AnyaKimlin
Confuddled
I'm having a headache with this all comments welcome:
On the edge of the Henderskelfe woods, Wilf lived in a chocolate box gamekeeper’s cottage. The brown wooden door clung desperately to its hinges but couldn’t survive Ian’s push. He looked back at Dr Innes and she nodded encouragingly. Closing his eyes he breathed deeply and tried to convince himself that this was a crime scene like any other.
The neat, old fashioned kitchen resembled a World War II bomb site. All of the orange units stood open: their contents spilled out over the worktops and floor. The sturdy kitchen table was in several pieces, some no bigger than splinters. Matching worn leather chairs stood either side of the fireplace; they had deep gashes that revealed the stuffing beneath. A large mirror above the mantel lay shattered on the floor. Ian set a small side table back in its place next to Wilf’s chair. He knelt in the space it had vacated, avoiding shards of mirror, and picked up a photograph from the remains of its frame. It had been taken on their holiday to Copenhagen last year where for the first time they had held hands in public. “Where’s my man?” He stood, focused on the picture and addressed the quivering ball on the worn sofa, the only piece of furniture in the room to have escaped the carnage.
Dark curls flowing over the top of brightly coloured crochet blankets identified the quivering ball as Timothy Fischer. The only response was an increase in the quiver Richter scale. Ian raised his eyes further and looked at the handsome DCI Joseph Purdie. “Perhaps you can explain?”
On the edge of the Henderskelfe woods, Wilf lived in a chocolate box gamekeeper’s cottage. The brown wooden door clung desperately to its hinges but couldn’t survive Ian’s push. He looked back at Dr Innes and she nodded encouragingly. Closing his eyes he breathed deeply and tried to convince himself that this was a crime scene like any other.
The neat, old fashioned kitchen resembled a World War II bomb site. All of the orange units stood open: their contents spilled out over the worktops and floor. The sturdy kitchen table was in several pieces, some no bigger than splinters. Matching worn leather chairs stood either side of the fireplace; they had deep gashes that revealed the stuffing beneath. A large mirror above the mantel lay shattered on the floor. Ian set a small side table back in its place next to Wilf’s chair. He knelt in the space it had vacated, avoiding shards of mirror, and picked up a photograph from the remains of its frame. It had been taken on their holiday to Copenhagen last year where for the first time they had held hands in public. “Where’s my man?” He stood, focused on the picture and addressed the quivering ball on the worn sofa, the only piece of furniture in the room to have escaped the carnage.
Dark curls flowing over the top of brightly coloured crochet blankets identified the quivering ball as Timothy Fischer. The only response was an increase in the quiver Richter scale. Ian raised his eyes further and looked at the handsome DCI Joseph Purdie. “Perhaps you can explain?”