Flame of Desire by Rosie Oliver

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Flame of Desire by Rosie Oliver

My mother clutched my hand as she lay under the wreck of the vehicle whose auto-steering had gone crazy. Pain etched heavy lines across her face. Her body trembled. She tugged at my hand for me to come closer.

I bent my face over hers, trying to hold back the blurring tears.

“Promise me…” she whispered.

“Yes, mother?”

“A lit candle… on the table… when boyfriends come to dinner.”

It was a crazy thing to ask for, a small thing to beg of me and I wondered why it was so important to her.

“Promise…”

“Yes, mother.”

She closed her eyes and her hand relaxed, letting go of mine. She died smiling. My tears drowned out the sight of her and much of the days that followed.

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Many thanks, Juliana, Ray and Ratsy for such lovely comments about Flame of Desire. It seems quite a few of my friends liked it. Bless you all.
 
Lovely, understated story with a great beginning, also middle and, oh yes, the end. Many many great lines but this one hit me between the eyes.

We sniggered our way through dinner, laughed our way through romance and ended up living happily on the Moon with three children.

In a thousand years of trying I could not come up with something so, ah, right. Nicely done.
 
Thank you for your lovely comments, Jo, Johnnyjet, Kerry and Droflet. To use an old-fashioned idiom - it warms the cockles of my heart.

A big thanks go to Glitch and his team. Without them, this and so many other wonderful stories might never have seen publication.
 

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