Elventine
Trouble
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- Aug 28, 2016
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Without having even looked at you book or series I just can't offer an opinion. As what it comes down to is two questions -
1. Does everything in those books really need to be there in order for the reader to follow the story?
2. Have you over written anything?
Only you or/and a good editor can tell you that.
1. Does everything in those books really need to be there in order for the reader to follow the story?
2. Have you over written anything?
Only you or/and a good editor can tell you that.