Analysis of why a book works (or indeed doesn't)

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We've had this for passages but not analysis of a whole book, I don't think?

I'm rereading Gone with the Wind again. I last read it about eight years ago and enjoyed it a lot. Unusually, since becoming a writer, I'm enjoying it even more this time. A few of the technical reasons why:

Scarlett. She's not a likeable main character. She's selfish, shallow, cruel and a little bit stupid about world affairs. She has inexcreable taste in men. But we are kept in her point of view all the time and, using fantastic showing, Mitchell lets us know Scarlett is wrong about eg Melanie, but, because of the strength of the pov we find this makes Scarlett someone to be sympathised with. And when she has to find strength, and does so in spades, we're rooting for her. When self-awareness comes, far too late, the tragedy of what she has lost (Rhett, essentially) is all the starker for it.

The secondary characters are well sketched, from the Tarleton boys in the opening scene (who are used so evocatively later on to bring home the horror of the war in a scene I read with my mouth open this time) to her Oirish father, are all vivid and real. Rhett is well-drawn and, again, Mitchell doesn't shy away from showing his less than likeable traits.

The dialogue is well done with a mix of dialects well captured and written in such a way as to not draw the reader out.

The description. Two things here:

Where she uses it. Some scenes have hardly any description; she assumes we know what a sitting room looks like, for instance. Some have loads of rich, rich description that draw us in.

The use of senses. She captures crowd scenes so well. She uses colour and noise and smells. When Atlanta burns, we are pulled right into it.

Finally, the journey. The reader knows she should love Rhett. The reader can see the horror that is ahead for her. We are screaming at Bonnie to slow down. We want the Tarleton boys to not go to war. And it all still happens. Like a car crash we can't stop. And that is one of the reasons it works, so we can go noooooooo, and yet have to read on.

Lots for me to take from it, I think.
 
Wow, you know I had never thought about reading GWTW before, but I think I will now. The movie version is so iconic that that is the way we consider the title in the US these days...as a major movie, and not as a piece of literature (sadly, the same is true of The Wizard of Oz story, at least in the states, I think). I'm happy to hear Mitchell did such a good job with the book. Do you like the movie, springs? Sounds as though there might be more fully-realized characterizations in the book (guess that is usually the way). Excited to hear what others think!
 
I've not read GWTW (or seen the film) so can I talk about why I loved another book I read recently?
 
Awesome. K.

I'm going to talk about Glitterland by Alexis Hall. (Yes, I know I've banged on about it recently, but seriously, it's good).

The reasons are almost identical to what you've said for GWTW.

Firstly, characters. The MC, Ash, is a clinically depressed, bipolar crime fiction writer with an anxiety disorder. Yet, he is funny. The story's written in first person, so we can't escape him. Compare the book to Robin Hobb's Soldier Son, where Nevare is depressed and makes the reader depressed too, Ash does the opposite. He made me laugh out loud - which I rarely do with books.

The love interest is an Essex boy called Darian (who, I have since found out, was based on Rylan Clark from X Factor - now, I didn't know who Rylan was/is so had to YouTube him afterwards). But he's a complete opposite to Ash - he's not massively intelligent, but he's always happy, very loving and again, very funny. His dialogue is written phonetically which works fantastically (janarwhatamean?)

The secondary characters are good too - Ash's agent, his best mate, Darian's friend. They're all well-rounded and again, amusing. And the dialogue between them all sparkles.

For me, characters are everything, so to have all characters well-written with excellent, funny, dialogue is a dream and what I'm now aspiring to, and why I've now hit a major writing slump cos I'll never be that good. Dammit.

Um... what else has springs said? Oh yeah, description. I'm not a fan of massive blocks of description about nothing. Glitterland has some beautiful descriptions in it. Obviously, they're written from Ash's POV and he's a writer, so they have that finesse. The descriptions are in his voice, they're mixed in well and they're just there, part of the story. You don't stop to think, ok, now we're describing a fashion show, yawn yawn. I write quite simple, matter-of-fact descriptions myself, a tree is a tree, and that's the kind I like reading too, and while the descriptions in Glitterland are matter-of-fact, they're written in a way I'd never think about doing because they're almost purple but not. They're clever. And I can't do clever.

Also, you know, I'd be hard pushed to tell you what the plot is. It's a simple plot that works well, I think that's another thing that makes a successful story. At its most basic, Glitterland is depressed guy meets happy guy and they live happily ever after.

(Was that analytical enough?)
 
Fantastic thread springs. I remember my older sister making my brother and I, watch the film countless times when we were children (she always dominated the television viewing).

I can't say that I am too keen to go and read the book, at least not before many others, but your arguments are very compelling.

Mouse, I'm afraid I have not heard of Glitterland, but I completely agree with you on character - humorous dialogue is a must. I have read a few agents general comments at how surprised they are by so many author's lack of humour in their submissions. People generally laugh (often, hopefully) in day to day life, we make each other laugh all the time on this site. It makes sense that if you wish someone to spend many hours reading your story, they deserve to laugh/smile from time to time :) You should never keep people low and mired, light relief is essential, even in tragedy - look at Shakespeare.

Which leads me to a book I could harp on about for days: The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time: I know some people might dislike it for its mainstreamy-ness but it has done an amazing thing for autistism awareness, in such a beautiful way. It worked!
Taking the POV of a young autistic boy trying to understand social interactions that seem so alien, all through humour and logical explanation. Doing it in a way that doesn't offend those who have the condition and showing us how we take-for-granted, the relative ease at which we engage with others socially.
The way the author, Mark Haddon, breaks down the thinking process and gives us an exploded view is genius.

Because of the first person POV, description is limited to that of an autistic child - therefore if something is red, it is red - not burnt crimson or fresh blood. The child is writing a diary, telling his own story - so he knows that similes and metaphors are important to a tale, so you get to see him trying to get his head around the concept in such a funny way that you forget that the description is basic.

Its a unique book and probably not very helpful in drawing valuable tips for our own. But I will again say that no matter how serious and low you wish to go, make 'em laugh! :D
 
It's perfect, Mouse. Must seek that one out. :)

Cool. And yes! Do.

Mouse, I'm afraid I have not heard of Glitterland, but I completely agree with you on character - humorous dialogue is a must. I have read a few agents general comments at how surprised they are by so many author's lack of humour in their submissions. People generally laugh (often, hopefully) in day to day life, we make each other laugh all the time on this site. It makes sense that if you wish someone to spend many hours reading your story, they deserve to laugh/smile from time to time :) You should never keep people low and mired, light relief is essential, even in tragedy - look at Shakespeare.

It's a romance, so not really the genre of most people here. But yes, humour is so important! It's made me want to try to write something with humour next time, but I think if I try to be funny, I'm not very funny.

I almost picked up The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time a while ago and didn't for whatever reason.
 
Hmm. You've made me want to read GWTW now. Haven't seen the film in years and it isn't my scene, but despite that I enjoyed it.
I'd like to talk about an author I've come across recently, Jodi Taylor, whose time travelling romps have me alternately crying and laughing. Beginning with One Damned Thing After Another, she now has four in the series and several short stories along the same theme.
She is one of the few authors (the list includes Tolkein) who I can read and reread back to back several times. I found her while looking for cheap or free stuff on Kindle (yeah, I know, but this one is really good!).
Her grammar and punctuation are not the best and she has some holes in her plots, but her character development and sheer breadth of imagination kept me interested throughout. So much so that I made the mistake of beginning the latest one in the bathroom before bed. Several hours, a red toilet seat ring mark and pins and needles later I finished it, to begin it again the next day.
I know this isn't a very erudite critique, but I'm just a beginner at the bottom of the ladder and don't feel qualified to pick apart someone else's work in detail!
 

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