Your least favourite moments in otherwise good books.

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There's plenty of websites that play host to threats entitled "Worst books you've read", or the like, and in reading people's comments, you can see which ideas, traits, quirks, etc. don't work out, or should perhaps be avoided in writing.
But how about books and stories that we deeply enjoy, and would consider perfect if it weren't for that one scene, or that one character! Or maybe something about the narrative just irked you a little. :p

So, which are the worst moments/scenes/characters/ideas you've found in books and stories that you otherwise love? :D
 
Peter F Hamilton's Night's Dawn trilogy was a brilliant series, almost ruined by a terrible Deus Ex Machina ending.

I recently read Snare by Katharine Kerr, which was very good except for a gay subplot which was out of character for the, er, character, and amounted to three scenes which had no bearing whatsoever on the rest of the story. It looked suspiciously like an editor said "You need a gay subplot" and it was tacked on before publication. (For the record, I have no problems with gay plots/characters per se. It's just this one)
 
For me that is easy. I'm afraid it is not sci-fi/fantasy

Brother's Bishop by Bart Yates. A wonderful, exciting, gripping story about two gay brothers. The story was so fast paced than I had trouble catching my breath. That made me laugh, cry and reviled me in equal measure. Pardon the pun but it contains the most limp wristed bloody ending I have ever read. I have never ever been so let down by an ending to a book. It smacked of either an editor chosen ending or an ''OH Crap! My deadline due, like tomorrow and I need to end this NOW!'.
 
Also non sci fi - the end of Captain Corelli's mandolin. I mean, I'm not the biggest one for a holywood ending, but it was miserable, ridiculous and totally unbelievable. I don't read it anymore, I stop about thirty pages from the end, and consider it better.

The trip to Mordor, how long did it go on for? The first time I read it, I gave up and when I went back to read it again, I gritted my teeth through it just because I didn't want to have to go start again in another couple of years.

The ending of the Stand, so well built up, so totally rubbish. Sorry to anyone who likes it, but I mean, the great stand off between good and evil and he had to resort to a bomb?
 
Richard Morgan's Altered Carbon. Great read, good SF, well written, all the best etc. There were two scenes which nearly made me throw the book across the room and swear off the author forever. One shows the brutal repeated rape of a woman in a virtual environment, another implies rather graphically that a rich business man raped an intelligent dog.

While the virtual rape scene was used for torture, and the victim was able to exact some control and revenge, it really served no meaningful purpose in the novel. Likewise the dog rape scene, which had no impact on the story whatever, other than to remind the reader that rich people are terrible, a point already made repeatedly in graphically detail throughout the novel.
 
One shows the brutal repeated rape of a woman in a virtual environment [...]

While the virtual rape scene was used for torture, and the victim was able to exact some control and revenge, it really served no meaningful purpose in the novel.
Possibly spoilerish:
Though I can't recall the scenes in question - one of the benefits of a butterfly mind - I thought (at least some of) the virtual scenes were there to drive home the point that rather than virtual reality being a tame version of the real world, it permitted and could implement endless torture, if only because the pain did not come through a fragile physical body that would eventually give up under the assault, but through machinery that was insensible to the purpose to which it was being put and which was able to repeat various vile scenarios ad infinitum.
 
Oh and Arthur Hailey. Everything he ever wrote has an explosive gripping beginning and fantastic ending but the middle meanders and disappoints.
 
Lord of the Rings: Eowyn of Rohan - only really strong female character in the whole story and a great young lady, but whenever she starts mooning after Aragorn I want to give her a good shake.

I've read LOTR so many times and every time it bugs me!
 
Wheel of time is a good series to read.
Except when it is about perrin/faile and rand.
I find the part on rand to be particularly boring.
 
Richard Morgan's Altered Carbon. Great read, good SF, well written, all the best etc. There were two scenes which nearly made me throw the book across the room and swear off the author forever. One shows the brutal repeated rape of a woman in a virtual environment, another implies rather graphically that a rich business man raped an intelligent dog.

While the virtual rape scene was used for torture, and the victim was able to exact some control and revenge, it really served no meaningful purpose in the novel. Likewise the dog rape scene, which had no impact on the story whatever, other than to remind the reader that rich people are terrible, a point already made repeatedly in graphically detail throughout the novel.

You answered your own question there....

Morgan might overdone that part but not to damage a quality book like Altered Carbon.
 
Richard Morgan's Altered Carbon. Great read, good SF, well written, all the best etc. There were two scenes which nearly made me throw the book across the room and swear off the author forever. One shows the brutal repeated rape of a woman in a virtual environment, another implies rather graphically that a rich business man raped an intelligent dog.

I think quite a few people find RM's sex scenes a bit excessive.

Generally, I don't like books where the characters jump into bed a bit too soon. It just falls flat for me when I'm thinking, 'Hang on, hang on, but you don't even know each other yet!' Or 'You've only just met up.'

Lately I found this in Morgan's Woken Furies (happened twice, with two women). Also in GGK's Sailing to Sarantium.

Coragem.
 
I would say personally that in most good Philip K Dick novels have terrible portrayals of wife,girlfriend female character that is so unlikeable that its like a theme of his books. I have seen it The Man in the High Castle, Now Wait For Last Year,Simulacra for few examples. It gets tiring every time you see it in his books. Like August Strindberg let his real wife,divorce feelings color most of his man eating female characters.....
 
I second Tom Bombadil. It just seems so... out of place in the novel.
Personally, when I saw the films I wondered "Where was Tom Bombadil?"
My conservative nature tend to believe that what the auther writes is his or her canon and I either like it or not. My exception might be a book finished posthumously that obviously has pieces that belong to another author.
 
The Dr. Prunesquallor stuff in Peake's Gormenghast has put me off so badly that again and again I have bogged down when trying to give this book a much-overdue second reading. I've decided that next time I try, I will feel free to skip. Peake obviously found the fluttery doctor amusing, but I don't.

In the opening of Hardy's magnificent Mayor of Casterbridge, there's some line about a bird chirping its trite song. I just about threw the book across the room when I was trying to read this book again and came to that bit. I need to ignore it or figure it's mostly just a reflection of Henchard's state of mind.

I used to not get Bombadil all that much, but I do now, and feel he really needs to be there in LOTR. But I think it is a mercy that Peter Jackson left Bombadil out of his movies. To present Bombadil aright would require genius, and Jackson is a capable craftsman but no genius; he would certainly have flubbed this material. Maybe some other director will give us a new LOTR someday, and, if he or she is a genius, we'll get Bombadil then.

I reread the first part of Blish's Case of Conscience a while ago, rolling along fine, but when the Lithian is brought to a new world, something went way wrong as far as I'm concerned and I didn't finish the book.

In Blackwood's "The Willows," it seems to me the author's confidence in his material sort of collapses when the narrator starts vaporing on about occultic ideas.

In Lovecraft's "Shadow Over Innsmouth," there's a breakdown of artistry (and Lovecraft had been writing well) when he has his narrator questioning the old coot on the dock, and then the oldster sees something and Lovecraft spells out the scream. Actually, in a way it's endearing (I always have to imagine Lovecraft up in his room "sounding out" the letters to get the quality he wanted -- wonder what the aunts thought if they heard him! like something out of P. G. Wodehouse), but I think it more or less stopped me dead on one rereading.

In Malory's Morte d'Arthur, the stuff about the war with Rome is deadly tedious, and my memory is that quite a bit of the Tristram material was tedious, too; I never read these portions now. The rest is mostly wonderful.

In Hodgson's The Night Land, the stuff about the narrator's lady-love is awful. I have tried to finish the book more than once and just haven't brought myself to do it.

I've found, in Studs Terkel's Hard Times, skippable stuff about unions (not all the stuff about unions).

With the novels of Sir Walter Scott, I've found that a safe rule of thumb is to start reading at the second chapter. He is then often really good!
 
Strange, because I found Prunesquallor to be integral to the book. He was just another part of Gormenghast for me. I didn't like the interlude with Keda meeting the old man much, though, as it seemed a rambling aside from the castle itself.

Tom Bombadil and all those digressions can be skipped as far as I'm concerned, along with the songs. They're not badly-written songs, but it's excessive. But I appreciate that for a lot of people skipping anything in Lord of the Rings is sacrilege. Each to their own. Also, if a character gets lost in a Tad Williams novel, the next five pages can usually be ignored, as they'll be a description of how lost he's got.

But the crowning moment for silly things in very good books has to be the end of Last Argument of Kings by Joe Abercrombie. In an otherwise very good trilogy, one of the characters gets arbitrarily bumped off, apparently to prevent any happy endings and thus raise the grimdark quota.
 

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