Finished Ian Watson's
The Jonah Kit.
My first encounter with Ian Watson was years ago with
The Books of the Black Current which I recall liking in some strange way, but I didn't follow up for years, until I ran into four Watson books, one after the other, and bought them without reading any. (
The Jonah Kit, for instance, cost 50 cents US.) My last encounter was a mostly unpleasant one with
The Embedding.
In this one, the publisher of the paperback (Bantam) criminally messed me up right out of the gate. The front cover blurb says "A child and a dead cosmonaut -- joined in the brain of a giant whale!". Watson writes the whale chapters in a stream of alien consciousness and he chooses to expose what's going on in the human chapters in gradually increasing dribs and drabs, so it took me a long time to realize that the blurb was wrong and had misled me: a dead cosmonaut is in the brain of a child and a zombified blind guy is in the brain of the whale. And the blurb on the "page before the title page" (what is that called? The "recto of what would be the frontispiece"? The
very first page) is taken from Chapter 27 of 29 (page 196 of 214, i.e., the climactic finale) which completely ruins things. And it didn't help that the closest thing to a protagonist was named Richard Kimble who, to me, is
The Fugitive, so I suffered from constant cognitive dissonance - maybe generally appropriate in a Watson novel, but surely specifically accidental.
That aside, this has a lot in common with
The Embedding, but is better, overall. I don't want to get too much into it for fear of spoiling things for anyone who hasn't read it and would be interested in it but it hinges on mathematical models of minds being "imprinted" on other brain structures, the "observer makes the world" aspects of quantum mechanics and consensus reality, and the nature of language/perception/intelligence. It has probably four main story threads: American mad scientists in Mexico, Russian mad scientists in far east Russia, Japanese not-so-mad scientists and American spooks in Japan, and the semi-human whale in the Pacific.
The following are just descriptions of my personal, subjective, somewhat facetious impressions. It has a gallery of unpleasant human characters and some 1970s-style whales. It has a lot of "tell, don't show", plenty of "as you know, Bob", a heavy wallop of generalized misanthropy, some misogyny, and lots of anti-Americanism (but not as virulent as
The Embedding), and is somewhat comically overwritten or mis-written in places. Chapter 10's cosmic vulture characterization and Chapter 24's two mind-shatteringly divergent descriptions given for a couple's sexual encounter being particularly good examples, along with the pure narrative infodump about Ruth's character (which is no Thomas Hardy and no Eustacia Vye).
That said, while I was about to give up as I approached the halfway point, it got somewhat better as it went on, even attaining a kind of demented power in the Altamont-the-size-of-Woodstock scenario in Chapter 16. And the ending, while not entirely satisfying, was much better than the muddle that was the
The Embedding. The book was more consistent (or gradual in its inconsistency) from beginning to end. And there's no questioning it's jam-packed with philosophico-scientific ideas and opinions.
Basically, I didn't much like it, but it certainly had interesting elements and, for people who'd like the good parts more than they'd dislike the bad (or who would see what I take as bad to be good), I could recommend it.