I have a line that I'm not sure about, mostly because my spell check does not like the word 'clickity'. Any and all ideas welcome.
'The room was silent, not even the little clickity clicks of a keyboard.'
I have a line that I'm not sure about, mostly because my spell check does not like the word 'clickity'. Any and all ideas welcome.
'The room was silent, not even the little clickity clicks of a keyboard.'
'The room was silent, not even or without even the usual little clickity clicks of a keyboard.'
... fingers crossed in years to come clickety will be a respected and accepted word.... It's also going to be a competition entry, so using a made up word is a brave choice.
If you really feel it needs to change... perhaps tapping or patter as alternatives to use?
EDIT - oh yes and the pitter-patter of tiny feet as well of course.
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