TitaniumTi
Well-Known Member
Something has happened to my protagonist -- a small hurt and big indignity for a comical character. I'm wondering how to express his response:
He yelped,
"Ouch",
or
Oww...
or something else entirely.
I have two issues here. I'm never sure how many non-words I can sprinkle through my stories without over-using them, but I think "oww", "ahh" etc show, while "he yelped", and "she sighed" tend towards telling.
The second issue is that I'm never certain that readers will hear the non-words as I hear them.
Should I write "oow", "ooww" or "oww"? Should I write "aah", or "ahh"?
Can anybody help me out with a list of non-words and what they mean?
He yelped,
"Ouch",
or
Oww...
or something else entirely.
I have two issues here. I'm never sure how many non-words I can sprinkle through my stories without over-using them, but I think "oww", "ahh" etc show, while "he yelped", and "she sighed" tend towards telling.
The second issue is that I'm never certain that readers will hear the non-words as I hear them.
Should I write "oow", "ooww" or "oww"? Should I write "aah", or "ahh"?
Can anybody help me out with a list of non-words and what they mean?