Psyloke
Pseudo Adventurer
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- Jul 10, 2006
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Hi all, been over a year since i posted anything - busy with other things - but decided to get my MS out of storage and give it another go on the premise that maybe it wasn't the novel itself letting me down with agents but my synopsis. So I've re-written it and thought i'd post it here. Be as nasty as you like (long as there's reason behind it!).
by the way the one i'm posting is a short punchy version which I can embed in a query letter. I have another detailed two-pager which I might post another time.
Muchas gracias...
The ******* centres on Marcus, a young boy forced to grow up in the ultimate school of hard knocks. Having reached adulthood through unimaginable ordeals, and believing he's finally free, he tries to pick up the pieces of his life. This he does while the decadent empire to which he belongs crumbles in the face of insurmountable foes. The very land they walk on has become twisted by the curse of their forsaken gods, and an opposing nation, rising to world dominance threatens their borders; this amidst political intrigue and racial disharmony.
Despite his efforts Marcus is unable to detach himself from his traumatic childhood or the unfolding national crisis, and finds he must become embroiled in these world-changing events if he is to save the woman he loves and find some semblance of peace. The story deals with various themes from the point of view of the protagonist: Are we merely the sum of our experiences, and do those experiences then predestine our actions? Are the bonds of friendship stronger than the ties of family? It also touches on racism and national morality and accountability.
The ****** is a gritty coming-of-age fantasy with a smattering of romance. It's set in a dichotomous world of opposing empires and has elements reminiscent of epic Greek mythology.
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by the way the one i'm posting is a short punchy version which I can embed in a query letter. I have another detailed two-pager which I might post another time.
Muchas gracias...
The ******* centres on Marcus, a young boy forced to grow up in the ultimate school of hard knocks. Having reached adulthood through unimaginable ordeals, and believing he's finally free, he tries to pick up the pieces of his life. This he does while the decadent empire to which he belongs crumbles in the face of insurmountable foes. The very land they walk on has become twisted by the curse of their forsaken gods, and an opposing nation, rising to world dominance threatens their borders; this amidst political intrigue and racial disharmony.
Despite his efforts Marcus is unable to detach himself from his traumatic childhood or the unfolding national crisis, and finds he must become embroiled in these world-changing events if he is to save the woman he loves and find some semblance of peace. The story deals with various themes from the point of view of the protagonist: Are we merely the sum of our experiences, and do those experiences then predestine our actions? Are the bonds of friendship stronger than the ties of family? It also touches on racism and national morality and accountability.
The ****** is a gritty coming-of-age fantasy with a smattering of romance. It's set in a dichotomous world of opposing empires and has elements reminiscent of epic Greek mythology.
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