So, one of the primary races of my series has a militaristic Empire that rules various other worlds. They do not rule the entire galaxy, but they have worlds and moons scattered throughout under their control.
Their state security apparatus is called the CSO--Central Security Office--which is organized into various sub-branches and is responsible for maintaining order in the Empire (along with spying on its citizens, disposing of "enemies of the state", arresting "blood traitors", that sort of thing). Think SS/Gestapo, only obviously on a much broader scale.
For narrative purposes, it is necessary that the primary villain is one of the highest-ranking officials in the CSO. Not quite at the top--though he is slowly rank-climbing over the course of the series--but no more than a few rungs down the ladder.
The way I originally had it organized was that the largest continent on the Imperial homeworld is divided into four sectors ruled by a CSO General, and that these are the "big four" directly beneath the head director himself. My chief villain General Fen is one of these sector generals, and governs the sector which contains this race's capital city (all the better to eventually enact the coup he is plotting).
But I got thinking: what about sectors of space? Logically, sectors of Imperial-controlled space would have assigned CSO commanders as well, but who do they answer to? Are there also big CSO Generals who govern, say, a quadrant? A solar system? In that event, General Fen only governing a corner of the homeworld's main continent suddenly seems less important than I want/need him to be.
So now I'm pondering. Is General Fen Sector General Northeast as originally envisioned, or is he CSO commander of the entire homeworld (or more?).
Looking for thoughts on how an organization like the CSO would most logically be organized in regards to these questions. If there's any confusion, they are entirely separate from the military. Fen is titled a "General", but it's not a military rank. They work independently from and alongside the military, and there is a bit of a rivalry/jealousy between them over who really has more power, and some CSO officials (with Fen leading the charge) want the Emperor to grant them the authority to take command over army units in "emergency situations" (of course, Fen has ulterior motives).
Their state security apparatus is called the CSO--Central Security Office--which is organized into various sub-branches and is responsible for maintaining order in the Empire (along with spying on its citizens, disposing of "enemies of the state", arresting "blood traitors", that sort of thing). Think SS/Gestapo, only obviously on a much broader scale.
For narrative purposes, it is necessary that the primary villain is one of the highest-ranking officials in the CSO. Not quite at the top--though he is slowly rank-climbing over the course of the series--but no more than a few rungs down the ladder.
The way I originally had it organized was that the largest continent on the Imperial homeworld is divided into four sectors ruled by a CSO General, and that these are the "big four" directly beneath the head director himself. My chief villain General Fen is one of these sector generals, and governs the sector which contains this race's capital city (all the better to eventually enact the coup he is plotting).
But I got thinking: what about sectors of space? Logically, sectors of Imperial-controlled space would have assigned CSO commanders as well, but who do they answer to? Are there also big CSO Generals who govern, say, a quadrant? A solar system? In that event, General Fen only governing a corner of the homeworld's main continent suddenly seems less important than I want/need him to be.
So now I'm pondering. Is General Fen Sector General Northeast as originally envisioned, or is he CSO commander of the entire homeworld (or more?).
Looking for thoughts on how an organization like the CSO would most logically be organized in regards to these questions. If there's any confusion, they are entirely separate from the military. Fen is titled a "General", but it's not a military rank. They work independently from and alongside the military, and there is a bit of a rivalry/jealousy between them over who really has more power, and some CSO officials (with Fen leading the charge) want the Emperor to grant them the authority to take command over army units in "emergency situations" (of course, Fen has ulterior motives).