Wrote a song about Arya. opinions?

[Barristan's Squire]

still working on music.

by the way .. if you like metal
check out the Sword (swordofdoom.com) and their song "to take the black"
about the nights watch.. they are amazing.

"Arya's Nightly Vow"

Chorus:
Bite my lip, Taste Blood and Vengeance
As I let Needle into your Heart
All will soon know that Winter is Coming
In the Form of Arya Stark
I am the She-wolf
Blood of my Father
You will Soon Learn to Fear the Dark
Swift as a Deer, Silent as Shadow
Only through Death can Life be Bought - end chorus

with needle in hand, let me knit you a notion
you will all die, with a flick of my wrist
in one fluid motion, adding pain with a twist
on the balls of my feet
you'll not hear me coming
Quick as a snake, I'll put you to an end.
you took my Father, My home, and My Family
Forgive me if I have taken offense
I'll avenge them all, 'til my prayer-list is empty
and go to the godswood if i need amends.

Bridge:
give up my face, my eyes, i am No one
Valar Morghulis!
still as calm waters, I'm Weasel, I'm Arry
I'm Cat, you are mouse
Screaming 'WINTERFELL!, WINTERFELL!'
breaking my silence
I will set right my house


well?

also if you guys have anything like this to share, I would Love to read them.

 

[Ghost of Harrenhal]

Not bad but what music were you planning on having it written to? Like that of the Sword? They are a great band you are right.. I have both their albums and they are a refreshing set of musicians compared to a lot of other modern metal bands. I'm a grumpy old man when it comes to metal I have to admit, but the Sword is a modern band that I can really enjoy listening to.

 

[Barristan's Squire]

Not bad but what music were you planning on having it written to?

I tried to go the route of the sword but the lyrics didnt fit anything i tried.
I usually don't write the lyrics until last, so its more difficult in reverse.

What I have so far is the chorus and its more Classic Rock like the swedish band graveyard. kinda.
(myspace.com/graveyardsongs)

I'll be excited to get it done, But the work is slow.
but i went ahead and posted the lyrics here since they are done.
I am writing all the parts for it. I will be recording it in my home studio
when i finish is and 3-4 others. maybe I will throw it up on myspace and post a link.

 

[Young stormlord]

They are not the only fans. HammerFall - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Good song, though. I think that Soulforged is also good match to arya.

BLIND GUARDIAN - THE SOULFORGED LYRICS