LBL Review # 1-Rehearsals for Oblivion Act I

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Peter A. Worthy has come out of his way to colect and edit a colection of tales-let us call them "pastiches"-of Robert W. Chambers' "The King in yellow" stories.

The book is oficialy caled Act I and,though I am not quite sure,this may be just a reference to the first act of the King in Yellow being called "common"-while the second is considered bringing madness.

Anyway,the colection,put out by Dimensions Books in 2006 colects the following stories:

* The Curse of the King by Richard L. Tierney
* The Dream-Leech by William Laughlin
* Ambrose by John Scott Tynes
* In Memoriam by Robert M. Price and Roger Johnson
* Cordelia's Song-1938 poem published in Weird Tales-the authors name has not been able to be discerned
* Chatreuse by Michael Minis
* Cat with the hand of a Child by Marc McLaughlin
* Liloth by Susan McAdam
* Reflections in Carcosa by Mark Francis
* Broadalbin by John Scott Tynes
* Adventure of the yellow sign by G. Warlock Vance
* Tattered souls by Ann K. Schwadder
* What sad drum? by Steve Lines
* The Machine in Yellow by Carlos Orsi Martinho
* The Peace that will not come by Peter A. Worthy
* Yellow is the color of Tommorow by Ron Shiflt
* The Purple Emperor by Will Muray
* A Line of Questions by Joseph S. Pulver

The colection is fairly large and a fan of Chambers will certainly be thrilled by reading it,as I,but,of course it has its faults.

(Note:Anything beyond this point are SPOILERS)

To the individual tales:

* The Curse of the King is without a doubt the best piece of poetry in this colection and,while not as great as Chambers,it comes very close,especialy its second part-so,8/11

* The Dream-Leech is also probably the best working King in yellow story in the colection-of course,the usage of swear words anoyes me,as I am rather a "old style" adorer-ergo the 20's and 30's,so I dont realy quite like that aspect.
Summing it up-8/11

* Ambrose is a good fantastical tale,though it may not use all the possible horror of Carcossa's seting-also,I find the inclusion of the "robotic child" to be rather without any fundemental meaning-so,7.5/11

* In Memoriam-hmm,a good tale,not much to add,except a not for later,so 6.8/11

* Cordelia's Song-not nearly as powerfull to be included-though its usage by Price and Johnson in the above story seems worth a few plus points-so 6.35/11

* Chatreuse -a story which was good,plus for suing the decaying seting, however it will recieve a note together with In Memoriam in the "postscript"-6.96/11

* Cat with the hand of a Child-I fail to see the reason for the tales inclusion-its ending does somehow remind you of M.P.Shiel's "Xélucha"-howver it is not used efectively and,well,I believe it is rather an outline or a sketch rather then a fleshed out story-talk about "rushed"-so,for that reason alone,4.39/11

* Liloth -I see where she's aiming,however I cant say why its included,I would rather call this a horror on the more gruesome side-the thing which brings down some of the points is the ,well,to "mainstream" description of the "transition" she tries and the old womens words of reply-as a whole,that transition scene does only harm.So looking besides besides the KiY refrences,I have to deduct a point for the aforementioned overusage of repulsive for naught and the transition scene-so 5.5/11

* Reflections in Carcosa-hmm-standartly good poetic piece,so-6.56/11

* Broadalbin-Tynes,well,he does it again,he kind of dosnt use his own implications as he should-oh,not like Doyle in say "The beetle collector", but kindof let-down-ish,especialy if the "gangster" of the main character,the over usage of sex scenes (second point of Postscript) ,and a certain feeling almost bordering on "fanfic"-ness.So,because of this,6.5/11

* Adventure of the yellow sign-okay,seriously,this Holmes pasiche feels forced and the finalé,well,that and adding Holmes' sudden belief in homunculae not realy being explained away believabely-6/11

* Tattered souls-aah,well the KiY stuff is handled through a radical re-interpretation (Third point of the post script),so this brings down a few points-to be a bit generous,I'll say 6.7/11

* What sad drum?-poem of standard of slightly sub-standar quality-6.29/11

* The Machine in Yellow-foreign stuff,apreciated because of that. Otherwise, subjected to the same thing as In Memoriam and Chatreuse-sex scenes are kind of uneeded to.So 7.35/11

* The Peace that will not come-ive a gripe with this one-as with Liloth,it has some of ye ol' "gruesome horror"-which is done so well,Ill rate it at 7.01/11, however there is one problem-the thing breethes more "Silent Hill" then "The King in Yellow",though its done well.

* Yellow is the color of tommorow-one,I know its supossed to be tongue in cheek,but HPL's critique,under the faint guise of "Lovejoy" can annoy a fan. Then,theres a certain fanfiction-nesque in this one too.Points,however, have to come from actualy trying to continue Chambers¨fictional history .So,7/11

* The Purple Emperor-this one is subject to radical re-interpretation and, as HPL critisized Blackwood,"profesional ocultism"-on a scale Blackwood would have never dreamed of.It realy looses a lot on theese two acounts.So, 6.88/11

* A Line of Questions-6.77,standart.Gets 0.20 for reminding one of "The Prophets paradise" somewhat.

Postscript

I

The Play

Im sure it is a fundamental element in the KiY "universe" and as such deserves a place-however,does literary a quarter of the tales have to deal with the play being staged/discused?

The Dream-Leech,In Memoriam,Chatreuse and The Machine in Yellow all deal with this and all,except Chatreuse,have it staged.I think thats a bit much.

II

Sex

Chambers was a writer of cheep romance-the four (well,if you know a litle french,five) "Street" stories from KiY are remarkabely bellow notice and would be beter to be un-reprinted-as the majority of Chambers' "shop girl romances" or things like "The eggs of the silver moon" .

That being said,Chambers never depicted lust,nor sexual bestiality/desire in his KiY stories-howevr,here they are present to an astoundishing degree.while the times may have changed,is it realy needed?

Also,"The machine in yellow" has a queer kind of soap operatic-ness,which is on the level of Leonard Cline's "The Dark Chamber"-he dilutes his masterpiece with the "family romances" .

III

Radical re-interpretation

Chambers based his book on hints of some Ambrose Bierce stories,especialy "An Inhabitant of Carcossa".He added some stuff and stretched a great deal.However,today,people radicaly re-intepret Chambers' "hints" ,while accepting his alternations to Bierce-however,none of them accepts anything the other has writen ,simply having completely oposing views/interpretations- the very need to explain most of Chambers' hints at times sems superflous and ,especialy in this colection,side by side,a bit ridiculous.

End Rating:7/11-Certainly worth it.
 
Thanks for posting that one, Lobo. I'm curious about the volume, though I have strong reservations. It's rather difficult to do a take on The King in Yellow (and especially so if the play doesn't come into the mix, as it is the linchpin on which the corruption of the "primary" world turns), but it has been done now and again. Blish did a nice blending of that and some Lovecraftian touches with "More Light", I feel; as did Karl Edward Wagner with "The River of Night's Dreaming" -- though from what you say here, his inclusion of sex (which does play an important role in giving the story the feeling of the disintegration of the norm, not to mention a very dark and threatening feel) might put you off that one. Nonetheless, it is quite a good story, written with a psychiatrist's understanding of many of the currents underlying even the most innocuous acts....

As for "Cordelia's Song"... I can't recall (and my copy of this book is currently packed away for moving), but is that the verse by Vincent Starrett? If so, I'd have to disagree; as I think it actually does a very good job at hinting things that send a genuine shiver down the spine.... It is, however, a rather odd piece; but I'd say that's fitting, given the subject matter and milieu of the verse....

At any rate, thanks for the review. I'd like to hear others chime in on this one, if they will.....
 
Hmm-I dont know.The authors of the book were ˝unable to trace the authoprs estate˝.It was published in Weird Tales in 1938.
 
I looked this one up and yes, it is the Starrett poem. Vincent Starrett himself was of some note, having written a fair number of supernatural and detective tales, as well as having been a correspondent of HPL's and one of the earliest favorable commentators on him in the general literary scene. He also wrote several review columns which remain very entertaining and often thought-provoking, some of which were later collected together into book form, as well as editing several worthwhile anthologies and writing general introductions to several classics of the mystery/detective field:

TomFolio.com: by Vincent Starrett

(Stephen Vincent Benét, according to his brother William, was also a noted writer who expressed one of the earliest favorable opinions on Lovecraft....)
 
ALSO,now that EIGHT of my reviews are gone FOREVER,you will just have to IMAGINE what they were about.
 
Oh,lets just forget it-I just dont have a list,so the chance of a re post is thin.

Also,wouldnt this belong in reviews,when looking at it ?
 

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