anthorn
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What do you think of this "BLURB" I know i've posted it here before but i would like some hints help and ideas. I have everything planned out, i just can't decide on what my main characters Anthorn and Nikita are.
A thousand years ago a war brought almost ruin to the world of Giana. Only by the combine efforts of the Councils best mancers was Anwyn the great evil defeated. Now years on the world has changed. Blamed for the long ago war, women users of the mystic arts are no longer able to use the most of their abilities, they suffer under the shadow of men. While the council, hidden away in their sky fortress Leviathan hold on desperatley to power. For a rebellion is coming and a rumour has surfaced that Anwyn will be reborn in the womb of a child of krushev.
Faircaira will give birth to that child, or so the council believe, and for that she must die. Garrison is an alcoholic, content to spend his days at the bottom of a bottle. Until, out of his past comes Faelii with an irrisistible offer. One final adventure. Sorrel is a harlot, but she suffers from great guilt and shame for the daughter she sold years ago to slavers.............
Okay and here are my current ideas for Anthorn and Nikita.
1) While half the world away, a boy awakes amongst firery ruins with no idea of his past or who he is and how he came to be there. Befriended by Nikita, a Singer they are thrown into a world of dark and shadow and betrayal.
2) Expelled from Mana City Anthorn walks the land alone bitter and angry. When he rescues a songmage he discovers a secret a thousand years old, drawn into a conflict older than them all, they must confront their pasts if they are to survive the present.
3) While half the world away, the arrival of three masked strangers at Anthorns home, sets in motion the end of a story began over 3,000 years ago.
4) Anthorn and Nikita have spent their lives upon the crime ridden streets of Mana City and have, on many occasions perpertrated those crimes, but when they are caught they are given a choice. Death or help hunt and kill a legend long dead
5) The Guardians have protected the lands for several hundred years, they are both respected and feared by all. Nikita was a Guardian, but now accused for a crime she did'nt commit by those wanting her dead she must run. Her only friend and hope is her lover Anthorn and fellow Guardian. But can he risk it all and condemn himself to die alongside her, to save her?
So any ideas or such would be great.
A thousand years ago a war brought almost ruin to the world of Giana. Only by the combine efforts of the Councils best mancers was Anwyn the great evil defeated. Now years on the world has changed. Blamed for the long ago war, women users of the mystic arts are no longer able to use the most of their abilities, they suffer under the shadow of men. While the council, hidden away in their sky fortress Leviathan hold on desperatley to power. For a rebellion is coming and a rumour has surfaced that Anwyn will be reborn in the womb of a child of krushev.
Faircaira will give birth to that child, or so the council believe, and for that she must die. Garrison is an alcoholic, content to spend his days at the bottom of a bottle. Until, out of his past comes Faelii with an irrisistible offer. One final adventure. Sorrel is a harlot, but she suffers from great guilt and shame for the daughter she sold years ago to slavers.............
Okay and here are my current ideas for Anthorn and Nikita.
1) While half the world away, a boy awakes amongst firery ruins with no idea of his past or who he is and how he came to be there. Befriended by Nikita, a Singer they are thrown into a world of dark and shadow and betrayal.
2) Expelled from Mana City Anthorn walks the land alone bitter and angry. When he rescues a songmage he discovers a secret a thousand years old, drawn into a conflict older than them all, they must confront their pasts if they are to survive the present.
3) While half the world away, the arrival of three masked strangers at Anthorns home, sets in motion the end of a story began over 3,000 years ago.
4) Anthorn and Nikita have spent their lives upon the crime ridden streets of Mana City and have, on many occasions perpertrated those crimes, but when they are caught they are given a choice. Death or help hunt and kill a legend long dead
5) The Guardians have protected the lands for several hundred years, they are both respected and feared by all. Nikita was a Guardian, but now accused for a crime she did'nt commit by those wanting her dead she must run. Her only friend and hope is her lover Anthorn and fellow Guardian. But can he risk it all and condemn himself to die alongside her, to save her?
So any ideas or such would be great.
(although i'm guilty of that meself)
