Advice needed please

[Biscuitorcake85]

Hi all,

my friend and I have written a 50 page script for a graphic novel titled "Divided Kingdom: The Birth of Britannia". It's a dystopian sci-fi story set in the near future. We have started work on the 2nd one "Divided Kingdom: Justice has a Face". Would anyone be interested in reading samples and giving us feedback/advice about where to go from here?

Many thanks
Bill Clark

 

[Pedro Del Mar]

Hi Bill,

I'd love to read some of the samples and give you some feedback.

The storyline sounds right up my street, I've no experience in giving feedback but I've a degree in English and been a fan of the genre for decades.

Cheers

Crooksy