Damiynn
Fantasy Author
Please remember if you don't know what is going on, this is over 800 pages into my series so everything has been pretty much established or revealed, I am mostly looking for the emotion levels here, making sure that what I am trying to state has been well written, and any grammar mistakes chris finds.
Gunther heard the explosions below. He could feel the vibrations shaking the stone in the main part of the palace and knew, his cousin and his group of righteous minded had finally arrived to reclaim the Throne and Crown.
Facing the mirror in his chambers, he traced the jagged scar on his face. Smiling sadly, he dropped his hands down to the table, grabbing up the metal gauntlets laying there. Slowly he pulled them and flexed his fingers. The time had come. Picking up his proctor’s sword, he cinched it tight to his waist. Leaving the image of the man he had become in the mirror behind him, he stepped out of the room and made his way to the place where he would find Travis.
***
Twenty years had passed since he had stood in the royal hall and yet it appeared almost exactly the same. Tall, decorated pillars stood in rows on each side of the room marking the way to where Damien would sit if they succeeded.
Travis stared past them as he scanned the elaborate hall. Seeing no one else, his eyes locked on the Sunstone throne. Once, his king and queen had sat there before they had died under his protection. The dais at the far end of the room was a huge slab of crystal marble, flickering as if the lights of the hall were inside it. On top of the crystal sat two huge thrones. Ornately designed and decorated in red and black, only the King or Queen were supposed to sit there.
Travis studied the empty thrones and felt his heart beating dully in his chest. Tears filled the corners of his eyes. Slowly he pulled his eyes away from the thrones and moved them down to the room’s other occupant. A solitary figure stood at the foot of the dais staring back at him through solemn grey eyes.
Gunther, wearing a proctor’s full plate drew out his sword. Clasping its hilt, he pointed the tip downward, moving into a classic challenger’s stance.
Travis saw his cousin’s stark white hair pulled back into a warrior’s ponytail, he looked ready for battle.
“There is no King here today Bertravis to stop our duel,” the proctor of Kallamar said, his voice echoing about the empty chamber.
“That’s because you forsook your vows and your honor cousin and betrayed him,” returned Travis coolly and levelly. Travis stepped towards his cousin, observing the other man.
Gunther also studied Travis. Gone, he realized, watching his cousin cross the room was the semi broken man he had beaten half to death in the Elvynn swamps of Edgemoor. Replaced now by the nobler one he remembered from their youth. Gunther actually smiled at the memory.
Travis not quite recognizing the expression on his cousin’s face asked, “What?”
“Nothing cousin,” remarked Gunther and the small smile faded. “I’m just glad that you have returned whole and we can now truly finish this.”
Travis realizing what Gunther meant, knew he was right. For the first time in twenty years he did feel whole. “It’s a shame we have come to this Gunther.” Travis knew that a lot of feeling was here between them and momentarily it almost felt like they were best friends again, not separated by hate and pride.
Sighing heavily, Gunther gave a small shake of his head. “We both chose different roads Travis and still both roads led us here. Let’s finish this with honor.
Travis drew a deep breath and nodded. The blademaster knew in his heart this was only going to end in one of their deaths and knew that there would be no way to stop it.
Eyes locking with Gunther’s he said sadly, “Tonight this ends, for better or worse its over. One of us though must continue on with our required duty?” Travis saw his cousin’s eyebrows rise almost to his hairline and thought for a moment he was going to disagree.
“Agreed!” called out Gunther surprising him. Moving like two leaping leopards, the pair met in the center of the throne room in a clash of spark and steel
Gunther heard the explosions below. He could feel the vibrations shaking the stone in the main part of the palace and knew, his cousin and his group of righteous minded had finally arrived to reclaim the Throne and Crown.
Facing the mirror in his chambers, he traced the jagged scar on his face. Smiling sadly, he dropped his hands down to the table, grabbing up the metal gauntlets laying there. Slowly he pulled them and flexed his fingers. The time had come. Picking up his proctor’s sword, he cinched it tight to his waist. Leaving the image of the man he had become in the mirror behind him, he stepped out of the room and made his way to the place where he would find Travis.
***
Twenty years had passed since he had stood in the royal hall and yet it appeared almost exactly the same. Tall, decorated pillars stood in rows on each side of the room marking the way to where Damien would sit if they succeeded.
Travis stared past them as he scanned the elaborate hall. Seeing no one else, his eyes locked on the Sunstone throne. Once, his king and queen had sat there before they had died under his protection. The dais at the far end of the room was a huge slab of crystal marble, flickering as if the lights of the hall were inside it. On top of the crystal sat two huge thrones. Ornately designed and decorated in red and black, only the King or Queen were supposed to sit there.
Travis studied the empty thrones and felt his heart beating dully in his chest. Tears filled the corners of his eyes. Slowly he pulled his eyes away from the thrones and moved them down to the room’s other occupant. A solitary figure stood at the foot of the dais staring back at him through solemn grey eyes.
Gunther, wearing a proctor’s full plate drew out his sword. Clasping its hilt, he pointed the tip downward, moving into a classic challenger’s stance.
Travis saw his cousin’s stark white hair pulled back into a warrior’s ponytail, he looked ready for battle.
“There is no King here today Bertravis to stop our duel,” the proctor of Kallamar said, his voice echoing about the empty chamber.
“That’s because you forsook your vows and your honor cousin and betrayed him,” returned Travis coolly and levelly. Travis stepped towards his cousin, observing the other man.
Gunther also studied Travis. Gone, he realized, watching his cousin cross the room was the semi broken man he had beaten half to death in the Elvynn swamps of Edgemoor. Replaced now by the nobler one he remembered from their youth. Gunther actually smiled at the memory.
Travis not quite recognizing the expression on his cousin’s face asked, “What?”
“Nothing cousin,” remarked Gunther and the small smile faded. “I’m just glad that you have returned whole and we can now truly finish this.”
Travis realizing what Gunther meant, knew he was right. For the first time in twenty years he did feel whole. “It’s a shame we have come to this Gunther.” Travis knew that a lot of feeling was here between them and momentarily it almost felt like they were best friends again, not separated by hate and pride.
Sighing heavily, Gunther gave a small shake of his head. “We both chose different roads Travis and still both roads led us here. Let’s finish this with honor.
Travis drew a deep breath and nodded. The blademaster knew in his heart this was only going to end in one of their deaths and knew that there would be no way to stop it.
Eyes locking with Gunther’s he said sadly, “Tonight this ends, for better or worse its over. One of us though must continue on with our required duty?” Travis saw his cousin’s eyebrows rise almost to his hairline and thought for a moment he was going to disagree.
“Agreed!” called out Gunther surprising him. Moving like two leaping leopards, the pair met in the center of the throne room in a clash of spark and steel