Prescott Fry
Science fiction fantasy
A Toybox in a funhouse
Here is the first part, I intend to publish an ebook on 5/1/15. I want it to be perfect before I publish so any criticism or sdvice will be duly taken.
A Toybox in a funhouse
All the insane deeds over the past three months couldn't prepare him for the moment when he stood on the tallest rock in the quarry, the black water seventy feet beneath, and the baying of k9 hounds as police waded through the woods to get him. They were getting closer and closer. Either he faced his fears and jumped, or he wound up in prison for the rest of his life.
Clay knew that his entire camp was now crawling with police investigators finding the bloody confessions of his work. They wouldn't know who the fragments of bones belonged to, or even if they were human. But soon enough, they would unfurl all the pieces, they would see that the teeth are human, then they would match the crime paraphernalia with dental and health records of about twenty missing persons throughout the western Maryland, Pennsylvania regions. It was his moment of stardom. The world would breathe his work.
He looked down and wiggled his toes over the edge. "It's easy," he told himself. "Just spread your arms and fall. Sore like an eagle."Clay felt like those words were the perfect expression of what his life felt like since he had decided to fall with, not fight against, the darkness that engulfed him since his childhood years. He didn't want to run anymore. He came to the point when he stopped struggling against the boiling torrents. He accepted the pain. An oh boy, did he dish it back tenfold.
"At the top, I think somebody is at the top." Lights strobed through the brush and thorntangles. It was now or never.
Let go, as he once did before.
Clay opened his hands wide. The moon was full, and shimmered across the water. He could see the black outline of the distant shore. The other side was his only passage to freedom.
The cool wind of the summer flapped against his clothing. He shut his eyed. Under the whistle of the breeze, he could he the growls of the dogs and the breaking of twigs under booted heels.
"They can't hurt you no more," said a little boy's voice.
Arms wide, Clay pushed off into the black.
.....
Eighteen months earlier, December fifth
"Ms. Washington, Give a brotha a bone. The landlord said I have to be out by tomorrow morning. You see, I got me a golden doodle and we're gonna be on the streets if I don't get a place ASAP!"
The lady behind the desk frowned. She rolled over to her computer. "I can't make any promises by tomorrow but I can do one more check through our system. Mr. Turner, you job simply doesn't pay enough for the an income based living on my list without having the community action starter grant that includes my background history report ."
He sat back uncomfortably in the leather chair as the old lady typed into her outdated computer. On the cluttered shelves behind sat a dusty family portrait. Mr. Washington was white headed and looked like a p ghost, just like the misses. Three Little girls were dressed like overly excited pigtail dolls. "You have an awfully lovely family, Ms. Washington. "
She peered behind her glasses. "Thank you, Mr. Turner." She rolled back to her desk. "I think I've found something that may fit you budget only if you find another part-time job."
"I'm already working six hours a day, five days a week at the distribution center." He sat upright. "I'm raking in three-hundred per week after taxes. You're telling me you can't find anything for under twelve hundred in the city where I can have access to public transportation so I can get to my job to survive?"
"Like I told you before, I can find a one bedroom with all the bare amenities for as low as nine hundred. You brought all your information here today. I can fill out your income based contract, print it, and give you a pen right now to sign the paper. But again Mr. Turner—" She leaned her elbows on the desk and stroked her scarf appraisingly. "I'm in need of some information as to your family situation so that I know definitely that there is no direct relative you may live with. Once that is clarified, I can stamp the Community action insignia and you can choose one of the other renters on my list and be out my door on your merry way."
He felt his cheeks flushing the moment she mentioned his family. He sat on his hands so she didn't see that they twitched compulsively. She starred at him, or through him, as he sensed her absorbing his palpable discomfort to the question.
"Mr. Turner.. I just need to know because of the possibility that there may be a relative willing to take you in."
"I'll show you what happened to my family—" He reached onto something on the floor and saw her recoil slightly in her chair as he set what looked like an antique tackle box on his knee. "Relax, cuz I'm half black doesn't mean I'm going to hurt you." He unlatched the two pins and pulled out something round and colored like a marble pearl. "In this urn are the charred remains of my Ma. " He laughed, "What was left from her atleast."
"Heavens, I'm so sorry Mr. Turner."
"No worries m'am, the coroner said she died instantly from the explosion on impact with one of those huge fuel trucks. Considering how brutal life is for all of us, it couldn't have been all that bad for her."
They both starred at the urn for a solemn moment before he tucked it back inside the tackle box on the floor.
"I was wondering what that box was when you brought it in. Do you always lug that hing around?"
"Whenever I can. I have various tuning instruments in there for my music equipment, and supplies in case somebody breaks down, or ever needs help."
She unfolded her hands and grabbed a pen. "You are very peculiar person, Mr. Turner." She scribbled something onto the form and he tried to lean closer to see what she was writing. "And I'm assuming you don't know your father?"
"Cuz I'm black you think I don't know my Pops? Stereotypical white person."
She stopped writing. "I never said that Mr. Turner. My questions are just part of the procedure."
"Well this procedure business is some bullsh**. " He repositioned himself in the chair. "No, I know my pops. He's doin' a thirty year at San Quentin on some sh*t he got wrapped up with his homeboys across the country. He's an damn fool to get caught up like that if you ask me "
She nodded and wrote some more. "Al—right, this should do it." She finished her sentence with an exaggerated dot and quickly signed her initials. "You sign at the bottom and you should be good to go."
He read over her cursive notes summarizing the information he had told her. He liked the part about the burning fuel truck. He shot her a toothy smile and scribbled his name. "I had no clue my grandma had loaned sixty thousand from the bank on her reverse mortgage, then I come home to get a one month notice posted on my door. This stuff had me scared for a moment. I really thought me and my dog would be living off the streets. Getting this five hundred dollar assistance grant is the one time in my damn life when both my parents being dead to my life is actually a blessing in disguise."
"You have a funny sense of humor." She pulled apart the form. "I keep a carbon copy. You get this one." She stood with her hand extended. "Mr. turner, I hope everything turns out for you with your musical career."
He stood. He accepted her handshake. He grabbed his tackle box off the floor and headed for the door. He opened the old wooden door but turned before leaving. "By the way, thanks a ton Ms. Washington."
"Don't mention it. It's my job to get twenty year olds like you off the streets so you can make something legitimate out of your lives."
He figured she probably spoke that speel to every person who walked through the door, but he left her office waving, a false smile pasted on his lips. He popped through the red, decorative doors and rose the old plaster steps from the basement of the eighteenth century stone cathedral.
Breathing fog into the cold afternoon, he stood on the cracked sidewalk, the tackle box in hand, noise of the city around, three lanes of one-way traffic flowing by at a brisk thirty five mph, pedestrians flooding the main streets, police, construction personnel, and a number of suited people moving about like busy work ants.
...(continues)
[EDITED down to 1500 words]
Here is the first part, I intend to publish an ebook on 5/1/15. I want it to be perfect before I publish so any criticism or sdvice will be duly taken.
A Toybox in a funhouse
All the insane deeds over the past three months couldn't prepare him for the moment when he stood on the tallest rock in the quarry, the black water seventy feet beneath, and the baying of k9 hounds as police waded through the woods to get him. They were getting closer and closer. Either he faced his fears and jumped, or he wound up in prison for the rest of his life.
Clay knew that his entire camp was now crawling with police investigators finding the bloody confessions of his work. They wouldn't know who the fragments of bones belonged to, or even if they were human. But soon enough, they would unfurl all the pieces, they would see that the teeth are human, then they would match the crime paraphernalia with dental and health records of about twenty missing persons throughout the western Maryland, Pennsylvania regions. It was his moment of stardom. The world would breathe his work.
He looked down and wiggled his toes over the edge. "It's easy," he told himself. "Just spread your arms and fall. Sore like an eagle."Clay felt like those words were the perfect expression of what his life felt like since he had decided to fall with, not fight against, the darkness that engulfed him since his childhood years. He didn't want to run anymore. He came to the point when he stopped struggling against the boiling torrents. He accepted the pain. An oh boy, did he dish it back tenfold.
"At the top, I think somebody is at the top." Lights strobed through the brush and thorntangles. It was now or never.
Let go, as he once did before.
Clay opened his hands wide. The moon was full, and shimmered across the water. He could see the black outline of the distant shore. The other side was his only passage to freedom.
The cool wind of the summer flapped against his clothing. He shut his eyed. Under the whistle of the breeze, he could he the growls of the dogs and the breaking of twigs under booted heels.
"They can't hurt you no more," said a little boy's voice.
Arms wide, Clay pushed off into the black.
.....
Eighteen months earlier, December fifth
"Ms. Washington, Give a brotha a bone. The landlord said I have to be out by tomorrow morning. You see, I got me a golden doodle and we're gonna be on the streets if I don't get a place ASAP!"
The lady behind the desk frowned. She rolled over to her computer. "I can't make any promises by tomorrow but I can do one more check through our system. Mr. Turner, you job simply doesn't pay enough for the an income based living on my list without having the community action starter grant that includes my background history report ."
He sat back uncomfortably in the leather chair as the old lady typed into her outdated computer. On the cluttered shelves behind sat a dusty family portrait. Mr. Washington was white headed and looked like a p ghost, just like the misses. Three Little girls were dressed like overly excited pigtail dolls. "You have an awfully lovely family, Ms. Washington. "
She peered behind her glasses. "Thank you, Mr. Turner." She rolled back to her desk. "I think I've found something that may fit you budget only if you find another part-time job."
"I'm already working six hours a day, five days a week at the distribution center." He sat upright. "I'm raking in three-hundred per week after taxes. You're telling me you can't find anything for under twelve hundred in the city where I can have access to public transportation so I can get to my job to survive?"
"Like I told you before, I can find a one bedroom with all the bare amenities for as low as nine hundred. You brought all your information here today. I can fill out your income based contract, print it, and give you a pen right now to sign the paper. But again Mr. Turner—" She leaned her elbows on the desk and stroked her scarf appraisingly. "I'm in need of some information as to your family situation so that I know definitely that there is no direct relative you may live with. Once that is clarified, I can stamp the Community action insignia and you can choose one of the other renters on my list and be out my door on your merry way."
He felt his cheeks flushing the moment she mentioned his family. He sat on his hands so she didn't see that they twitched compulsively. She starred at him, or through him, as he sensed her absorbing his palpable discomfort to the question.
"Mr. Turner.. I just need to know because of the possibility that there may be a relative willing to take you in."
"I'll show you what happened to my family—" He reached onto something on the floor and saw her recoil slightly in her chair as he set what looked like an antique tackle box on his knee. "Relax, cuz I'm half black doesn't mean I'm going to hurt you." He unlatched the two pins and pulled out something round and colored like a marble pearl. "In this urn are the charred remains of my Ma. " He laughed, "What was left from her atleast."
"Heavens, I'm so sorry Mr. Turner."
"No worries m'am, the coroner said she died instantly from the explosion on impact with one of those huge fuel trucks. Considering how brutal life is for all of us, it couldn't have been all that bad for her."
They both starred at the urn for a solemn moment before he tucked it back inside the tackle box on the floor.
"I was wondering what that box was when you brought it in. Do you always lug that hing around?"
"Whenever I can. I have various tuning instruments in there for my music equipment, and supplies in case somebody breaks down, or ever needs help."
She unfolded her hands and grabbed a pen. "You are very peculiar person, Mr. Turner." She scribbled something onto the form and he tried to lean closer to see what she was writing. "And I'm assuming you don't know your father?"
"Cuz I'm black you think I don't know my Pops? Stereotypical white person."
She stopped writing. "I never said that Mr. Turner. My questions are just part of the procedure."
"Well this procedure business is some bullsh**. " He repositioned himself in the chair. "No, I know my pops. He's doin' a thirty year at San Quentin on some sh*t he got wrapped up with his homeboys across the country. He's an damn fool to get caught up like that if you ask me "
She nodded and wrote some more. "Al—right, this should do it." She finished her sentence with an exaggerated dot and quickly signed her initials. "You sign at the bottom and you should be good to go."
He read over her cursive notes summarizing the information he had told her. He liked the part about the burning fuel truck. He shot her a toothy smile and scribbled his name. "I had no clue my grandma had loaned sixty thousand from the bank on her reverse mortgage, then I come home to get a one month notice posted on my door. This stuff had me scared for a moment. I really thought me and my dog would be living off the streets. Getting this five hundred dollar assistance grant is the one time in my damn life when both my parents being dead to my life is actually a blessing in disguise."
"You have a funny sense of humor." She pulled apart the form. "I keep a carbon copy. You get this one." She stood with her hand extended. "Mr. turner, I hope everything turns out for you with your musical career."
He stood. He accepted her handshake. He grabbed his tackle box off the floor and headed for the door. He opened the old wooden door but turned before leaving. "By the way, thanks a ton Ms. Washington."
"Don't mention it. It's my job to get twenty year olds like you off the streets so you can make something legitimate out of your lives."
He figured she probably spoke that speel to every person who walked through the door, but he left her office waving, a false smile pasted on his lips. He popped through the red, decorative doors and rose the old plaster steps from the basement of the eighteenth century stone cathedral.
Breathing fog into the cold afternoon, he stood on the cracked sidewalk, the tackle box in hand, noise of the city around, three lanes of one-way traffic flowing by at a brisk thirty five mph, pedestrians flooding the main streets, police, construction personnel, and a number of suited people moving about like busy work ants.
...(continues)
[EDITED down to 1500 words]
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