Princess Lucretia
Lost in the Twilight Zone
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- May 28, 2008
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Here's something I sort of threw together for fun and was wondering what people thought...also grammar help would be lovely, too...but please just don't forget to put in other thoughts about the piece.
Lips I could never touch.
A body I could never hold.
One I could never be with.
My eyes focused on his image in the car mirror. I could see him standing there through the fog gripping a single beaten bag while tears flooded his vivid emerald eyes. No color was left in his face while he stood there all contorted which reminded me of ruins; a decrepit building that was slowly crumbling to the ground. If one was ever to see an image of pain it was him watching me disappear. I know he loved me and I know he loved me dearly or at least he did one time, but the thing was…his memory was gone. It was a sacrifice, my sacrifice yet it felt more along the lines of me selling my heart and the soul to save the world.
Lips I could never touch.
A body I could never hold.
One I could never be with.
My eyes focused on his image in the car mirror. I could see him standing there through the fog gripping a single beaten bag while tears flooded his vivid emerald eyes. No color was left in his face while he stood there all contorted which reminded me of ruins; a decrepit building that was slowly crumbling to the ground. If one was ever to see an image of pain it was him watching me disappear. I know he loved me and I know he loved me dearly or at least he did one time, but the thing was…his memory was gone. It was a sacrifice, my sacrifice yet it felt more along the lines of me selling my heart and the soul to save the world.