The Bone Clocks by David Mitchell

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It’s almost impossible to categorise The Bone Clocks – mystery, thriller, science fiction, fantasy, supernatural – there’s a bit of all of them in there even a hint of vampire (though only a hint, no more). I won’t attempt to make any description of the story as it would either have to be full of spoilers or else give no indication whatsoever of what the book is about; indeed it would be more likely to hoodwink the potential reader into thinking it is something completely different to what it actually is.

I have only read one other Mitchell novel – Cloud Atlas – and to some extent the structure of The Bone Clocks does mirror that book. Bone Clocks consists of several separate but linked stories that, this time, follow a linear timeline though spread over several decades. The first story is set in 1984, the second 1991, the third the 2004, the fourth 2015 to 2020, the fifth 2025 and the sixth 2043. The stories are much more closely linked than in Cloud Atlas with a single plot and set of characters spanning all six. However the point of view and style change markedly in each, once again providing Mitchell with a stage to flaunt the extraordinary versatility of his writing. Each section evokes the era in which it is set (though am I the only one who felt some aspects of the first drifted into an earlier ‘70s feel) and changes flavour according to the social and educational status of the central character. They also poke sometimes scathing satire at beliefs, politics and people from each of those periods. Mitchell seems to have particular fun with the fourth part which can itself be split into six distinct sections covering the professional life of its central character, an author, and during which he passes this comment “What surer sign is there that the creative aquifers are dry than a writer creating a writer-character?” Hmm, is this rather too obvious self-deprecation?

Each part of the book moves along briskly enough and yet the earliest parts only drip feed the overarching plot making that plot’s early progress positively glacial which may be an issue for some readers. There is also a significant imbalance between the parts; the fourth part, the author’s story, though an enjoyable if rather dark read in its own right, contributes almost nothing to the greater story leaving me wondering if this was really pure self-indulgence on Mitchell’s part. He clearly had a lot of fun making his digs at this era and at his own profession as well as at the world of publishing, but really the overall story would be pretty much unaffected by its complete omission. The final part also had little to do with the overall story which really ended on page 519 in my edition with the final 93 pages serving little purpose other than to provide a platform for Mitchell to launch a diatribe on humanities poor custodianship of our planet. However true and necessary that diatribe might be, its relevance to this book is at best tenuous.

I am left with something of a dilemma; I loved reading Mitchell’s prose and by the end of the third part I was convinced I was reading my favourite book of the year. I loved everything about it, including the relative rarity of its coy revelations about the bigger picture and even the sometimes odious nature of some of the main characters. And yet I cannot ignore how the plot lost its way in the author’s story and the final ecological sermon. This alone pulls it down to the four star rating I’m giving it.

4/5 stars
 
I got really annoyed by the author bit, so much so that I haven't read the rest of it.

I liked Cloud Atlas but my favourite is number9dream, which has a definite Murakami feel to it in the writing, as well as being set in Japan.
 
I got really annoyed by the author bit, so much so that I haven't read the rest of it.

I liked Cloud Atlas but my favourite is number9dream, which has a definite Murakami feel to it in the writing, as well as being set in Japan.
Shame really. I agree it was the worst part but if you still have the book then the next section is really the most important plot-wise and is much better than the author section.
 
I got really annoyed by the author bit, so much so that I haven't read the rest of it.

I liked Cloud Atlas but my favourite is number9dream, which has a definite Murakami feel to it in the writing, as well as being set in Japan.

You might find Jack London's The Star Rover to be of interest.
 
Shame really. I agree it was the worst part but if you still have the book then the next section is really the most important plot-wise and is much better than the author section.

It's on my Kindle, along with another that I got far too annoyed with to finish - Reamde ;)
 
The final part also had little to do with the overall story which really ended on page 519 in my edition with the final 93 pages serving little purpose other than to provide a platform for Mitchell to launch a diatribe on humanities poor custodianship of our planet. However true and necessary that diatribe might be, its relevance to this book is at best tenuous.

I agree it was a bit disconnected from the rest of the book, although taken on its own merits I did like the final section. I think it does have some thematic relevance to the rest of the book, I think the idea might be to contrast the willingness of the book's villains to extend their life no matter what the cost with humanity's own willingness to sacrifice the future of the planet for their short-term comfort.

It's on my Kindle, along with another that I got far too annoyed with to finish - Reamde ;)

I did finish Reamde, but unlike The Bone Clocks I don't think it particularly improves towards the end.
 
Good review. I wasn't that taken with it, especially towards the end, and the fantasy aspect felt a bit tacked-on and phoned-in, like that of many literary authors who have a go at fantasy without having been fully steeped in it (Mitchell was a fantasy fan in his youth, but I'm not sure he's read much since, though his writing has always played with it a little).

I think my favourite is also Number9Dream, to my mind easily the best book I've come across written in first-person present, and one of the few that does justice to its possibilities (and doesn't just read like a past-tense version translated into present, as in The Hunger Games which came later and started the craze for it).

He is an astonishingly gifted writer, but he does like to "play", and this can seem a bit self-indulgent. I'd like to see him push that to one side and get properly serious at some point.
 
I agree it was a bit disconnected from the rest of the book, although taken on its own merits I did like the final section. I think it does have some thematic relevance to the rest of the book, I think the idea might be to contrast the willingness of the book's villains to extend their life no matter what the cost with humanity's own willingness to sacrifice the future of the planet for their short-term comfort.
Well yes as I said the connection is a bit tenuous. And, yes, taken alone it would make a nice little ecological apocalyptic story. So, purely on it's own merits, a nice little short story but, as a conclusion to the bigger story, it was simply wrong; it was not an ending, that had already been provided in the previous section. I think an epilogue would still have been needed but not 93 pages of it.
 
Good review. I wasn't that taken with it, especially towards the end, and the fantasy aspect felt a bit tacked-on and phoned-in, like that of many literary authors who have a go at fantasy without having been fully steeped in it (Mitchell was a fantasy fan in his youth, but I'm not sure he's read much since, though his writing has always played with it a little).

I think my favourite is also Number9Dream, to my mind easily the best book I've come across written in first-person present, and one of the few that does justice to its possibilities (and doesn't just read like a past-tense version translated into present, as in The Hunger Games which came later and started the craze for it).

He is an astonishingly gifted writer, but he does like to "play", and this can seem a bit self-indulgent. I'd like to see him push that to one side and get properly serious at some point.
I think your last point is absolutely spot on, and sums up perfectly both why I like his writing and why it sometimes annoys me.
 

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