please read and advise

[Druid Blaze]

this is a short excertp from my book.

It will suck to read in notepad so f you have a file converter let me know what it is, i'll download it and update the link into a pdf file.

 

[KSeriphyn]

Hi Druid,

I liked the opening, for me it set the scene straight away.
You saw the human side of Cole, an old man hating the discomforts of his cell. Later on you saw him become someone else as soon as he entered the arena. The person in the arena was what the public expected of him but the beginning was his true self. I got the feeling not many people saw this.

Thanks for sharing the story with us.

xx

KS