I've kind of been working my way through these slowly, for reasons that will become apparent.
Morgan Rice - A Quest of Heroes
Thorgin, an outsider and a dreamer, fights to become a warrior in an epic quest that finds him at the center of a maelstrom of royal plots and counterplots that threaten him and everyone he loves.
Look. I love a bildungsroman as much as (if not more then) the next person, but this is getting silly. If there's a single original or different thought in this book, I couldn't find it. The writing is OK, the characters are rather flat but not actually cardboard, even if they keep tripping over the used furniture that's been left scattered around.
Michael James Ploof - Whill of Agora
When Whill learns the truth of his lineage, he sets out to face his father's murderer, but what he learns along the way will change his life--and the realm--forever.
Whill is the biggest Gary Stu I've ever met. Really early on we learn that he has a) learnt everything about herbs and remedies b) trained to be an amazingly good fighter c) read loads about elves d) read loads about dwarves ... oh, and he has magical powers too. I laughed all the way through this, regrettably at it rather than with it. In the end, it's moderately competent amateur fiction and nothing more.
Daniel Arenson - Requiem's Song
Weredragons, men call them. Monsters. Cursed ones. People who can turn into beastly reptiles. Together they will forge a nation.
This is a distinct cut above the previous books. There's a nice, if heavy, metaphor where the people who can turn into dragons are being persecuted by just about everyone. It gets a bit messy towards the end, there's some very shonkily told battle scenes, and the characters are a little one note - it could do with focussing a bit closer on one or two, rather than having a significant number of point-of-view characters. The writing is functional but decent, and it gets huge bonus points for trying to do something different.
Kate Sparkes - Bound
When a young woman accidentally saves the life of an enemy Sorcerer, she finds herself drawn into a world of magic that's more beautiful, more seductive, and more dangerous than she ever imagined.
Oh looky here! Bildungsroman! A young girl with magical powers! Fortunately, this continues the upturn in quality - I really enjoyed it. It's got a clarity of world about it that's interesting, and the two main characters are really well drawn. It's a romance as well as a coming-of-age tale, and I'll probably go and buy the next book in the series, and that's the first book in this collection that's really drawn that response from me. It's not going to change the world, but as an unchallenging fantasy-romance thing, it's not at all bad.
David Adams - The Pariahs
Two sellswords--a half-elf and a half-orc--find their war over before it even begins. But trouble is stirring on the home front, conflict which threatens more than just their lives.
A novella, maybe even a novelette. It's kind of fine and rather funny in places, and I like the two main characters, but it all feels rather inconsequential.