Rane Longfox
Red Rane
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So, for anyone who's finished the book, what were your thoughts?
Overall, I thought it was an excellent book. At times, nearly as good as MoI. A little bit disjointed - it was a bit odd when the narrative kept skipping between the two wars, East and West. Other than the apparently irrelevant story of Redmask, and as a sign of the general collapse of the Empire, as well as the arrival of the Barghast, the last two of which could have been dealt with in any number of ways, there didn't seem to be any actual reason behind going into such detail with the Awl war.
But, aside from that hiccup, the storyline was superb, I thought - perfectly suited to the characters within it.
The writing, on the other hand, showed signs of... well, not decline, but certainly stagnation. There was less crispness to a number of the scenes, the humour seemed more forced, and the constant repetition of phrases and similar paragraphs did start to grate after a while.
I would suggest that SE should take a little longer writing his next books, to introduce a little bit more literary variety.
Overall, I thought it was an excellent book. At times, nearly as good as MoI. A little bit disjointed - it was a bit odd when the narrative kept skipping between the two wars, East and West. Other than the apparently irrelevant story of Redmask, and as a sign of the general collapse of the Empire, as well as the arrival of the Barghast, the last two of which could have been dealt with in any number of ways, there didn't seem to be any actual reason behind going into such detail with the Awl war.
But, aside from that hiccup, the storyline was superb, I thought - perfectly suited to the characters within it.
The writing, on the other hand, showed signs of... well, not decline, but certainly stagnation. There was less crispness to a number of the scenes, the humour seemed more forced, and the constant repetition of phrases and similar paragraphs did start to grate after a while.
I would suggest that SE should take a little longer writing his next books, to introduce a little bit more literary variety.