RodneyMcKay
Vigilante Showboat
Welcome once more to a revisited idea. I, RodneyMcKay, have through researched all given ideas and now Dawn of Fire has a better… thing… happening.
I was thinking over the ideas so I rewrote my Shakespearian work of art and now have something slightly greater
(This sentence is slightly exaggerated my friends so don’t get antsy about it.)
The Main Characters
Stephanie Caprica (She is the main main character)
She prefers to be called Steph. She is fifteen and is brilliant when it comes to science although she also believes she is brilliant at everything else (In some cases she is right, in others… not so much).
She idolises the Stargate Atlantis character, Dr Rodney McKay. She is very pretentious, arrogant, snarky, sarcastic, funny…etc. For most of the story she seems to be comic relief but she eventually shows that she isn’t quite as arrogant etc. as she may seem. She is tutored by Rodney McCain, PhD.
Oh and coincidentally she is not my high school crush.
Her father died when she was seven and she lives with her mother in the suburbs of Perth, Western Australia.
She is good friends with Ingrid Arion, Samantha Aquinon and Edwina Leonin.
She dislikes Merredith Librion because she is afraid she may be smarter then her.
Her worst enemy is one Elly Saggiria
Ingrid Arion
She is fifteen as well and has a very lonely sort of life before she meets Stephanie Caprica, she was always messing around with computers and such, pulling them apart and putting them back together. She got in trouble a couple of times for hacking various major corporations.
She is very family orientated (she seems to be about the only one not happy to have left). She is the quietest character in the story but whenever she talks she will say something important. She is tutored by Dr Selene McCauley.
She lives with her mother, father and older sister in the suburbs of Kuala Lumpur.
She is best friends with Stephanie Caprica and Good friends with Samantha Aquinon, Edwina Leonin and Merredith Librion.
She dislikes Elly Saggiria because of Stephanie Caprica.
Elly Saggiria
She is the top notch athlete with the ability to remember vast amounts of information. She is fifteen and dislikes people who dislike sport until she gets to know some of the other girls. She is tutored by Maj. John Fletcher.
She is loud and loves being around lots of other loud people. She lives with her mother and father in intermittent weeks. Her mother doesn’t really want custody of her but her father isn’t allowed to have full custody.
She is best friends with Ashleigh Griffin and Alex McCaffrey.
Stephanie Caprica is her worst enemy because she says that Elly is a mindless robot who has no real thoughts since her head is full of air.
The Storyline
Plot - A group of teenage geniuses has been chosen from each continent (four per continent) because of their various gifts (e.g. Ingrid can create illusions) to represent earth in an intergalactic study plan, designed to research less advanced cultures.
It has been found after much scrutiny that the only known beings that have advanced to earth’s level and above are in fact in other galaxies, not the Milky Way.
However, there is evidence suggesting that the gifted students are in fact the descendants of the twelve leaders of an extremely advanced race, who populated the entirety of the Milky Way, known as the Archaios, who looked very similar to humans.
Upon reaching their first destination the Battleship comes under fire by alien ships and they are forced to abandon ship and scatter. Steph, Ingrid and Elly end up on a fertile planet with a few others with no immediately obvious inhabitants.
They are stranded with:
Lucas Everett (can turn into a mouse),
Ashleigh George (recessive power),
Garrett Hart (ability to heal small injuries),
Edwina Leonin (mental connection with Sam),
Rodney McCain (Physics PhD, Chemistry PhD),
Darcy Reed (recessive power),
Karl Bennet (Doctor of Medicine),
Jordan Caprica (recessive power),
John Fletcher (Lt. Colonel),
Samantha Aquinon (mental connection with Edwina).
That makes fourteen of them.
They set up base camp and get comfortable.
(I’ll say it again…you probably think you know how it ends, but you're wrong.)
Super Objective
– To “put the pedal to the metal and jet,” (aka get back to the others.)
Minor Objectives
– Figure out who tried to kill them and why
– Other relative at the time objectives
Snippets
“I just ran the distance from New York to Philadelphia... it isn't that far actually… except in peak hour traffic.” Elly said flicking her hair.
Steph squinted at her for a moment then said “Run Forrest.”
“I can't believe they are using me to make a mouse retro virus” Luke said staring at the glass on the bedside table.”
Steph put a hand on his shoulder and looked at him sympathetically.
“You have only yourself to blame.”
“Unless you have something constructive to say, please go suck a lemon.” Rodney said continuing his work.
“I am a very constructive person when faced with the prospect of a lemon” she said. She turned and walked back out of the office towards her study area. “I hope you get really painful leg cramps.”
"McCain, how did it go?" Col. Sheppard asked as the doctor stepped out of the Skyleaper.
"Fine..." he snapped "Until teenage genius here decided to teach the Gerjod the words to 'Blame Canada'"
Steph stepped out a huge grin plastered on her face.
And their it is in all it’s simplicity.
RodneyMcKay
P.S. I kept the South Park thing because even if you don’t know exactly what it is, you can understand the general gist of what it’s getting at.
I was thinking over the ideas so I rewrote my Shakespearian work of art and now have something slightly greater
(This sentence is slightly exaggerated my friends so don’t get antsy about it.)
The Main Characters
Stephanie Caprica (She is the main main character)
She prefers to be called Steph. She is fifteen and is brilliant when it comes to science although she also believes she is brilliant at everything else (In some cases she is right, in others… not so much).
She idolises the Stargate Atlantis character, Dr Rodney McKay. She is very pretentious, arrogant, snarky, sarcastic, funny…etc. For most of the story she seems to be comic relief but she eventually shows that she isn’t quite as arrogant etc. as she may seem. She is tutored by Rodney McCain, PhD.
Oh and coincidentally she is not my high school crush.
Her father died when she was seven and she lives with her mother in the suburbs of Perth, Western Australia.
She is good friends with Ingrid Arion, Samantha Aquinon and Edwina Leonin.
She dislikes Merredith Librion because she is afraid she may be smarter then her.
Her worst enemy is one Elly Saggiria
Ingrid Arion
She is fifteen as well and has a very lonely sort of life before she meets Stephanie Caprica, she was always messing around with computers and such, pulling them apart and putting them back together. She got in trouble a couple of times for hacking various major corporations.
She is very family orientated (she seems to be about the only one not happy to have left). She is the quietest character in the story but whenever she talks she will say something important. She is tutored by Dr Selene McCauley.
She lives with her mother, father and older sister in the suburbs of Kuala Lumpur.
She is best friends with Stephanie Caprica and Good friends with Samantha Aquinon, Edwina Leonin and Merredith Librion.
She dislikes Elly Saggiria because of Stephanie Caprica.
Elly Saggiria
She is the top notch athlete with the ability to remember vast amounts of information. She is fifteen and dislikes people who dislike sport until she gets to know some of the other girls. She is tutored by Maj. John Fletcher.
She is loud and loves being around lots of other loud people. She lives with her mother and father in intermittent weeks. Her mother doesn’t really want custody of her but her father isn’t allowed to have full custody.
She is best friends with Ashleigh Griffin and Alex McCaffrey.
Stephanie Caprica is her worst enemy because she says that Elly is a mindless robot who has no real thoughts since her head is full of air.
The Storyline
Plot - A group of teenage geniuses has been chosen from each continent (four per continent) because of their various gifts (e.g. Ingrid can create illusions) to represent earth in an intergalactic study plan, designed to research less advanced cultures.
It has been found after much scrutiny that the only known beings that have advanced to earth’s level and above are in fact in other galaxies, not the Milky Way.
However, there is evidence suggesting that the gifted students are in fact the descendants of the twelve leaders of an extremely advanced race, who populated the entirety of the Milky Way, known as the Archaios, who looked very similar to humans.
Upon reaching their first destination the Battleship comes under fire by alien ships and they are forced to abandon ship and scatter. Steph, Ingrid and Elly end up on a fertile planet with a few others with no immediately obvious inhabitants.
They are stranded with:
Lucas Everett (can turn into a mouse),
Ashleigh George (recessive power),
Garrett Hart (ability to heal small injuries),
Edwina Leonin (mental connection with Sam),
Rodney McCain (Physics PhD, Chemistry PhD),
Darcy Reed (recessive power),
Karl Bennet (Doctor of Medicine),
Jordan Caprica (recessive power),
John Fletcher (Lt. Colonel),
Samantha Aquinon (mental connection with Edwina).
That makes fourteen of them.
They set up base camp and get comfortable.
(I’ll say it again…you probably think you know how it ends, but you're wrong.)
Super Objective
– To “put the pedal to the metal and jet,” (aka get back to the others.)
Minor Objectives
– Figure out who tried to kill them and why
– Other relative at the time objectives
Snippets
“I just ran the distance from New York to Philadelphia... it isn't that far actually… except in peak hour traffic.” Elly said flicking her hair.
Steph squinted at her for a moment then said “Run Forrest.”
“I can't believe they are using me to make a mouse retro virus” Luke said staring at the glass on the bedside table.”
Steph put a hand on his shoulder and looked at him sympathetically.
“You have only yourself to blame.”
“Unless you have something constructive to say, please go suck a lemon.” Rodney said continuing his work.
“I am a very constructive person when faced with the prospect of a lemon” she said. She turned and walked back out of the office towards her study area. “I hope you get really painful leg cramps.”
"McCain, how did it go?" Col. Sheppard asked as the doctor stepped out of the Skyleaper.
"Fine..." he snapped "Until teenage genius here decided to teach the Gerjod the words to 'Blame Canada'"
Steph stepped out a huge grin plastered on her face.
And their it is in all it’s simplicity.
RodneyMcKay
P.S. I kept the South Park thing because even if you don’t know exactly what it is, you can understand the general gist of what it’s getting at.
