Published! in a NEW fantasy ezine...

Congratulations! Good to see a new young upstart in the market too!

Best of luck to you and the magazine both!

*furiously scribbles down submission guidelines....*
 
Congratulations Theleb K!
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nice piece, Theleb. I particularly liked how each name was so different from the other that it was almost (almost :D) impossible to get confused.

This line felt a little overdone: "like a steel-prowed ship forging through a darkly boiling sea."

But this is probably my favourite line: "Within the gateway shadows moved and strange lights danced." Lovely rhythm, perfect words, and redolent of foreboding. Loved it.

Nice build of tension and well described. A worthy publication, buddy. Well done.
 
Thanks guys, I'm glad it's gone down ok. I don't know if you had a look at the James Lecky story as well? If not, I suggest you do so. I think this guy is outstanding...

Chopper - go for it! Send something in... and if HFQ don't buy it - send it somewhere else! :D
 

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