Um....the concept of telepathy and dragon riding are not new, they have been in many, many tales other than McAffery--those who think Anne was the first to put those elements together on paper are rather under-read, and the same can be said for those who think that the wizened old warrior guiding the young orphan/farm boy is unique to Star Wars has not seen enough movies.
King Arthur, the young orphan had Merlin, the wizened old teacher.
In Beowulf, I believe the dragon and Grendel's mother used spells, which could be considered an early unscientific form of telepathy, to communicate ....at least that is what I gather.
In nearly all ancient tales, the ancient gods spoke to the minds of humans, this is telepathy.
Lord Dunsay's "Miss Cubbidge and the Dragon of Romance" is an excellent tale that examines the romantic and majestic side of dragons.
More modern times, Jane Yolen also used dragon telepathy and dragon training, but nobody says her or Anne stole from each other.
I think Paoloni deserves his dues for putting the different elements together in a young adult reader way. The story itself is simple and pretty, I wouldn't call it legendary and beautiful, but it was pretty. It was a good story and it deserves its place. It does not, however, deserve a really crappy video game. And yes, I spent the money on it. I played it. Wished I had my forty bucks back.
PS: Very few 18 year olds have written such books. McAffery was much older with much more writing and LIFE experience to become a better writer. Personally, I'd love to see what Paoloni can do given another few decades.