That's run-on sentences. I've been told twice now that I do these a lot and I haven't really got a clue what they are and why they're bad.
I've Googled it and still don't get it. I don't learn by being told or by reading terms I don't understand. I need to be shown and I need to do.
Glisterspeck has been trying to help me:
I vaguely know what a verb is (although I've just looked it up and it turns out, nope, I haven't a clue) and I have no idea at all what a 'subject' is.
I can go through and look at my 'ands' easy enough, but when I can't recognise a verb and a subject, I have a problem.
So, if someone could explain to me, preferably without using terms I don't know, what a run on is and how to find and fix them, that'd be awesome.
Basically, I know what an adverb is. And a pronoun. I don't think that helps me here.
I've Googled it and still don't get it. I don't learn by being told or by reading terms I don't understand. I need to be shown and I need to do.
Glisterspeck has been trying to help me:
With the kind of run-ons you're using, just do a search for "and" and look on either side of the word "and." If there is a subject and a verb on both sides, add a comma before the "and." That will do you in 100% of the cases here!
I vaguely know what a verb is (although I've just looked it up and it turns out, nope, I haven't a clue) and I have no idea at all what a 'subject' is.
I can go through and look at my 'ands' easy enough, but when I can't recognise a verb and a subject, I have a problem.
So, if someone could explain to me, preferably without using terms I don't know, what a run on is and how to find and fix them, that'd be awesome.
Basically, I know what an adverb is. And a pronoun. I don't think that helps me here.