The Dawn Awakening

TheDawnAwakening2029

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This is the title for my novel series in the making, novel 1 is being written for a 23rd draft now as I have had problems with story structure so far. Any helpful information on story arc and structure would be most appreciated. Thanks
 
I think we're going to need a bit more than that to be any help to you, I'm afraid...
 
This is the title for my novel series in the making, novel 1 is being written for a 23rd draft now as I have had problems with story structure so far. Any helpful information on story arc and structure would be most appreciated. Thanks

Welcome to the chronicles forums. :)

If you want to understand story arcs better, your best book is probably going to be Wonderbook by Jeff Vandermeer - everything from basic to advanced writing tools and technicalities are covered in that, and yet it's a remarkably concise book.
 
Is "Dawn" someone's name? Otherwise the title is very awkward and thematically reiterative. And yeah, there isn't a single-post answer to what you want to know. Getting a book or exploring online is a better bet on such broad subjects. You can definitely inquire on specifics concerning your own work and said subjects here at Chrons, and you'll enjoy good, valuable input.
 
Dawn is the beginning of a new era, awakening is the era beginning to awaken the human race to its potential. It is an end of the world thrilling novel series. Three category five hurricanes make landfall on the US in a five day period. Stretches FEMA to the breaking point. My main character is Jack Irving, a Scottish meteorologist who becomes a hurricane specialist. The action happens between September 23rd to 30th.
 
If you're set on keeping it, "Dawn's Awakening" reads less awkward IMHO.
 
If it's about meteorology and hurricanes, there are quite a few more clever and pertinent titles you could've gone with (I've actually checked and my suggestion of "Dawn's Awakening" is already taken, so never mind that one :whistle:). I still feel the present title is way too generic and cliched (mentioning "dawn" or "awakening" has already been done to death. Both together just beg for reconsideration. And keep in mind that title is, in fact, so generic that it could be used as the title for almost any story involving growth and hope of some kind, which accounts for 95% of all books ever...). Then again, it's not that important at the beginning of the draft process. It'll probably change by the time you finish, so carry on with the more important things and go back to it once the story is fully fleshed out. You'll have a better grip on what could be a more representative and unique title by then. Don't mind my words too much till then :D.
 
But it isn't based on characters as much as it is on three hurricanes making unprecedented landfall on the US.

Be careful with this. I have a book called Inish Carraig, which is the name of a prison in the book and which suits it very well. But which also leaves people scratching their heads wondering what it's all about and, I'm told, puts people off sampling it (although others tell me they picked it up because of the unusual title.) I had a meeting about it a couple of weeks ago with some people who might take the ideas in the book further and they told me, in no uncertain terms, that the title would change to reflect what the story is about (which is an alien invasion).

It's cool to have a title that relates to the book and reflects it - but it's even cooler to have one that people can look at and know what the book is about. (And, that can be unusual - my other series all have Abendau in their title, which screams speculative world stories).

But, honestly, the title of mine that seems to be going down best is my next one. It's called Waters and the Wild, from a well known poem (especially in Ireland) by WB Yeats, about changelings. People see it and the stonking cover (which it's killing not to show to the world yet, but the pretty isn't quite finished) and they know it's a book about fairies, with a female lead. It works. It sells the book. My lesson is well and truly learned. And if anything happens with Inish Carraig - side projects - the book's title would probably change and become previously published as Inish Carraig.

And now, could everyone talk me down from calling its sequel Culchies i spas. :D
 
I also like the title.

And most stories can be saved! The first step is figuring out and acknowledging the problem. 23 drafts does seem extreme, like you don't know where the story is going.

Check out Save the Cat! And the Hero's Journey, two really good books (in my humble opinion) on story structure.

What's your word count on the most recent draft?

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