Cover Reveal for The Clandestine

[Wo7f]

Hello, I'd like to share my cover here for my upcoming book The Clandestine. Soon to be on Amazon.com.

Remus, along with men from different eras, find four ancient children frozen in time who can defeat insane god Dyeus. The world is about to change, and not in a good way, when Dyeus starts a cataclysmic event that will destroy the planet.

Waking the children on the sacred ground of Stonehenge sounds easy enough, but getting there is only half the journey. If they can make it at all.

Gods and goddesses of Earth covet the children for their own personal ambitions. Even mankind must be avoided, who might see the children as relics, treasures beyond measure, and Dyeus himself is ever watchful for those who would stand against him.

Amidst friends and foes, conquest and fear, hope and death Remus and his companions must find refuge and keep the children safe for the future of Earth.

Other books that are in the works…

Erased

Fallout

Rebirth

Laima’s Diary

 

[Jo Zebedee]

Very striking. but! i'm struggling to make out your name and the title and wonder how well it will translate to a thumbnail? Cn you play around with font colours?

 

[Wo7f]

Thank you springs! Unfortunately this is the finished product. I've already posted it everywhere including my Author Facebook page. I never thought about a thumb nail. But it will definitely be a goal for the next book. Thanks!
I did try other colors, many in fact, but black seemed to fit. Hmmm...

 

[Foxbat]

Nice cover but I agree that your name and title need to stand out more

 

[Wo7f]

Thanks Foxbat! I've been thinking on it more and perhaps it's not too late to change it and repost the cover again. Maybe it will help to get more promo attention.

So I'm thinking white for my name, but I'm really torn on the title. I can't use white because the top will blend out. At the same time I dont want to use a dark color like I've done already. And it also has to match with the red and green. Lots to think about.

 

[Jo Zebedee]

Thanks Foxbat! I've been thinking on it more and perhaps it's not too late to change it and repost the cover again. Maybe it will help to get more promo attention.

So I'm thinking white for my name, but I'm really torn on the title. I can't use white because the top will blend out. At the same time I dont want to use a dark color like I've done already. And it also has to match with the red and green. Lots to think about.

I wouldn't worry about having already released it - the best people change covers. Seriously, think of how many editions there are of books.
Also, you could either put up a private blog or a thread in the writing group with some options and get some private opinions? A lot of us do that sort of thing.

 

[Wo7f]

I wouldn't worry about having already released it - the best people change covers. Seriously, think of how many editions there are of books.
Also, you could either put up a private blog or a thread in the writing group with some options and get some private opinions? A lot of us do that sort of thing.

Really? Cool! Thanks springs!

 

[The Judge]

Very creepy with those eyes! If you are thinking of changing it for the font colours, though, it might help to bring the eyes out even more, if that's possible.

 

[Wo7f]

I like the white for the name, but I had to keep the black for the title. The others were too light or didn't fit in with the color scheme. As for the eyes, I can't brighten them anymore without them looking weird. Thanks guys for the help and feedback.

 

[Wo7f]

Looking at it on Amazon as a thumb nail, everyone was so right about everything. A lesson learned for my next book cover. So glad I went with the white for author name at least. Thanks guys!

 

[Foxbat]

The white looks so much better