A Perpetual Request - Short Story Feedback

Perpetual Man

Tim James
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I've just finished a short story - approximately 6,000 words (just under).

It is SF, but a slight more 'real' SF than I am normally comfortable with.

It's only the second completed story since my return to my writing attempts and wondered if there is anyone who would mind just taking a quick look through, see if it reads all right, if there are any glaring errors and just give a general opinion!

Many thanks,

Perp.
 

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