David Evil Overlord
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I've recently got my first book into a publishable state, and even got a publisher. The book should be available for preorder on the 19th of November, and fully on sale by the 28th.
Meaning it's too late to change anything.
There is a character, who was only ever meant to be a minor character. She's there to get Our Hero into a difficult situation one day, and that's it.
Now she's going to have a larger role.
In the first book, she had no description beyond being a high school teacher.
In the second book, she's described as: ...all lithe muscle and brass-framed glasses and dandelion-clock hair, and big clunky bracelets that looked like they could maybe probably stop bullets. She looked like her super hero name should be Athletic Nerd Woman.
One thing in this description (maybe more than one, eventually) is absolutely vital for the development of the character.
What I want to know is this - if the character had no physical description in the first book, and you got to the second book and read that, would you be okay with that?
Meaning it's too late to change anything.
There is a character, who was only ever meant to be a minor character. She's there to get Our Hero into a difficult situation one day, and that's it.
Now she's going to have a larger role.
In the first book, she had no description beyond being a high school teacher.
In the second book, she's described as: ...all lithe muscle and brass-framed glasses and dandelion-clock hair, and big clunky bracelets that looked like they could maybe probably stop bullets. She looked like her super hero name should be Athletic Nerd Woman.
One thing in this description (maybe more than one, eventually) is absolutely vital for the development of the character.
What I want to know is this - if the character had no physical description in the first book, and you got to the second book and read that, would you be okay with that?