AnyaKimlin
Confuddled
I edited it and now it's about 420 words. My head is in a really funny place for various reasons so I apologise if this is a bigger train wreck than my character believes Holmes and Watson to be:
Sherlock Holmes is an idiot -- turn the page -- seriously, I couldn't live with the self confessed miserable genius. Dr Watson is a bigger idiot for even thinking about it. What happens next... hmm… they've moved into 221B Baker Street. It's a train wreck waiting to happen but like with all good disasters I can't take my eyes off the book because I need to know what they do next. Every few pages there are moments of intelligent writing like when he describes a drop of water and I can envisage the whole Atlantic Ocean on Earth, a planet so far removed from Litae in science, space and time that it stretches believability. But some of the stories in the franchise have me hooked.
I shift a little and Galileo meows his annoyance at being disturbed from the nap which he was taking nestled into the small of my back. He climbs off me and walks up the bed so he can glare at me with his saucer green eyes before treating me to cat butt. His fluffy black tail tickles my face.
“Angus!”
Dad sounds angry – angrier than usual. I shove Galileo out the way. Chapter Two: The Science of Deduction. Apparently Sherlock is freakishly tall, like me and plays the violin, like me, but how can he hope to understand anything if he doesn't know anything about the universe his planet is a part of. I check the front cover for the author's name… and suspect that Arthur Conan Doyle is trying to cheat so he doesn't have to do any major worldbuilding.
“Arse! Out here – now!” This time he punctuated his words with a barrage of knocks.
It's my arse I'm worried about. Had my grandfather still been alive I'd be chained to a post being flogged within an inch of my life. Fortunately, for me, the man the media call King Mouse is on the other side of the door instead and he's never laid a finger on me. The ancient iron key is in the locked position and unlike the digital panel he can't override it – not without knocking down the thick oak door which has stood for eight centuries. Back then the monarchs were more concerned about security than the lamebrain that installed the state of the art system that my father favours. There is enough food in my wardrobe for me to survive a lengthy siege. He doesn't actually know for sure if I'm here, because my GPS chip is telling him I'm studying in the school library.
Sherlock Holmes is an idiot -- turn the page -- seriously, I couldn't live with the self confessed miserable genius. Dr Watson is a bigger idiot for even thinking about it. What happens next... hmm… they've moved into 221B Baker Street. It's a train wreck waiting to happen but like with all good disasters I can't take my eyes off the book because I need to know what they do next. Every few pages there are moments of intelligent writing like when he describes a drop of water and I can envisage the whole Atlantic Ocean on Earth, a planet so far removed from Litae in science, space and time that it stretches believability. But some of the stories in the franchise have me hooked.
I shift a little and Galileo meows his annoyance at being disturbed from the nap which he was taking nestled into the small of my back. He climbs off me and walks up the bed so he can glare at me with his saucer green eyes before treating me to cat butt. His fluffy black tail tickles my face.
“Angus!”
Dad sounds angry – angrier than usual. I shove Galileo out the way. Chapter Two: The Science of Deduction. Apparently Sherlock is freakishly tall, like me and plays the violin, like me, but how can he hope to understand anything if he doesn't know anything about the universe his planet is a part of. I check the front cover for the author's name… and suspect that Arthur Conan Doyle is trying to cheat so he doesn't have to do any major worldbuilding.
“Arse! Out here – now!” This time he punctuated his words with a barrage of knocks.
It's my arse I'm worried about. Had my grandfather still been alive I'd be chained to a post being flogged within an inch of my life. Fortunately, for me, the man the media call King Mouse is on the other side of the door instead and he's never laid a finger on me. The ancient iron key is in the locked position and unlike the digital panel he can't override it – not without knocking down the thick oak door which has stood for eight centuries. Back then the monarchs were more concerned about security than the lamebrain that installed the state of the art system that my father favours. There is enough food in my wardrobe for me to survive a lengthy siege. He doesn't actually know for sure if I'm here, because my GPS chip is telling him I'm studying in the school library.