to get down as the robbers threaten a teller with a gun. Chief Robber: "Everyone get down or you will be killed. If you try to stop us you die." 5 Ninjas come in and shoot throwing stars into the hands of the bank robbers. Matt: "We are here to stop you all." the other Ninjas get their nun chucks out. they fight with all of the bank robbers and tie them up while a woman teller pushes the button for the silent alarm.

Later on the cops are at the bank. the Ninjas meet with the cops. Matt: "We are the Ninja squad. We are helping you bring down criminals. Do you know who killed Captain Jefferson?" Cop #1: "Our evidence says that Sal Harris and thugs of his have blew up some police cars. Those other cops were corrupted by the mob. Those mob guys are dead too."

the news team shows up. a news woman approaches the 5 Ninjas. News Woman: "Who are you guys?" Matt: "We are the Ninja Squad." Christopher: "We are helping bring down a terrorist network."

Scene 13

They swing down manhattan. at Madison square garden there are terrorists who work for Sal Harris spotted there. Matt knows about them from his father. Matt: "There’s the terrorist who work for Sal Harris." Jack: "Is Sal Harris the man suspected of terrorist acts in the state of New York?" Matt: "Sal Harris is an American terrorist who wants to take over the world." they Ninjas draw nun chucks. one of them shoots a star into the wires of a bomb that they are planting. they battle 7 men. they fight them hand to hand. those terrorists are incapacitated.

They go looking for the headquarters of the terrorist Sal Harris.

Scene 14

Later on the Hudson river there’s a ferry boat out there. many men working for Sal Harris go out to hijack that boat. Hijacker #1: "Everyone this is a hijacking. Don't any of you move and we will spare your lives." A police boat is out there. Some boat cops get onto the fairy boat with their guns. Boat cop #1: "You men on the fair boat come out with your guns down and hands up. You are all under arrest. Put down your guns or we will open fire." the terrorists pull their guns on cops. the cops fire back. some terrorists are killed in gun fire. a cop is flesh wounded. another cops covers him. all those other terrorist are killed in police gun fire.

Scene 15

Later on in an nearby alley there’s Paul Harmon who runs into Sal Harris. Paul Harmon: "Harris. I should've known that it was you doing those terrorist acts in America." Sal: "It was me al right. You are going to die." They meet up and fight each other. Harmon uses some martial arts on Harris. Harris with his knife stabs Harmon in the chest. Paul Harmon: "You won't get away with this." Sal Harris runs off and Paul Harmon dies.

Later on the Ninja squad finds their mentor murdered assuming that it was Sal Harris who did it. Michael: "It had to have been Sal Harris that did it."

Scene 16

Somewhere at the apartment of Lindsay Romer and Matt Jefferson where Jenna, Lisa and Kate are staying comes sal's men. Harris Thug #1: "I am here to take you 3 girls to Sal Harris. I am looking for your boyfriends and Lindsay and Matt." Lisa: "They are protected by those ninjas." they are even after Lindsay, Matt, Michael, Christopher and Jack. They aim guns at those girls. They kidnap those 3 girls.

Later on at Sal's building in the daytime the 3 young women are brought to Sal and are taken captive. Harris Thug #2: "Here are the girls that you want." Sal: "Where’s their boyfriends with Matt Jefferson and Lindsay Romer?" Harris thug #3: "We haven't found them yet." Sal: "Go find them." Those thugs leave the office.

Scene 17

Later on the Ninja squad learns that 3 young women who Chris, mike and jack fell in love with were taken by terrorists. The 5 Ninjas find out from a cop who was friends with Matt jefferson’s father where the ruthless criminal Sal Harris is headquartered. Cop #2: "Sal Harris is headquartered in a building that the mob guys were in." the Ninjas go to there.

Outside there are some men and women working for Sal who attack. the 5 Ninjas using Ninja skills on them. Lindsay fight the women terrorists. the Ninjas with nun chucks beat them up and they are knocked out.

Scene 18

Matt gets in and sees the new girlfriends of Michael, jack and Christopher. Sal threatens them with a gun. Sal: "Don't move or I will shoot those lovely young women." Matt throws a star into Sal's hand. they get into a hand to hand fight. Matt: "I am taking you down. The police are after you for murder of some corrupt cops and Captain Jefferson." The bosses fight with Christopher and Michael. jack fights another member of the terrorist network. Lindsay fights the last woman terrorist standing. all those Ninjas with terrorists still standing are battling it out. Lindsay defeats the woman terrorist as another member of the crime syndicate is defeated by jack. Christopher defeats a boss as does Michael. Sal throws some punches on Matt. Matt: "I am the e son of Harold Jefferson New York City top cop." Sal: "Your father was taking bribes." Matt: "He was not. He was a good cop. He suspected mob corruption. He couldn't even trust his officers in dealing with Tony Milenio." Matt takes out his nun chucks as Sal draws his knife. the knife is knocked out of Sal’s hand by the nun chucks and Matt defeats Sal with his nun chucks. Matt: "Your going to pay for my killing my dad."

Scene 19

Later on the police show up and the Ninjas swing out with grappling hooks. the police rescue Jenna, Kate and Lisa. The cops arrest Sal and his thugs.

Scene 20

Later on at times square. the 5 Ninjas meet with the 3 girls that were hostages. Matt tells them that Sal and his gang are in prison for life. Matt: "My girlfriend Lindsay and I testified against Sal Harris and he is with his survivors in prison for life without parole."

The Ninjas swing down new York city jumping from roof to roof.

End
 
Casting Suggestions

Eliajah Wood (The Lord of The Rings movies, Deep Impact) as Matthew Jefferson Ninja squad leader

Gary Oldman (Lost In Space, The 5th Element, Air Force One, Batman Begins) as Sal Harris terrorist leader

No thoughts on who should play everyone else.
 
Re: Casting Suggestions

Eliajah Wood (The Lord of The Rings movies, Deep Impact) as Matthew Jefferson Ninja squad leader

Gary Oldman (Lost In Space, The 5th Element, Air Force One, Batman Begins) as Sal Harris terrorist leader

No thoughts on who should play everyone else.

I like the sketch of the story...it is a bit overly 1980's theme =====American Ninja, TMNT, China (that ninja chick---dang she was ba-ad!), Ninja (1-3, but # 3 The Domination was the bomb diggity, as my teens say), Missing in Action (1 & 2--Braddock's a stud). So since you already have that old cliche premise (that is NOT a diminishing remark, btw, just a description)...you're story would do better if you set the time frame. First off, nobody will believe that there are ninjas running around in milenium NYNY. But take it back 20, 30 or even 50 years and its a great freaking story. That is exactly why Rodriguez and Terantino always set thier tales to be reminiscent rather than explative.

And Elijah Wood for a ninja hero? That is the unlikliest of peoples---seriously. Elijah has a spe3cial kind of innocence because of those deep brown eyes. He is not a ninja warrior. He can't fit into a ninja warrior role. A kid who got mixed up (accidentally) in some chaos, I could believe because Elijah makes a great damsel in distress. You need someone tough. Someone hard with a broken heart, but not so hard that he doesn't have compassion and empathy for others. You need.. Chuck Norris! OK Bad Joke, but you see where I am going, no?

Go watch all of the movies I mentioned above.
 

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