Hey guys, newbie here. I have questions regarding Abercrombie's writing style.
Take this excerpt for example:
"She gave her horse the spurs, possibly flicking a few specks of mud over Aliz's white dress, covered the ground in no time and slid her mount into the knot of officers that was the frequently misfiring brain of the division."
I mean, does anyone else feel a bit weird reading this? The wording, the commas and the placement of subject and predicate all seem a bit jumbled up.
Normally, you would write the excerpt like this: "She gave her horse the spurs, flicking a few specks of mud over Aliz's white dress. She then covered the ground in no time and slid her mount into the knot of officers frequently considered as the misfiring brain of the division."
I did a bit of research on Abercrombie's writing style and some say he has a visceral style. Anybody care to explain what this means? He certainly has a rather odd style.
Take this excerpt for example:
"She gave her horse the spurs, possibly flicking a few specks of mud over Aliz's white dress, covered the ground in no time and slid her mount into the knot of officers that was the frequently misfiring brain of the division."
I mean, does anyone else feel a bit weird reading this? The wording, the commas and the placement of subject and predicate all seem a bit jumbled up.
Normally, you would write the excerpt like this: "She gave her horse the spurs, flicking a few specks of mud over Aliz's white dress. She then covered the ground in no time and slid her mount into the knot of officers frequently considered as the misfiring brain of the division."
I did a bit of research on Abercrombie's writing style and some say he has a visceral style. Anybody care to explain what this means? He certainly has a rather odd style.
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