pklentz
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Hi Mr. Jarrold,
You wrote in your blog:
In 2003 a novel manuscript of mine, INTERIM, won the $2,500 first prize in a Cinescape Magazine competition. For the next couple of years I queried what agents I could find that didn't say "absolutely no SF," and got some interest but no deal. In retrospect I didn't query as widely as I might have, in favor of spending my energy on writing two more novels. Now I'm ready to push INTERIM again.
My "problem" is that the sound bite the Cinescape article gave me is: "...reminiscent of sagas like Dune and Foundation without ever being repetitive. It's thoughtful, but also a good old fashioned page-turner." Now, I figured I'd be insane not to put that in queries, but your advice above suggests it may not be of the greatest help. I've been using the term "space opera," but now I'm thinking that may help to kill me, too. One agent recently read the first few pages and said, "I'm not seeking Hard SF," which I didn't/don't think my novel is. It also has a few elements of military SF which another agent picked up on. All this leaves me shaking my head on how best to present it. If I can't be accurate, what's the most "salable" description? Comparing it to Peter F. Hamilton would not be inaccurate, but would it be a plus? The book has an anti-interventionist political undercurrent (present, but less pronounced than in, say, Ken McLeod). Should I highlight that, or will it make agents suspect I have an agenda?
And a follow-up: The two early draft novels I've since completed take place on earth in the near future. Is epic "space opera" (?) so impossible to crack for a first-timer that I might be better off intending to make one of these my "first novel"?
Thanks! I've really enjoyed discovering this forum, and appreciate your spending time here.
Phil
[INTERIM] by Philip K. Lentz
You wrote in your blog:
DO be aware that your novel will be compared with authors who have recently come to prominence, not long-term bestsellers. The former are the authors with whom a sales director will have to draw comparisons when a new writer is presented to the major bookselling chains. So if you're writing fantasy don't imagine that, because David Eddings and Terry Brooks have sold well for around thirty years, you should try to write something similar.
And you wrote elsewhere that authors should always know what's hot within the genre. I think I might have run into a bit of a problem on these fronts. Although my questions refer to my personal experience, I'm hoping the answers (how best to present work that might be or seem unfashionable in 2007) might be valuable to others.In 2003 a novel manuscript of mine, INTERIM, won the $2,500 first prize in a Cinescape Magazine competition. For the next couple of years I queried what agents I could find that didn't say "absolutely no SF," and got some interest but no deal. In retrospect I didn't query as widely as I might have, in favor of spending my energy on writing two more novels. Now I'm ready to push INTERIM again.
My "problem" is that the sound bite the Cinescape article gave me is: "...reminiscent of sagas like Dune and Foundation without ever being repetitive. It's thoughtful, but also a good old fashioned page-turner." Now, I figured I'd be insane not to put that in queries, but your advice above suggests it may not be of the greatest help. I've been using the term "space opera," but now I'm thinking that may help to kill me, too. One agent recently read the first few pages and said, "I'm not seeking Hard SF," which I didn't/don't think my novel is. It also has a few elements of military SF which another agent picked up on. All this leaves me shaking my head on how best to present it. If I can't be accurate, what's the most "salable" description? Comparing it to Peter F. Hamilton would not be inaccurate, but would it be a plus? The book has an anti-interventionist political undercurrent (present, but less pronounced than in, say, Ken McLeod). Should I highlight that, or will it make agents suspect I have an agenda?
And a follow-up: The two early draft novels I've since completed take place on earth in the near future. Is epic "space opera" (?) so impossible to crack for a first-timer that I might be better off intending to make one of these my "first novel"?
Thanks! I've really enjoyed discovering this forum, and appreciate your spending time here.
Phil
[INTERIM] by Philip K. Lentz