Kylara
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Been workshopping/editing (very briefly now as they don't return the effort) and lots of problems with people tense hopping, and even worse, not realising or accepting that that is not a good thing, or a correct thing to do in a paragraph!
Anyway, whilst writing and editing my own piece for workshopping next week I came across and interesting dilemma to do with tenses.
In this case it involved "could" as in
"he could walk"
This may just me looking far too much into things and getting all meta, but to me that (very tiny truncated eg of a sentence) reads as both past and future tense. My question here is - am I going crazy, or do you see where I am coming from.
If so - are there any more? Does it have a name? And most vitally, can this tense confusion be a useful technique, or would it annoy/be too artificial to blend in...?
Anyway, whilst writing and editing my own piece for workshopping next week I came across and interesting dilemma to do with tenses.
In this case it involved "could" as in
"he could walk"
This may just me looking far too much into things and getting all meta, but to me that (very tiny truncated eg of a sentence) reads as both past and future tense. My question here is - am I going crazy, or do you see where I am coming from.
If so - are there any more? Does it have a name? And most vitally, can this tense confusion be a useful technique, or would it annoy/be too artificial to blend in...?