Mark Robson
Dragon Writer
Hello, Joose. Welcome to Chronicles. I'll leave this thread here for now - I see you've made a duplicate thread into the critiques section. I'm not quite sure why you've posted it in this section. Did you specifically want me to critique it? Have I met you recently at a school, or a bookshop? If so, it would be good if you could post me a reminder as to who you are - that way I can work out roughly what sort of response you're looking for.
I hope you stick around and enjoy what Chronicles has to offer. It's a great site for anyone who likes SFF. I hope to see you back here soon.
I hope you stick around and enjoy what Chronicles has to offer. It's a great site for anyone who likes SFF. I hope to see you back here soon.