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There is a poem.
The last line is a bit of fun
parvenu -French, or, one
who unexpectedly acquires?
The last two lines rhyme, to remind us
it really is a poem, one of the finest.
 
Release

Every step
Every move
Glide and turn
Feel the groove

Every breath
Every beat
Spin and stop
Feel the heat

Step on this dream
Take on the rhythm
Another place, another time
The dance floor is mine

Escape reality, free your mind
Just leave everything behind
Lose control
Feel the passion in your soul

Let it take over
Let it all go
Unite with music
Synchronize and flow
 
J Riff, I really liked that segment form the Outer Limits, even though I didn't understand the whole thing with the medallion. I've thought about this and try to obtain it in places when I write prose. I love coming across sections of prose that just flow like that, it seems nothing gets stuck in my head better.

Chrispenycate, wow. Beautiful and at the same time helpful advice. Thank you for both.
 
He said.

Take my hand and I will show you the world.
He said.
Take my heart and I will show you love.
He said.
Take my soul and I will show you happiness.
He said.
Take my life and I will show you grief.
He said.
As I smacked the strange insect in the windowsill
a bolt of lightening set fire to my house.
I should have listened to what he said.
 
I've been wondering a while about posting this one here due to its length and perhaps content. It's not finished, but I'm hoping that I'll be able someday to get the last few stanzas in.



"The way is clear," the rabbit said,
"I will guide your way.
There is no fear, no sorrow, no death.
There's only fun today."


So Alice jumped into the hole
And left her life behind.
"What trick is this?"
The young girl shrieked.
"I cannot see the light!"


The hole was far, too far to climb,
And Alice started to cry.
The rabbit grinned with bloody fangs,
As shadows blocked the sky.


"Follow me," the rabbit said.
"I will guide your way.
I shall show you to the Queen
And YOU shall be my pay."


Alice stood and wept and cried,
For her rash and foolish act.
Shadows gathered round her then,
Whispering that she tried.


On banks of rivers gushing blood
The rabbit stood to wait.
He wished to take his time with her
For he knew well her fate.


The shadows grew as Alice advanced
Their words echo and sigh
The girl screamed as she was caressed
The shadows moan and cry.


"Follow me," the rabbit said.
"I will guide your way.
It's not much further up ahead.
We may get there today."


Alice followed close behind
The way too dark for sight.
The further Alice wandered in
She lost more of her light.


"You must stay back!" the rabbit said
"The twins are now free.
Their victims' blood fills the river for
Tweedle Dum and Tweedle Dee."


"The big fat twins?" Alice asked
Her mind now far gone.
"The very same," the rabbit said.
"Their crime spree is not done.


"For you see," he soon explained,
"You are inside a dream
You sleep so peaceful in your bed
So deep you cannot scream.


"And here is where we must part,"
The rabbit said with a sigh.
"I'm very late for a private date,
So go on with your head held high."


Alice stared into the dark,
The sound of the twins ahead.
She knew to get into their range
Would surely make her dead.


So stealth is what she chose
To watch their horrid acts.
A little redhead girl they killed
Tore up and stuffed in sacks.

"Another fake," said Tweedle Dum
To his brother Tweedle Dee.
"A fake indeed, dear brother mine
"We need to find her, see."


"We do indeed," said Tweedle Dee
To his brother Tweedle Dum.
"If Alice gets away from us
I'm afraid that we're both done."


Alice swallowed nervously
And backed away in fear
She knew not their plans for her:
To ruin all she held dear.


The twins searched long and far and wide
But neither found their prey.
"It's just not fair!" said Tweedle Dum
"Our Alice got away!"


Soon Alice found herself
On quite a grisly scene
A mountain made of skin and skulls
The bones giving off a sheen.


"Wonderland is not the same,"
Alice muttered to herself.
She grabbed onto a pile of brains
Sitting casually on a shelf.


"Release us all," a small voice said.
"Free us of the twins.
Our souls here cannot leave
Until they pay for their sins."


Alice stared at the brain
She took down from the wall.
The voice, it seemed, had come from it
So she kicked it like a ball.


Soon the girl skipped and jumped
To the land of the March Hare.
She knew that it was time for tea
And maybe a good scare.


The March Hare looked up at Alice
As soon as she arrived.
She soon saw with disgust
The March Hare had no eyes.


"Come closer, dear, sweet child,"
The March Hare said, so slow.
"Come sit down, have tea with me
And stay to watch the show."


Alice sat down at the table
Holding a cup of tea.
The trees behind them moaned and howled
The only wall against the sea.


"No one has tea anymore,"
The March Hare said with a wheeze.
"The Hatter is dead thanks to you-"
His speech stopped by a sneeze.


"It's because of you I lost my eyes
And my taste of tea.
Yet I know far more than you, girl
I don't need my eyes to see.


"The Queen still rules in Wonderland
With a fist of hardened steel.
It's up to you to take her throne
At least that's how I feel."


"Is the dearest Cheshire here?"
Alice asked against all hope.
The March Hare grinned a toothless grin
Shook his head and exclaimed, "Nope!"


"The Cat has all but gone from here
The moment darkness gained.
He waited years-decades, girl!
Your absence had him pained.


And now we suffer from the Queen
And her dark and evil rule.
Her enforcer is the Jabberwock
The creature is most cruel.


But now you're here," the March Hare grinned
His tongue twisted and black.
"You must kill the Red Queen
If you wish to go back."


Alice let the Hare alone
To drink non-existent tea
She pushed her way past shrieking trees
Out to a raging sea.


The sea itself groaned and stirred
And opened many eyes.
A simple bottle was Alice's vessel
Through moans and screams and sighs.


It took the girl ten days and nights
To reach the darkened shore
The bottle burst upon the land
Alice can get back no more


The land beyond now firmly black
And beyond all good and light
Alice wished only to sleep
Right through the eternal night.


But trudged she on, through sightless steps
And trees unnatural made.
Fanged trunks and sharpened claws
Tore at her dress in rage.


"I'm an adult girl now," she said
"And not scared of childish fears
No stripping trees can scare me off!"
Her cries fell upon deaf ears.


Her dress was torn to shreds
As she got out past the trees.
She tore it off to undergarments
And continued on her leads.
 
The trouble is though, HJ, this poem is unfinished. I'm close to the end with this, there's just another few stanzas to go, Alice has to meet the Jabberwock and the Red Queen, but, I don't know how to word them out. :(
 

Burning in the rain


Through course of time I have been known to mortal man by many names
Some call me Hope
Some call me Fool
Some call me Love in Vain.
When rivers fail and deserts march, and tyrant rule with fear and flame
Then, when you turn to look for me
Shall I reveal myself to thee
As Burning in the Rain :(
 
A loop is what you're in when you get nowhere, though you try
Like a bee against a window, you'll be stuck there 'till you die
There is no true horizon where the ocean meets the sky
You have to CLIMB out of a loop, to leave it you must rise
Then, from beyond its limits, you may look back in surprise
To see your loop was never there at all
So -- what are you outside?
 
Wrote this just before about the world ending and wrote as a joke for the person next to me but i liked it so post on here as dont write poems often.

THE SECOND COMING 21.05.2011

I'LL COME TO YOU LIKE A THIEF IN THE NIGHT; MY DAGGER HIDDEN BEHIND A SMILE.

LONG I HAVE WAITED, BUT I WONT'T BE TRICKED AGAIN.

NOW AS YOU SLEEP, YOUR EYES WIDE SHUT, I CAN SMELL YOUR SIN.

ALMOST CHOKING ON THE STENTCH, I TRY TO RECALL MY FATHERS TEACHINGS AND MY MOTHERS LOVE, BUT STILL ALL I FEEL IS HATE.

FORGIVE ME FOR YOU HAVE SINNED; BRINGING FORTH THE DOOMS-DAY.

FIVE MONTHS TO GO; YOUR TIME IS RUNNING OUT.

MY DAGGER PRESSED AGAINST YOUR THROAT, YOU BETTER NOT SCREAM.

I'LL BE THEHRE, IN THE SHADOWS AND I CANT WAIT TO SHOW YOU WHAT I MEAN.
 
NUMBER ONE
How do you fly against the wind?
For there so high up you see no end.
You fight the currents weak and strong, for you are righteous and I am wrong.

How do you fly against the wind?
How do I even begin?
Fly me high into the sun
Way above all I have done.
Would that I
Could fly
Against the wind.

How do you fly against the wind?
Your wings of glory carry no sin.

Take me up away from here,
For I am haunted, shrouded, unclear.

How do you fly against the wind?
How do I even begin?
Fly me high into the sun
Way above all I have done.
Would that I
Could fly
Against the wind.

I cannot fly against the wind, my wings have blackened for I have sinned.
Lay me under skies of grey, on fields of clover I will stay.
This burden isn’t mine to keep, but yet I hold it so you may sleep.

Fly yourself away from here, and when you sleep love, I will be near.



NUMBER 2

Stranded, bleeding,
You can’t stop the fury.
Why can’t you hear me?
Wake up now do you see?
The fury is coming,
It’s beating, it’s drumming.
It hears you, it smells fear, there’s nowhere to hide here.
It’s crawling, consuming; it’s watching your heart beat.
It tastes now the flavor of heartache and anger, it wants more, it won’t stop.
It wants every last drop of you.

Oh do you see now, you opened your heart and let the fury in.
It’s in your head now, right where it wants to be,
Let the fun begin.

Your eyes are black now,
Coals of the fire deep within.
Can’t turn back now,
The fury’s alive it’s ready to spread despair.
Breathing the smoke of a thousand hatreds…
Everything that’s touched belongs to fury now.

Oh do you see now, you opened your heart and let the fury in.
It’s in your head now, right where it wants to be,
Let the fun begin.

Abandon, retreat now, this place can’t be saved.
Infected and toxic,
They’ll take the fury to their grave.


I haven't got names for these yet as I'm tired (3:30am...), so I've quite cleverly named them one and two for now :D maybe I'll think of something after I sleep. Anyway thanks for looking.
 
Well done Miranda!

Number One suits me well. I think I feel your pathos in it.
 
I like both. And I like that you're playing with rhyming patterns, instead of simply doing 'aa...bb...cc'. That was the only criticism I could make of your old work, and now it's an invalid one!
 
A grain of sand washed to the sea and caught inside an oyster
Became a pearl beyond all price
Set in the sceptre of a king
The ruler of an empire.

A grain of sand caught in a wheel
wore wood away with turning
And threw the chariot of a king
The ruin of an empire.

Skeleton fingers grip like claws
the sceptre that once ruled a world
Upon which, held by golden band
Remains a single grain of sand.
 
Fire To Finish

I'm posting this on behalf of a friend...
========

No thoughts left to organise.

Only brief clusters of meaningless words...

Futile brain rotting away.

Destruction of innocent animals by a mass of rotted human remains.

Was there ever a life ?

A world unknown to those who have killed.

Emptiness.

Evilness.

Hatred.

Guilt.

Fire to finish.

Now a true death.

Not a stagnant hell in the bleak oblivion of mutation.
 
Thanks Parson, Thank's Hil! Yeah I was trying a style outside of my usual this time, it was a bit more difficult I always seem to revert back to perfect rhymes, I'm trying to break that up a bit. I actually wrote those with more of a song style in mind, verse, chorus verse....
 
The Death of Youth

What is the score? I hear them cry
Sticky wicket today old man
Ten thousand down for no reply
It didn't go quite as we planned.

Who's in command? The old guard crow
Capital fellow,old school ties
I knew his father,don't you know?
In that direction no blame lies

And so old men will sit and read
Of fine young chaps who play the game
And fight and die for others' creed
Until at last none will remain
 

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