I find Grimwood’s books very hard to evaluate; I have given each of the three ‘Cyber Noir’ books, of which this one is the third, just three stars, which normally would mean that I have had enough of this author and would be unlikely to return to them, and yet I know I will return. I’m not absolutely sure what keeps bringing me back to him but I think it might be that I simply love his stories, characters, settings and action; they are brilliant, dynamic, punchy cyberpunk. So why aren’t I giving them 4 or 5 stars? The problem is that the finishing is poor; the details are messy and often don’t add up or don’t make sense. There are frequent consistency and continuity errors. For example the following two extracts occur within 10 pages of each other and are describing the same rotating wheel habitat:
“…a fat fifty-kilometre silver ring that spun twenty times an hour around the spindle, like a vast wheel rolling around a hub.”
“At a speed of one revolution every twenty seconds, any decent pilot could dock without trouble.”
Now maybe I’m being picky but the trouble is that I can’t help noticing this sort of thing and, even if I’m prepared to shrug it off (as I do), it has already pulled me out of my immersion in the story and that spoils it for me. A great shame because otherwise I do love Grimwood’s work.
I did have one other complaint with this book. The ending was very rushed and abrupt and many strands were left unresolved. To be honest it felt like it was being left open for a fourth book, however 14 years on that now seems unlikely!
“…a fat fifty-kilometre silver ring that spun twenty times an hour around the spindle, like a vast wheel rolling around a hub.”
“At a speed of one revolution every twenty seconds, any decent pilot could dock without trouble.”
Now maybe I’m being picky but the trouble is that I can’t help noticing this sort of thing and, even if I’m prepared to shrug it off (as I do), it has already pulled me out of my immersion in the story and that spoils it for me. A great shame because otherwise I do love Grimwood’s work.
I did have one other complaint with this book. The ending was very rushed and abrupt and many strands were left unresolved. To be honest it felt like it was being left open for a fourth book, however 14 years on that now seems unlikely!
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