opinion needed on first 10,000 words of my gemmell style book

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i need ONE PERSON to read my first 10,000 words of my new story to give me an idea whether i am following the right lines! whoever helps me with this will this will get an mention in the book and a signed copy if it gets published!
matt

 

[Brian G Turner]

Pay for an editor to do it: johnjarrold.com

 

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dont want them to edit it or even point me in the right direction just to say yey or nay

 

[Jimrollson]

Well im on a writing and journalism course in nz. I'd be keen as to have a read over what you've whipped up if thats sweet with you.