Article--The Origins and History of a SF Original

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This is just an inspirational story that I'm offering some bloggers who need some fill material, or anyone who is interested in story origins. Just want to know if it sounds interesting or compelling in any way.

Thanks in advance,

Chris

The story Behind Planet Janitor Custodian of the Stars
A science fiction novel by Chris Stevenson

Planet Janitor Custodian of the Stars did not suddenly spring forth from my forehead like Harry Potter did with J.K. Rowling. Sometimes ideas come to a writer in puzzle pieces over a long period of time. Such was the way this story gradually unfolded to me. It went something like….

I once heard an inventor friend of mine use the words, “Planet Janitor“ in describing a company he wanted to form that purified water through ionization. He thought the name had an environmentalist quality to it. That was 15 years ago. He never formed the company, but I never forgot the company name--it had a catchy, unique ring to it.

Fast-forward 15 years--I tried to come up with a Science Fiction tale that hadn’t been done before. I'm joking right? I imagined some space travelers landing on a planet, where they ended up knee-deep in the bones of some giant alien species. The bone yard stretched for hundreds of miles in every direction.

The crew couldn’t fathom a catastrophe of such magnitude, a veritable genocide that seemed to wipe out the entire planet’s inhabitants. The most profound question amounted to what or who had caused such a global massacre. I imagined their ship was disabled upon landing, so they would eventually find out by unraveling a mysterious chain of events that would have them confront this unknown nemesis/killer. That idea stalled out for awhile.

A year later I read an article about the use of precious metals that were used in the construction of spacecraft, space stations and satellites. We’re talking about gold, silver, magnesium, aluminum, platinum and titanium. The article went on to propose that in the future, some lucky entrepreneur might be able to build a craft that could scoop up all of this wayward flotsam, and make a fortune with the reclamation. My mind wandered, thinking about asteroids that might contain precious metals, as well -- kind of like a version of American Pickers IN SPACE.

It wasn’t until I put the three ideas together that I believed I had a plausible story arc. What if I had a crew who were adept at space trash salvage, but they had become so good at it that they mined rogue asteroids, and even ventured further out onto the spiral arm to visit small moons and planets. They’re notoriety would increase, and perhaps they might be hired on as private contractors to save some of earth’s eco-systems. They would use some special skills that involved pyrotechnics, chemicals and high-tech machinery. Give them an old Russian ore freighter to scout the solar system and wahla! Those were my environmentalists--my planet janitors.

It wasn’t too far of a leap to imagine that this crew might have one last big job to perform before the captain and crew retired, since they’d obviously become quite rich, and a little famous. Then it hit me. Take them on the boldness mission ever, further out than they’d ever gone before. Take them so far out that their cyro sleep would advance the age of earth’s inhabitants by 25 years--make their departure soul-wrenching, leaving loved ones and relatives behind.

That destination, of course, had to be the death planet I thought of upteen years ago. Blackmail the crew to get them there, sabotage their ship, give them no hope of ever returning, then assault them with the planetary killers. With no weapons, dysfunctional equipment, personality squabbles, betrayal, and dwindling resources, how could any crew manage to survive and make it back alive?

So, with that daunting plot, and in a vintage, old-school style voice and tone reminiscent of Robert Heinlein and Phillip Jose Farmer, I embarked on that journey and finished Planet Janitor Custodian of the Stars two years ago. It was the book that landed my second agent. Since then it has been rewritten and edited so many times, I get the shivers thinking about it. It sold to Engage Books of Vancouver, Canada, to a wonderful publisher/editor/friend of mine, Alexis. They spared no expense in the layout and format, including 26 interior illustrations and a custom-painted full color wrap-around lithograph cover.

I often think of PJ as a cross between Starship Troopers and Robinson Crusoe on mars. I’ve written 17 other books besides PJ, but for some reason this one will remain very near and dear to my heart. I was inspired in very beginning of my writing career by the late, great Poul Anderson, who became my mentor. I also took many lessons from Alan Dean Foster, and remain a friend and admirer of his to this day.
Planet Janitor is available at Amazon, in hardback and Kindle editions. The Kindle price has been reduced to $1.99! The trade paperback edition will soon be released.
 
I haven't read your book and I'm not sure what you require from this critique.

However, that's never stopped me putting in a six penneth worth in, in the past, so here goes with what I think you're after (If I'm wrong - sorry)


This is just an inspirational story that I'm offering some bloggers who need some fill material, or anyone who is interested in story origins. Just want to know if it sounds interesting or compelling in any way.

Thanks in advance,

Chris

The story Behind Planet Janitor Custodian of the Stars
A science fiction novel by Chris Stevenson

Planet Janitor Custodian of the Stars did not suddenly spring forth from into my forehead (I thought forehead was the emotional area) like Harry Potter did with J.K. Rowling. Sometimes ideas come to a writer in puzzle pieces (puzzle pieces? from random connections - maybe) over a long period of time. Such was the way this story gradually unfolded evolved to me. (Who else would it be?)

(new para) It went something like….

I once heard an inventor (was he the inventor of the technology, or someone that came up with a spin off idea - in either case, 'inventor friend' here, sounds a bit childish IMO) friend of mine use the words, “Planet Janitor“ in describing a company he wanted to form that purified water through ionization. He thought the name had an environmentalist quality to it. That was 15 years ago. He never formed the company, but I never forgot the company name--it had a catchy, unique ring to it.

Your math doesn't add up :- that was fifteen years ago then below you fast forward fifteen and then add another year. So you will be writing this book in twelve months time and what's more you'll do it in one day get it published the next .... :)

Fast-forward 15 years--I tried to come up with a Science Fiction tale that hadn’t been done before. I'm joking right? (not inspirational - Effectively those young aspiring writers are going to get a kick in the head when they read that, whatever it is they thought of - it's been done before - it depressed me, a young thrusting lad with high hopes of authorial success - plus it says the same about your book, which can't be good. Never 'do down' your own offering - if you don't believe it it why should I) I imagined some space travelers landing on a planet, where they ended up knee-deep in the bones of some giant alien species. The bone yard stretched for hundreds of miles in every direction.

The crew couldn’t fathom a catastrophe of such magnitude, (a comment on the book itself - a bit too late now I know, but why couldn't they fathom it. It's not a big leap from the dinosaurs to what you describe - I mention this because I notice you tag on an 'available from' at the end of the piece - Now if you are hoping to get people to part with cash after reading this, then I suggest you leave out, what I consider to be, a weak areas of the plot, as this doesn't inspire me to want to buy your offering) a veritable genocide that seemed to wipe out the entire planet’s inhabitants. The most profound question amounted to what or who had caused such a global massacre. I imagined their ship (confusing - with the dead animals/inhabitants then going straight into this sentence) was disabled upon landing, so they would eventually find out by unraveling a mysterious chain of events that would have them confront this unknown nemesis/killer. That idea stalled out for awhile.

A year later I read an article about the use of precious metals that were used in the construction of spacecraft, space stations and satellites. We’re talking about gold, silver, magnesium, aluminum, platinum and titanium. The article went on to propose that in the future, some lucky entrepreneur might be able to build a craft that could scoop up all of this wayward flotsam, and make a fortune with the reclamation. My mind wandered, thinking about asteroids that might contain precious metals, as well -- kind of like a version of American Pickers IN SPACE. (As you said above, this has been covered - many times - so not good for book sales below)

It wasn’t until I put the three ideas together that I believed I had a plausible story arc. What if I had a crew who were adept at space trash salvage, but they had become so good at it that they mined rogue (Rogue? as opposed to any other kind, full of precious metals?) asteroids, and even ventured further out onto the spiral arm to visit small moons and planets. They’re notoriety would increase, and perhaps they might be hired on as private contractors to save some of earth’s eco-systems. (why? there doesn't seem to be a connection between robbing asteroids - making as much pollution as would be required, because, who would care if an asteroid is polluted or not - and then using any skills so gained to clean up the planet) They would use some special skills that involved pyrotechnics, chemicals and high-tech machinery. Give them an old Russian ore freighter to scout the solar system and wahla! Those were my environmentalists--my planet janitors. (scouting the solar system is not Earths eco systems)

It wasn’t too far of a leap to imagine that this crew might have one last big job to perform before the captain and crew retired, since they’d obviously become quite rich, and a little famous. Then it hit me. Take them on the boldness boldest mission ever, further out than they’d ever gone before. Take them so far out that their cyro cryo sleep would advance the age of earth’s inhabitants by 25 years (so, twenty five years then) --make their departure soul-wrenching, leaving loved ones and relatives behind.

That destination, of course, had to be the death planet I thought of upteen years ago. Blackmail the crew to get them there, sabotage their ship, give them no hope of ever returning, then assault them with the planetary killers. With no weapons, dysfunctional equipment, personality squabbles, betrayal, and dwindling resources, how could any crew manage to survive and make it back alive?

So, with that daunting plot, and in a vintage, old-school style voice and tone reminiscent of Robert Heinlein and Phillip Jose Farmer, I embarked on that journey and finished Planet Janitor Custodian of the Stars two years ago. (more bad math) It was the book that landed my second agent. Since then it has been rewritten and edited so many times, I get the shivers thinking about it. It sold to Engage Books of Vancouver, Canada, to a wonderful publisher/editor/friend of mine, Alexis. They spared no expense in the layout and format, including 26 interior illustrations and a custom-painted full color wrap-around lithograph cover.

I often think of PJ as a cross between Starship Troopers and Robinson Crusoe on mars. I’ve written 17 other books besides PJ, but for some reason this one will remain very near and dear to my heart. (sounds like further attention to the math is required. By this I mean it reads like this was your first book and you have written 17 since) I was inspired in very beginning of my writing career by the late, great Poul Anderson, who became my mentor. I also took many lessons from Alan Dean Foster, and remain a friend and admirer of his to this day.
Planet Janitor is available at Amazon, in hardback and Kindle editions. The Kindle price has been reduced to $1.99! The trade paperback edition will soon be released.

Now, as I said at the beginning, I've approached this from my, perhaps badly formed view of, your attempting to interest people in how the story developed, together with a small attempt at a few sales at the end.

I would drop the 'available from' section all together. IMO it distracts from the advice and interest this article might produce, for very little gain on your part. Leave the book promotion to that friend of yours.

If you did this, then all the comments I made about how the plot doesn't hang together, become mostly irrelevant - and again, IMO more interesting.

Hope I helped

TEiN
 
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Tein--that was extremely helpful, and I'm going to concentrate on clarifying some of those thoughts and sentenences. I've noticed that several interviews start out with "How did you get the idea for..." So I thought I would cover that ground and have something ready. Particulary in reference to the title. I'm trying to explain how a chain of events, over a period of years, culminated in the idea and final execution of the book. Perhaps a little different from other author's experiences.
Kindly,
Chris
 
Triceratops, this isn't really a critiquing matter as you've written it, and since it's already published, this work isn't eligible for a piece in critiques in any event. Accordingly, I'm moving it to GWD.
 

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