Aleph
Well-Known Member
Bear with me, its a bit of a woolly tale:
A few years ago I foolishly put up my hand to be a short story competition judge for one of the National science fiction conventions. This will be easy, I thought. Some light reading, I thought.
Well, wasn't I told when I received a ziggarat of manuscripts that piled one on top of each other would have been over my head, with less than a few weeks to read them all. How was I supposed to accurately judge their quality?
An editor friend of mine, who has done a LOT of slush wrangling, came over and sat own with me. "This is what you do. You open to the first page. You look at the first line. If it jumps out at you, if t's interesting, put it to one side and read it later. If it's boring, throw the manuscript away. NO EXCEPTIONS."
Thinking back on that experience (and there were some fine MS thrown into the NO pile for the want of a first line) I've been really conscious of a good first line when submitting my work to anywhere I'll be judged against a lot of others. Does anyone else have the same concern when they start constructing a story? Stephen King has some EXCELLENT first lines, and now I'm kind of primed to see them pretty much everywhere.
Also, what makes a good first line? Obvously it's not anything involving some fellow waking up from a dream...
A few years ago I foolishly put up my hand to be a short story competition judge for one of the National science fiction conventions. This will be easy, I thought. Some light reading, I thought.
Well, wasn't I told when I received a ziggarat of manuscripts that piled one on top of each other would have been over my head, with less than a few weeks to read them all. How was I supposed to accurately judge their quality?
An editor friend of mine, who has done a LOT of slush wrangling, came over and sat own with me. "This is what you do. You open to the first page. You look at the first line. If it jumps out at you, if t's interesting, put it to one side and read it later. If it's boring, throw the manuscript away. NO EXCEPTIONS."
Thinking back on that experience (and there were some fine MS thrown into the NO pile for the want of a first line) I've been really conscious of a good first line when submitting my work to anywhere I'll be judged against a lot of others. Does anyone else have the same concern when they start constructing a story? Stephen King has some EXCELLENT first lines, and now I'm kind of primed to see them pretty much everywhere.
Also, what makes a good first line? Obvously it's not anything involving some fellow waking up from a dream...