subtletylost
Formerly fishii
Part 3 I can't think of what to say here. It's been a while since I've even looked at this part. I assume that my main concerns should be grammar and dialogue, but I am not really sure.
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We went in to Ms. Swain's room. "There is an empty desk near where I sit. I'm pretty sure that you can sit there. Swainey! Are you in here anywhere?"
"For the last time, Maritza: don't call me Swainey!"
"Oh really why not? You keep telling me, but remind me again."
Ms. Swain comes out from in her office. "How do you feel about summer detention? Plus four weeks of housecleaning? What about changing a seven month old baby's dirty diaper?"
"Detention? In summer? More focused time to sleep and write. Four weeks of house cleaning? I already clean your house. Changing Rohan's dirty diaper? I do that already when I baby sit him. Come on Aunt Jennica. You can do so much better." Those threats are meaningless to me and she knows it.
"I guess I could always send you to Mr. Anton's office," she says casually.
I can see her peering slyly over her shoulder. Mr. Anton. The scariest man in the school.
"Who's Mr. Anton?" Diana asks.
"He's the principal," Anna states.
"He's the scariest creepiest person in the whole school," Joe adds.
"Now don't be too rash. I am sure we can work something out. I won't call you Swainey anymore. Now can we just forget this. Oh yeah, Ms. Swain we have a new student. Diana, this is Ms. Swain. Ms. Swain this is Diana. She moved here from Rome."
"It's very nice to meet you. The only empty desk is near Maritza, I am sure she'll help you find it. Maritza. I could do worse. I still remember what your mother called you when you were little." She leans down and whispers in my ear. "Little Fuzzy PumpkyWumpky." My face goes red. She straightens up. "Now I could call you that in front of the whole class or you can go sit down and try to erase the word Swainey from your vocabulary. Your choice." She turns around and goes back to her office.
I walk back to my seat. Pointing at the seat next to me, "That one is empty."
I lay my head down on my desk and sigh. Why does she still remember that? My phone vibrates in my pocket. I pull it out and lay it on the desk. It's a message from Sarah.
I had a vision.
I sigh and reply, What else is new?
The phone vibrates again. You are in danger.
That can't be good. Danger of what? I've already got beaten up by Jamie. Don't tell dad.
What's red, orange and yellow? Always hot never mellow. It will fill the air with smoke causing people to choke.
I hate easy riddles. Fire.
Where r u?
Ms. Swain's room.
The school then?
Yes.
People will get hurt. No one will see it until it's too late. Be careful today.
I will.
I contemplate telling the others, but decide not to worry them. Sarah's visions don't always mean what she thinks they do. A vision of fire? That really can't be good. Even if it doesn't really mean a fire. People start coming into the class room and I put my phone up. Some of them look at Diana questioningly but most ignore her. When the class room is mostly full, the bell rings. Ms. Swain walks back into the room and sits at her desk. She opens the crappy school computer and turns on the activboard. She types in the computer for everyone to be quiet. The scattered few who are still talking, stop and she stands up.
"Today we have a new student. Please stand up and introduce yourself to the class."
Diana stands up. "Ciao. My name is Diana. It's nice to meet you."
"Does anyone have any questions for Diana?"
Tommy Pratt stands up and says, "I do. Where are you from?"
"Good question. Rome, Italy." Diana answers.
"One more. Can you speak Italian?"
She chuckles and then says, "Mi suona come un idiota quando chiedo un italiana se possono parlare italiano."
"Interesting. Can you tell us what that means? Please." Ms. Swain is smiling. She must already know, she did spend a couple summers in Italy.
"It roughly translates to: I sound like an idiot when I ask an Italian if they can speak Italian."
Everybody laughs and Tommy sits back down. Some kid on the other side of the room stands up. I can't remember her name but she's popular so I could care less. "I have a question. If you grew up in Italy, how come you can speak such good English?"
"I can understand that question, they teach English as a second language in all Italian schools. But I can speak it better than most of my old class because every summer for the last eight years I would stay with my uncle in England."
"Oh okay." She sits back down. Diana sits back down.
"If there are no more questions, I'll begin the lesson. Today we're going to learn about the predator prey relationship, food chains and food webs. Can anybody give me an example of a predator prey relationship?" Diana raises her hand. "Yes Diana."
"The Arctic Wolf feeds off bears, elk, seals and sometimes small children."
"Yes, wait really? Small children? Must be when they're really desperate. Okay yes. Any other guesses?"
Someone in the back of the room yells out. "It's a dog eat dog world. Dog one is the predator, must be a German Shepard. Dog two is the prey and must be a Chihuahua or some other tiny excuse of a dog."
"That's," Ms. Swain begins, then she stops for a minute, and then continues, "a completely logical argument. Not an answer I was expecting but I really can't find fault in the argument you make."
I stare off into space, until Diana hits my arm. "What?" I ask her.
"I suppose you didn't hear the question. Humans eating domestic animals like cows, pigs and chickens is not an example of a predator prey relationship. Why?"
"Oh it's because we don't hunt them but humans eating deer, fish or any other wild animal that they caught and killed for food would be a predator prey relationship."
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We went in to Ms. Swain's room. "There is an empty desk near where I sit. I'm pretty sure that you can sit there. Swainey! Are you in here anywhere?"
"For the last time, Maritza: don't call me Swainey!"
"Oh really why not? You keep telling me, but remind me again."
Ms. Swain comes out from in her office. "How do you feel about summer detention? Plus four weeks of housecleaning? What about changing a seven month old baby's dirty diaper?"
"Detention? In summer? More focused time to sleep and write. Four weeks of house cleaning? I already clean your house. Changing Rohan's dirty diaper? I do that already when I baby sit him. Come on Aunt Jennica. You can do so much better." Those threats are meaningless to me and she knows it.
"I guess I could always send you to Mr. Anton's office," she says casually.
I can see her peering slyly over her shoulder. Mr. Anton. The scariest man in the school.
"Who's Mr. Anton?" Diana asks.
"He's the principal," Anna states.
"He's the scariest creepiest person in the whole school," Joe adds.
"Now don't be too rash. I am sure we can work something out. I won't call you Swainey anymore. Now can we just forget this. Oh yeah, Ms. Swain we have a new student. Diana, this is Ms. Swain. Ms. Swain this is Diana. She moved here from Rome."
"It's very nice to meet you. The only empty desk is near Maritza, I am sure she'll help you find it. Maritza. I could do worse. I still remember what your mother called you when you were little." She leans down and whispers in my ear. "Little Fuzzy PumpkyWumpky." My face goes red. She straightens up. "Now I could call you that in front of the whole class or you can go sit down and try to erase the word Swainey from your vocabulary. Your choice." She turns around and goes back to her office.
I walk back to my seat. Pointing at the seat next to me, "That one is empty."
I lay my head down on my desk and sigh. Why does she still remember that? My phone vibrates in my pocket. I pull it out and lay it on the desk. It's a message from Sarah.
I had a vision.
I sigh and reply, What else is new?
The phone vibrates again. You are in danger.
That can't be good. Danger of what? I've already got beaten up by Jamie. Don't tell dad.
What's red, orange and yellow? Always hot never mellow. It will fill the air with smoke causing people to choke.
I hate easy riddles. Fire.
Where r u?
Ms. Swain's room.
The school then?
Yes.
People will get hurt. No one will see it until it's too late. Be careful today.
I will.
I contemplate telling the others, but decide not to worry them. Sarah's visions don't always mean what she thinks they do. A vision of fire? That really can't be good. Even if it doesn't really mean a fire. People start coming into the class room and I put my phone up. Some of them look at Diana questioningly but most ignore her. When the class room is mostly full, the bell rings. Ms. Swain walks back into the room and sits at her desk. She opens the crappy school computer and turns on the activboard. She types in the computer for everyone to be quiet. The scattered few who are still talking, stop and she stands up.
"Today we have a new student. Please stand up and introduce yourself to the class."
Diana stands up. "Ciao. My name is Diana. It's nice to meet you."
"Does anyone have any questions for Diana?"
Tommy Pratt stands up and says, "I do. Where are you from?"
"Good question. Rome, Italy." Diana answers.
"One more. Can you speak Italian?"
She chuckles and then says, "Mi suona come un idiota quando chiedo un italiana se possono parlare italiano."
"Interesting. Can you tell us what that means? Please." Ms. Swain is smiling. She must already know, she did spend a couple summers in Italy.
"It roughly translates to: I sound like an idiot when I ask an Italian if they can speak Italian."
Everybody laughs and Tommy sits back down. Some kid on the other side of the room stands up. I can't remember her name but she's popular so I could care less. "I have a question. If you grew up in Italy, how come you can speak such good English?"
"I can understand that question, they teach English as a second language in all Italian schools. But I can speak it better than most of my old class because every summer for the last eight years I would stay with my uncle in England."
"Oh okay." She sits back down. Diana sits back down.
"If there are no more questions, I'll begin the lesson. Today we're going to learn about the predator prey relationship, food chains and food webs. Can anybody give me an example of a predator prey relationship?" Diana raises her hand. "Yes Diana."
"The Arctic Wolf feeds off bears, elk, seals and sometimes small children."
"Yes, wait really? Small children? Must be when they're really desperate. Okay yes. Any other guesses?"
Someone in the back of the room yells out. "It's a dog eat dog world. Dog one is the predator, must be a German Shepard. Dog two is the prey and must be a Chihuahua or some other tiny excuse of a dog."
"That's," Ms. Swain begins, then she stops for a minute, and then continues, "a completely logical argument. Not an answer I was expecting but I really can't find fault in the argument you make."
I stare off into space, until Diana hits my arm. "What?" I ask her.
"I suppose you didn't hear the question. Humans eating domestic animals like cows, pigs and chickens is not an example of a predator prey relationship. Why?"
"Oh it's because we don't hunt them but humans eating deer, fish or any other wild animal that they caught and killed for food would be a predator prey relationship."