Aha! Finally my review has come on Amazon. Here it is. Please let me know what you think of my points.
"I was just about to go into the cinema to watch Black Hawk Down a few years ago and a mate told me about the 2 hour long battle scene. GREAT!! I thought. However, halfway through I wanted some respite. This book left me with a similar feeling. The reviews mention 'Epic scope' and 'fast-moving action' - like Black Hawk Down I thought GREAT!!. However I feel that this book has far TOO many (main) characters in it - we never get to know any of them properly. Also, with Pug learning about magic and Tomas learning about the ancient powers, there is too much going on at once, let alone if you include the actual war between the Kingdom and the Tsuranis.
The action is also strangely presented. The siege of Crydee, for example, took up around 3 chapters, and we just hear over and over again about repelled attacks against one wall. Coverage of the war gets VERY repetitive. And yet the final battle at the end (in 2 parts, with the first part brushed over totally) is lacking. If, like me, you like stories about a small, tight-knit band going on a long journey, then this book isn't for you.
There also doesn't seem to be a moral to this story. With this in mind, and with the multitude of stories and characters, it feels more like an historical textbook at times. It also reads more like an historical war novel than a fantasy book. Yes there's magic - but very little, and the other races read like humans. This book would be little different if the Tsurani, elves and dwarves were just replaced with humans.
Something else that has been mentioned by others, is the passage of time. This book, the first in a trilogy remember, takes place over something like 8 years. These include the formative years of nearly all the major characters.
Maybe this last point is a bit cynical, but me and some mates have found recently that many authors seek an emotional cop-out by putting in a few love interests (none more guilty that in Dragonlance). Whilst the romance in this book is less corny and trashy than Dragonlance, it still seems hollow, coming from the lack of character depth I suppose. OK I'm not expecting, or even wanting, Wuthering Heights or Pride and Prejudice, but I don't see why they need to be included. The benchmark for me is the Dark Elf set of books by R.A. Salvatore, which concentrate on the strong friendships that Drizzt (main character) builds up with those he meets. These seem far more emotionally filled, and Salvatore does not need to resort to cheap infatuations. The first quarter of Magician is dotted with references to the love triangle between Pug, Carline and Roland, which Mr. Feist spends a long time getting the reader emotionally involved in, only for it to peter out to nothing.
In conclusion, it seems to me that Mr. Feist thought up a lot of good ideas, and, maybe worried that he would not be able to get further books published, decided to cram them all in to this one book. It is a mistake often made by writers, particularly in fantasy (see the Dragonlance Chronicles). I am not particularly fond of heavy literature, complex character studies and the like, and yet this book left me wanting. Some books are content with being fast-paced and action-packed, but, as with Black Hawk Down, this can only last so long. Maybe I'm being too harsh on Mr. Feist. I can already hear calls of "it isn't supposed to be 'Crime and Punishment'", but I feel that if it wants to be a fun, action-packed read, it needs to be a lot shorter. It seems as though Mr. Feist didn't know whether to make it a proper epic, or to make it more of a romp, and ended up getting neither.
It's a shame these Amazon reviews aren't on a forum basis, because I'd love to discuss this book with someone who really loved it. Nevermind."