anthorn
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Here is something I am working on. It is a supernatural fantasy set in a city. Torn between continuing it and leaving it.
It's about 1'200 words long.
THE MIDDLE STREET
The Voalance, that ship of ships and the first Airship to successfully fly over the marionette sea is no more; mystery surrounds its ruin. No one knows what caused the ship to burst into flame that fateful night and while some suspect foul play, others suspect a simple malfunction of technologies. Shipmaster Anubis and overseer Charles have refuted this latter theory, claiming that when the ship left it was in immaculate condition.
This brings us to the second theory, that some fiend dared attack the Presidents own Airship and succeeded in doing what 12 years of warfare could not. If one believes this theory then it is not so much who destroyed the ship than which of a hundred possible groups could have dared.
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For amongst these 800 downed souls were some of the greatest minds of our generation. This is a tragedy that this editor believes we may not recover from for a number of years. It is with special permission that I am allowed to print the names of the deceased. I shall start, as is appropriate, from importance downwards.
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RIDEON TOLBY
Since I can remember, this is the first time I recall not waking up having pissed the bed or screaming. Today my senses are remarkably clear though I still feel the weight of my years, and I suppose I should give thanks for this small mercy yet all I really want to do is punch a wall. I am not however, a violent man, I think I am not at least.
I tear the blankets from my body and place my feet upon a cold stone floor. The cold brings me fully from the land of my dreams and to the reality of my life; a deep breath is all I need to take before I make myself stand. “Another day in the city,” I say to nobody and open the shutters to my left. Light filters through bright and invasive and I groan. Is this really the most appropriate thing to see on a morning, a light that blinds? I will have to ask God should he ever make an appearance.
Eventually my eyes adjust to the morning light and I see the city below my window. I remember hearing that first thing in the morning this place is the very picture of divine beauty, but I cannot see it myself. What is so beautiful about stone and crystal buildings? I guess this is another thing I should ask God. Well, no point in delaying the inevitable then I suppose. Shutting the shutters, I go about dressing in simple clothes, as I don’t believe in grandeur (it’s pointless) and wash my face in a bowl of tepid water. A small mirror above it seeks to remind me of my appearance, to remind me that my blond hair is in need of a cut and my beard a trim, one more thing to add to my list.
With my morning routine complete, I force a smile onto my face, make my way down the old stone steps, and open the old wood door to the outside world. I stop and take in the sites. A new building greets me, a marble villa replacing what had been there before and I try to recall what that was but my memory fails me. Why can’t I recall? Memory is strange that way I suppose. Still, I should really find those builders that handle these things; it is not every day that a building appears in a day. I smile to the woman in the garden, she nods, and returns to tending to her garden and I continue down the street. Despite it being early morning there are already plenty of people on the streets, from bakers to merchants they’re all going about their daily routines. They wave in greeting and I wave back, well it is only polite that I do so; as my daddy liked to say ‘manners are everything.’
In all honesty, I am not looking forward to today at all. I am you see a very important man, an heir to a vast wealth that lends time for relaxation as I can afford to hire lackeys to do my work for me. My time is up though and I must face the fact that I can no longer hide from my fate. It is time to find a wife.
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SELPHIE TABERNACLE
Apparently, I am beautiful, at least that is what I am told and who am I to argue? Of course I’m not going to agree with them am I, no, that would be conceited no matter how true their statement is. Mind you, I am not stupid either; I know full well that these proclamations of my beauty are just attempts to get me into bed. Let them try. That man standing at the other side of the room is the worst of them. His name is Drake Fargo and he struts like some prized peacock, dressing in immaculate silk shirt and trousers. I would laugh at his pomp if it weren’t so ridiculous.
I close my eyes and listen to the orchestra play the overture to softly soft. It is a nice song but I sincerely doubt that the dozens gathered here in the Opera Hall can appreciate its beauty, as they’re too busy talking about the latest gossip. It is up to me as always to understand greatness. Perhaps I should explain a little of who I am then. My name is Selphie Tabernacle and I am somewhat renowned in this city as Prima Donna of the operatic arts. So far, I have sung in 30 plays and all before my thirtieth birthday, impressive no? I am a constant in an ever-changing world.
With a deep in take of breath, I move to the window and look out upon the city, my home. A beautiful city and it does not take me long to come across the different types of architecture. Everywhere I look I see plain three story tenements next to gothic spires and each time I cannot help but gasp in wonder at such sites. Only in this city do we have a complete mixing of styles.
It's about 1'200 words long.
THE MIDDLE STREET
JOURNAL
9th of Umberi 590
A special notice
THE VOALANCE DOWNED OVER
THE MIJACK ISLES
No survivors
This brings us to the second theory, that some fiend dared attack the Presidents own Airship and succeeded in doing what 12 years of warfare could not. If one believes this theory then it is not so much who destroyed the ship than which of a hundred possible groups could have dared.
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WE ARE A NATION IN MOURNING
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The president’s son Silias Saradone
World famed singer Noranti Noels
The pioneering doctor Ellusia Oggosk
Airship pilot Devon Moronth
His first commander Aeron Moronth
THE CITY
Since I can remember, this is the first time I recall not waking up having pissed the bed or screaming. Today my senses are remarkably clear though I still feel the weight of my years, and I suppose I should give thanks for this small mercy yet all I really want to do is punch a wall. I am not however, a violent man, I think I am not at least.
I tear the blankets from my body and place my feet upon a cold stone floor. The cold brings me fully from the land of my dreams and to the reality of my life; a deep breath is all I need to take before I make myself stand. “Another day in the city,” I say to nobody and open the shutters to my left. Light filters through bright and invasive and I groan. Is this really the most appropriate thing to see on a morning, a light that blinds? I will have to ask God should he ever make an appearance.
Eventually my eyes adjust to the morning light and I see the city below my window. I remember hearing that first thing in the morning this place is the very picture of divine beauty, but I cannot see it myself. What is so beautiful about stone and crystal buildings? I guess this is another thing I should ask God. Well, no point in delaying the inevitable then I suppose. Shutting the shutters, I go about dressing in simple clothes, as I don’t believe in grandeur (it’s pointless) and wash my face in a bowl of tepid water. A small mirror above it seeks to remind me of my appearance, to remind me that my blond hair is in need of a cut and my beard a trim, one more thing to add to my list.
With my morning routine complete, I force a smile onto my face, make my way down the old stone steps, and open the old wood door to the outside world. I stop and take in the sites. A new building greets me, a marble villa replacing what had been there before and I try to recall what that was but my memory fails me. Why can’t I recall? Memory is strange that way I suppose. Still, I should really find those builders that handle these things; it is not every day that a building appears in a day. I smile to the woman in the garden, she nods, and returns to tending to her garden and I continue down the street. Despite it being early morning there are already plenty of people on the streets, from bakers to merchants they’re all going about their daily routines. They wave in greeting and I wave back, well it is only polite that I do so; as my daddy liked to say ‘manners are everything.’
In all honesty, I am not looking forward to today at all. I am you see a very important man, an heir to a vast wealth that lends time for relaxation as I can afford to hire lackeys to do my work for me. My time is up though and I must face the fact that I can no longer hide from my fate. It is time to find a wife.
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SELPHIE TABERNACLE
Apparently, I am beautiful, at least that is what I am told and who am I to argue? Of course I’m not going to agree with them am I, no, that would be conceited no matter how true their statement is. Mind you, I am not stupid either; I know full well that these proclamations of my beauty are just attempts to get me into bed. Let them try. That man standing at the other side of the room is the worst of them. His name is Drake Fargo and he struts like some prized peacock, dressing in immaculate silk shirt and trousers. I would laugh at his pomp if it weren’t so ridiculous.
I close my eyes and listen to the orchestra play the overture to softly soft. It is a nice song but I sincerely doubt that the dozens gathered here in the Opera Hall can appreciate its beauty, as they’re too busy talking about the latest gossip. It is up to me as always to understand greatness. Perhaps I should explain a little of who I am then. My name is Selphie Tabernacle and I am somewhat renowned in this city as Prima Donna of the operatic arts. So far, I have sung in 30 plays and all before my thirtieth birthday, impressive no? I am a constant in an ever-changing world.
With a deep in take of breath, I move to the window and look out upon the city, my home. A beautiful city and it does not take me long to come across the different types of architecture. Everywhere I look I see plain three story tenements next to gothic spires and each time I cannot help but gasp in wonder at such sites. Only in this city do we have a complete mixing of styles.